How Harry's life was ruined by ten-year olds [FICTION]

Officelover · 05-31-2008, 11:56 AM

*Note: Some ideas stolen from LosingBet

Part one

Harry was a pretty normal kid. He once had a sleepover. He invited 4 boys (Frank, Tom, Bob, and Bill), and 5 girls (Lucy, Mary, Sarah, Becca, and Rachel). They were really bored. Then Frank suggested, "How about we play Truth or Dare?"

Everyone agreed. They sat down on the ground in a circle, and Frank said, "All right. Harry, Truth or Dare?" Harry was used only to playing lame versions of this game, so he chose "Dare." Frank said, "All right. I dare you to strip down to your boxers." He was very embarrased, but he did so. It was torture.

This game was going very fast. In one hour everyone except for Rachel was naked.

It was her turn and she was forced to chose Dare. Lucy asked her, "Go to Harry's kid brother's room, and steal whatever pajamas he's wearing. You can if you want, wear these. If you get caught by him, you go the rest of the game naked.

She was lucky. Lucifer, Harry's brother, was a very sound sleeper. He was ten, and he was wearing pajamas. She easily removed his clothes. She had a digital camera with her and she took pictures of him naked. It was hilarious.

She went back, and the game went on.

The game ended, and the girls went home. The next day, she posted Lucifer's pictures on a blog, and all over the internet. Thus, with that seemingly irrelevant action of daring Rachel to get Lucifer's clothes, Harry's life went down the tubes.

(I WILL WRITE MORE LATER! COMMENTS PLEASE!)

Zeromus · 05-31-2008, 12:20 PM

could be good.. just dont steal too many ideas.

coolio5 · 05-31-2008, 12:35 PM

this idea has been used before in a story, so don't copy someone else's ideas

be creative don't rely on someone else

Trystaan · 05-31-2008, 12:47 PM

You have just stole ideas and you already have one story. Why don't you finish that one before starting a new one especially using others plots.

LosingBet · 05-31-2008, 08:18 PM

Stealing is such a harsh word. Dont worry, he asked me before he made the post and I allowed him to make a story.
Just make sure what the little bro does to his older brother is different than my story.
Very good so far!

Officelover · 06-01-2008, 03:27 AM

Thank you. I'm sorry. I'm not trying to steal a lot, it's just the way my mind (annoyingly) works. I shop around for ideas, then I steal them and turn them into other stories. I'm trying to elaborate on what happens later, and I'm trying to make the story moderately different from LosingBet's. I'm sorry everyone. Thank you for the advice. I'll try not to seal as much in the future.

05-31-2008, 11:56 AM	#1
Officelover Truth or Dare Enthusiast Join Date: May 2008 Location: New England Posts: 2,602 Blog Entries: 107	How Harry's life was ruined by ten-year olds [FICTION] *Note: Some ideas stolen from LosingBet Part one Harry was a pretty normal kid. He once had a sleepover. He invited 4 boys (Frank, Tom, Bob, and Bill), and 5 girls (Lucy, Mary, Sarah, Becca, and Rachel). They were really bored. Then Frank suggested, "How about we play Truth or Dare?" Everyone agreed. They sat down on the ground in a circle, and Frank said, "All right. Harry, Truth or Dare?" Harry was used only to playing lame versions of this game, so he chose "Dare." Frank said, "All right. I dare you to strip down to your boxers." He was very embarrased, but he did so. It was torture. This game was going very fast. In one hour everyone except for Rachel was naked. It was her turn and she was forced to chose Dare. Lucy asked her, "Go to Harry's kid brother's room, and steal whatever pajamas he's wearing. You can if you want, wear these. If you get caught by him, you go the rest of the game naked. She was lucky. Lucifer, Harry's brother, was a very sound sleeper. He was ten, and he was wearing pajamas. She easily removed his clothes. She had a digital camera with her and she took pictures of him naked. It was hilarious. She went back, and the game went on. The game ended, and the girls went home. The next day, she posted Lucifer's pictures on a blog, and all over the internet. Thus, with that seemingly irrelevant action of daring Rachel to get Lucifer's clothes, Harry's life went down the tubes. (I WILL WRITE MORE LATER! COMMENTS PLEASE!) __________________ 20 Trans Femme Nonbinary Ass Collector Writes Poetry On Aluminum Foil with Gold Gel Pens Fills Mason Jar with Vodka I'm Doing A Cleanse White Kid with Black Nails

05-31-2008, 12:20 PM	#2
Zeromus getDare Devil Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Another moon. Posts: 1,083 Blog Entries: 12	could be good.. just dont steal too many ideas. __________________ *Due to the innate funness of trivia, I too have a contest. Mine will be focused on gaming, with a few grab bag questions. Here's an easy one. (name the game this quote came from) "Where's the oh so pleasant sound of someone getting impaled?"

05-31-2008, 12:47 PM	#4
Trystaan getDare Succubus Join Date: Jan 2008 Posts: 1,536 Blog Entries: 17	You have just stole ideas and you already have one story. Why don't you finish that one before starting a new one especially using others plots. __________________

05-31-2008, 08:18 PM	#5
LosingBet Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2007 Posts: 163	Stealing is such a harsh word. Dont worry, he asked me before he made the post and I allowed him to make a story. Just make sure what the little bro does to his older brother is different than my story. Very good so far! __________________ Email me if interested in slave/ master with me or for any dares you want me to do. Limits: Poop, Family, Gross, Public Likes: Embarrassing, Underwear

06-01-2008, 03:27 AM	#6
Officelover Truth or Dare Enthusiast Join Date: May 2008 Location: New England Posts: 2,602 Blog Entries: 107	Thank you Thank you. I'm sorry. I'm not trying to steal a lot, it's just the way my mind (annoyingly) works. I shop around for ideas, then I steal them and turn them into other stories. I'm trying to elaborate on what happens later, and I'm trying to make the story moderately different from LosingBet's. I'm sorry everyone. Thank you for the advice. I'll try not to seal as much in the future. __________________ 20 Trans Femme Nonbinary Ass Collector Writes Poetry On Aluminum Foil with Gold Gel Pens Fills Mason Jar with Vodka I'm Doing A Cleanse White Kid with Black Nails

05-31-2008, 12:35 PM	#3
coolio5 Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Pennsylvania, U.S. Posts: 223 Blog Entries: 1	this idea has been used before in a story, so don't copy someone else's ideas be creative don't rely on someone else