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06-28-2012, 01:23 AM | #1 |
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Strip Study
So this is my first time ever writing a story, and it probably isn't very good as a result of that, but I wanted to try it out anyway, so I'll put down the first few parts to it and depending on how things are reviewed (whether you like it or not), i may complete the story. This is partly based on reality, although most is made up (I'm sure you will all be able to work out what's real and what's not). I've written about three pages on Word so far, and it's not finished, but probably won't be too long. Anyway, before I get carried away and write a whole story about this story, let's get into the actual story, so here is the first page:
--------------------------------------------------------------------- Today in my maths lecture an attractive girl came in late and asked if there was anyone sitting in the empty seat next to me. I told her there wasn’t and so she went to take it. As she slid past in front of me to get there, I managed to catch a glimpse of her panties sticking out the top of her jeans, lace. She was tall and slim, a brunette with her hair tied up onto the back of her head, almost French in appearance, and with some kind of European accent. Dressed in jeans, a frilly white top and of course the lace panties. On the back of her blouse was a semi-transparent triangle through which it was clear she didn’t have a bra on. When the lecture was over we both got up to go and I caught another glimpse of her lace underwear, just peaking through the top of those tight jeans. Walking away she tapped me on the back, her hand warm. “Is this yours?” She asked, holding out my pen. I thanked her and we both walked out onto the main walkway of the university together. It turns out she was studying Chemistry and indeed was originally from France. We made it to the library and soon found ourselves booked into one of the private study rooms. It was then that she introduced me to the idea of strip studying. Together we would attempt the Maths homework questions, and the person to finish the question last would be required to remove an article of clothing. Confirming my suspicion that she was braless, she stated that we were each wearing three items of clothing, however there were 10 questions to complete. As such, it was decided that once one person was stripped naked they would then receive a dare for each question they lost, increasing in difficulty with each dare. Additionally, should we both become nude, each win would earn you the choice between either giving the other a dare, or putting back on an item of clothing. The game began and I was pleased to win the first question, feeling certain that I would soon get to see the entirety of her underwear. She stood up and in one smooth motion, dropped her jeans and underwear to the ground, quickly stepping out of them and removing the panties before pulling back on the jeans. I was so shocked at the speed with which it all happened that I barely even saw her legs let alone the ultimate prize that lay between them, other than to notice that she had no tan-line and had trimmed her pubic hair into a small landing strip shape. She gave me a quick smirk and threw her underwear onto the table, revealing that they were indeed lace, and very much transparent, making it now obvious as to why she had chosen to keep her jeans instead. Moving onto the second and third questions, the thought of what she had just done was playing on my mind and distracting me a great deal. Subsequently I lost these two rounds and soon found myself in just my underwear, the one item of clothing I had managed to get off of her. Already I had a raging erection causing a large tent shape in the front of my underwear, much to her amusement. However this amusement quickly turned to dismay when I won the next round and she realised that she must now expose either her breasts or vagina. Hesitantly she removed her top and her bare breasts came into my view for the first time. They were amply sized with perfect little pink nipples. She undid her hair in the hopes it would cover these perfect mounds a bit, but rather it just hung over the top quarter, still revealing a beautiful chest. Hopefully someone likes it, and if you do, then I will put up some more of what I've got, and try to write some more of it |
06-28-2012, 09:02 AM | #2 |
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It's great so far! Please keep it going!
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06-28-2012, 02:48 PM | #3 |
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Brilliant so far! Sounds like it could get interesting
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06-29-2012, 11:55 AM | #4 |
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Great
Keep it going, that has a ton of potential, is it all fiction?
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I know it won't go for very long, but I wasn't really actually planning on putting it online anywhere, and didn't expect anyone to like it, so it probably won't be a very long story. If I do end up finishing it and people like it I might try and write another story that is a bit longer next time. Thanks for the positive feedback, i'll put up the next page of it today. I could do the rest of what I have written, but I'm not very good when it comes to being motivated to write, so I need to spread it out to give me time to write the rest of it. Otherwise I would put up half of it today and then you would all have to wait a few weeks, or even months before you got another part.
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