Hell At My Girlfriend's House [FICTION]

splat · 09-14-2007, 09:17 AM

Ok- This is my first truth or dare story so feedback and tips would really help! Thanks!
It happened last year, when I was 18. I did gymnastics and I was quite slim but strong.
My girlfriend had always been slightly strange, she was pretty and kind, but sometimes she got carried away. I don't know why I kept going out with her, I suppose I would feel guilty if I let her go, and I suppose I loved her.
One Monday, in the October holidays she invited me to come and stay at hers, as her parents were away for three weeks. I agreed and I brought my things over later that day.
I made her pasta after hunting around her kitchen. She ate it eagerly and I watched her, eating mine at the same time. We talked and watched a film after that. She shuffled closer to me and lay her head on my chest. I put my arm around her shoulders, she sighed and then suddenly sat upright.
"What next?" She said. I was slightly confused, then I answered-
"Um, Why dont we get Drake round?"
"Dan?"
"Um, Yea?"
"Thats....A good idea!"
I looked at her blankly as she typed his number into the red phone. Seconds later she informed me he was coming round in half an hour.
[How is it?]

splat · 09-14-2007, 09:28 AM

[Just want to add then next short bit]
She settled back down beside me, and as I wrapped my arm around her waist she lent over to kiss me. I stroked her hair and we kissed for several minutes. I slipped my hand under her shirt and managed to, with great effort, untie her bra strap, I pulled it off, and she, in the mood, pulled her shirt off, and mine. I started to have an erection as we french kissed. My dick bulged as I pulled her closer, suddenly the doorbell rang. I sat up, as she pulled her bra on and her shirt, just as I pulled my shirt and jumper on. Drake rang it again and I ran to the door as my girlfriend, Flora, struggled to do up her bra in panic. I opened the door and Drake flew in. I stood in his way as he tried to get into the sitting room.
"Flora's just...um...clearing up the popcorn. We spilt it."
"Right...."
"Come on in!" Called Floras shaky voice.
I sighed my relief as Drake raced into the room.

Kumquat250 · 09-14-2007, 12:01 PM

it's good keep it going!!!

hurry up too...not to rush you when's the next part coming out?

splat · 09-14-2007, 02:09 PM

[Hey, thanks! What just happend?! I wrote a really long entry and it didnt post!!!!] Im devistated! wtf.

Marc · 09-14-2007, 02:13 PM

there's a 10,000 character limit.... did you exceed it?

splat · 09-14-2007, 02:33 PM

Hehe. Probally. Thanks.
Its late now so i will write tomoz. thanks.

09-14-2007, 09:17 AM	#1
splat Junior Member Join Date: Sep 2007 Posts: 11	Hell At My Girlfriend's House [FICTION] Ok- This is my first truth or dare story so feedback and tips would really help! Thanks! It happened last year, when I was 18. I did gymnastics and I was quite slim but strong. My girlfriend had always been slightly strange, she was pretty and kind, but sometimes she got carried away. I don't know why I kept going out with her, I suppose I would feel guilty if I let her go, and I suppose I loved her. One Monday, in the October holidays she invited me to come and stay at hers, as her parents were away for three weeks. I agreed and I brought my things over later that day. I made her pasta after hunting around her kitchen. She ate it eagerly and I watched her, eating mine at the same time. We talked and watched a film after that. She shuffled closer to me and lay her head on my chest. I put my arm around her shoulders, she sighed and then suddenly sat upright. "What next?" She said. I was slightly confused, then I answered- "Um, Why dont we get Drake round?" "Dan?" "Um, Yea?" "Thats....A good idea!" I looked at her blankly as she typed his number into the red phone. Seconds later she informed me he was coming round in half an hour. [How is it?]

09-14-2007, 02:09 PM	#4
splat Junior Member Join Date: Sep 2007 Posts: 11	wtf? [Hey, thanks! What just happend?! I wrote a really long entry and it didnt post!!!!] Im devistated! wtf.

09-14-2007, 02:13 PM	#5
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09-14-2007, 09:28 AM	#2
splat Junior Member Join Date: Sep 2007 Posts: 11	[Just want to add then next short bit] She settled back down beside me, and as I wrapped my arm around her waist she lent over to kiss me. I stroked her hair and we kissed for several minutes. I slipped my hand under her shirt and managed to, with great effort, untie her bra strap, I pulled it off, and she, in the mood, pulled her shirt off, and mine. I started to have an erection as we french kissed. My dick bulged as I pulled her closer, suddenly the doorbell rang. I sat up, as she pulled her bra on and her shirt, just as I pulled my shirt and jumper on. Drake rang it again and I ran to the door as my girlfriend, Flora, struggled to do up her bra in panic. I opened the door and Drake flew in. I stood in his way as he tried to get into the sitting room. "Flora's just...um...clearing up the popcorn. We spilt it." "Right...." "Come on in!" Called Floras shaky voice. I sighed my relief as Drake raced into the room.

09-14-2007, 12:01 PM	#3
Kumquat250 Member Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: US Posts: 64	it's good keep it going!!! hurry up too...not to rush you when's the next part coming out?

09-14-2007, 02:33 PM	#6
splat Junior Member Join Date: Sep 2007 Posts: 11	Hehe. Probally. Thanks. Its late now so i will write tomoz. thanks.