Fiction: Natalie's Big Day Out

Paradigm · 06-21-2013, 09:54 PM

I was reading Jappio's new story (I'm a big fan

) and I wanted to write my own choose your own adventure, so here it is! I hope you enjoy.

Natalie is my name. I am a sixteen year old girl with D cup breasts and a height of 5"8'. My straight blonde hair reaches my shoulders. This is my story. It started when I was

A) In the woods
B) At school
C) Home alone

mikey555 · 06-21-2013, 10:01 PM

i will go with c

Paradigm · 06-21-2013, 11:58 PM

I will close the voting after two or three days, so I'll leave it open for many people

onix · 06-22-2013, 02:30 AM

I will vote A

(2-3 days is a bit long to wait)

Paradigm · 06-22-2013, 03:55 AM

What about one day?

kmacroxs · 06-22-2013, 05:14 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Paradigm

What about one day?

It's a bit too short. Try closing the voting on 6/23 at 4 PM GMT. Or give a day and a half for voting.

Just to go against myself, I will choose C.

Paradigm · 06-23-2013, 11:09 PM

2)
I was wearing a dressing gown over my sky blue bra and matching blue panties. I had just had a shower and was lounging around in front of the television, glad to not be at school. Then I heard a knock at the front door. I opened it, to see
1) The mail woman.
2) My best friend.
3) Nobody.

(Sorry, the chapters will get longer. I promise)

mikey555 · 06-24-2013, 12:07 AM

i pick the number 1 good sir

Memories for Life · 06-24-2013, 07:22 AM

You've haven't posted a "chapter" yet! If you're only going to write 3 or 4 sentence paragraphs then voting needs to max out at 24 hours!

If you are a big "fan" of Jappio, it would be best to ask his opinion of what you've "written" so far!

thefunman · 06-24-2013, 07:27 AM

at school is my choice

onix · 06-24-2013, 09:02 AM

I like the sound of c

Paradigm · 06-27-2013, 11:59 PM

I'm so sorry, I may not be able to continue. Something REALLY BIG has just happened in my life and it's taking up all of my free time. I'm so sorry. I might be able to continue this later in my life, but for now I need to be there for a friend of mine. Again, I am extremely apologetic. Thank you all for understanding.

kmacroxs · 06-28-2013, 05:56 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Paradigm

I'm so sorry, I may not be able to continue. Something REALLY BIG has just happened in my life and it's taking up all of my free time. I'm so sorry. I might be able to continue this later in my life, but for now I need to be there for a friend of mine. Again, I am extremely apologetic. Thank you all for understanding.

Darn, this story could have gone on to be one of the greats. Oh well. I hope you can find the time to come back after the situation is taken care of. I wish you and your friend the best of luck in said situation.

Paradigm · 08-01-2013, 06:38 PM

Hey all, I think I am in the right mind set to continue. The issue is being resolved, and my friend managed to not attempt suicide no matter how many depressing thoughts were being thrown at them.

Anyway, I shall continue, and due to the fact that it was a tie, I will pick option two because I flipped a coin.

"Hello May!" I enthusiastically said, "What are you doing here?"
"I just thought I'd stop by," was May's reply, "May I come in?"
"Of course," I stepped to the side to let my best friend in.

May was a short 16 year old that stood at 5'7"cm. She had long, straight brown hair that fell over her C cup breasts and reached her belly button. She walked to my bedroom, and flopped onto my bed.

"Want to play a game?" she asked me.
"Sure, what sort of game?" I replied.
"Truth or dare," May replied.
"Okay, I'll start," I said, eager to try and embarrass my friend, "Truth or dare?"
"Truth."
"Do you masturbate?" I blurted out.
"This is only our first game and that was a bit, uncalled for," May began, "However, I like this side of you. Yes, on occasion I do masturbate. Truth or dare?"
"I choose dare," I unhesitatingly said, trying to get May out of her shell yet forgetting how little she was wearing.

1) "I dare you to take off your robe. After all, it's quite rude to be wearing something so improper."
2) "I dare you to take off all your clothes except for your robe."
3) "Sorry, that's my alarm on my phone. I have to go now, but if you come with me then we can keep playing the game."

Is that long enough for everybody? The chapters WILL get longer if you want them to.

kmacroxs · 08-01-2013, 08:49 PM

I have to go with option 3. It sounds like the best option.

06-21-2013, 09:54 PM	#1
Paradigm Member Join Date: Jun 2013 Location: In my dreams Posts: 39	Natalie's Big Day Out I was reading Jappio's new story (I'm a big fan) and I wanted to write my own choose your own adventure, so here it is! I hope you enjoy. Natalie is my name. I am a sixteen year old girl with D cup breasts and a height of 5"8'. My straight blonde hair reaches my shoulders. This is my story. It started when I was A) In the woods B) At school C) Home alone Last edited by Paradigm; 06-22-2013 at 03:18 PM. Reason: Sorry, I made a mistake

06-21-2013, 10:01 PM	#2
mikey555 Account Banned Join Date: May 2011 Posts: 18	vote for the story i will go with c

06-24-2013, 12:07 AM	#8
mikey555 Account Banned Join Date: May 2011 Posts: 18	Vote for story i pick the number 1 good sir

08-01-2013, 08:49 PM	#15
kmacroxs Distinguished Member Join Date: Feb 2010 Location: USA Posts: 625	I have to go with option 3. It sounds like the best option. __________________ "I know not what course others may take; but as for me, give me liberty, or give me death" - Patrick Henry - March 23, 1775 Justin Bieber sucks (not what I really wanted to say). Spoiler: Justin Bieber's voice -> my ears get raped Spoiler: me: "make it stop, make it stop, please make it stop"

06-21-2013, 11:58 PM	#3
Paradigm Member Join Date: Jun 2013 Location: In my dreams Posts: 39	I will close the voting after two or three days, so I'll leave it open for many people

06-22-2013, 02:30 AM	#4
onix Member Join Date: Dec 2012 Location: UK Posts: 31	I will vote A (2-3 days is a bit long to wait)

06-22-2013, 03:55 AM	#5
Paradigm Member Join Date: Jun 2013 Location: In my dreams Posts: 39	What about one day?

06-23-2013, 11:09 PM	#7
Paradigm Member Join Date: Jun 2013 Location: In my dreams Posts: 39	2) I was wearing a dressing gown over my sky blue bra and matching blue panties. I had just had a shower and was lounging around in front of the television, glad to not be at school. Then I heard a knock at the front door. I opened it, to see 1) The mail woman. 2) My best friend. 3) Nobody. (Sorry, the chapters will get longer. I promise)

06-24-2013, 07:22 AM	#9
Memories for Life getDare Devil Join Date: Mar 2010 Location: Jacksonville, FL Posts: 1,012	You've haven't posted a "chapter" yet! If you're only going to write 3 or 4 sentence paragraphs then voting needs to max out at 24 hours! If you are a big "fan" of Jappio, it would be best to ask his opinion of what you've "written" so far!

06-24-2013, 07:27 AM	#10
thefunman getDare Succubus Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: Florida, USA Posts: 1,766	at school is my choice

06-24-2013, 09:02 AM	#11
onix Member Join Date: Dec 2012 Location: UK Posts: 31	I like the sound of c

06-27-2013, 11:59 PM	#12
Paradigm Member Join Date: Jun 2013 Location: In my dreams Posts: 39	I'm so sorry, I may not be able to continue. Something REALLY BIG has just happened in my life and it's taking up all of my free time. I'm so sorry. I might be able to continue this later in my life, but for now I need to be there for a friend of mine. Again, I am extremely apologetic. Thank you all for understanding.

08-01-2013, 06:38 PM	#14
Paradigm Member Join Date: Jun 2013 Location: In my dreams Posts: 39	Hey all, I think I am in the right mind set to continue. The issue is being resolved, and my friend managed to not attempt suicide no matter how many depressing thoughts were being thrown at them. Anyway, I shall continue, and due to the fact that it was a tie, I will pick option two because I flipped a coin. "Hello May!" I enthusiastically said, "What are you doing here?" "I just thought I'd stop by," was May's reply, "May I come in?" "Of course," I stepped to the side to let my best friend in. May was a short 16 year old that stood at 5'7"cm. She had long, straight brown hair that fell over her C cup breasts and reached her belly button. She walked to my bedroom, and flopped onto my bed. "Want to play a game?" she asked me. "Sure, what sort of game?" I replied. "Truth or dare," May replied. "Okay, I'll start," I said, eager to try and embarrass my friend, "Truth or dare?" "Truth." "Do you masturbate?" I blurted out. "This is only our first game and that was a bit, uncalled for," May began, "However, I like this side of you. Yes, on occasion I do masturbate. Truth or dare?" "I choose dare," I unhesitatingly said, trying to get May out of her shell yet forgetting how little she was wearing. 1) "I dare you to take off your robe. After all, it's quite rude to be wearing something so improper." 2) "I dare you to take off all your clothes except for your robe." 3) "Sorry, that's my alarm on my phone. I have to go now, but if you come with me then we can keep playing the game." Is that long enough for everybody? The chapters WILL get longer if you want them to.