Fiction: Sold to the prince

MasterMind121 · 06-19-2012, 01:01 PM

This is a story I am working on IT'S NOT REAL AND I'M NOT A CHARACTER IN IT. It's the first person narration of a young girl who is bought by a prince and she becomes his slave. It uses poetic language and so not everything is literal. Look at the footnotes or you won't understand anything.Please enjoy and comment!

I: The Bid

They led me on, leashed like a dog
My bare feet felt the scorching sand
My arms covered all that they could
But my Heart* and Star** were exposed

To the poles I was tightly tied
On the altar I was alone
Being presented to the bidders
I was no longer a human

Thrice whipped so I would turn around
And twice more so I'd touch the ground
O' how hey bid, O' how they cheered
For my young, round and tender Heart

Like a waterfall my tears came
When my Star was rubbed, slapped and smacked
The pain caused my Star to burst Juice
A golden warmth down both my legs

My Heart was whipped with leather tongues
One time and twice and thrice and more
The more they whipped the more Juice ran
Until I stood in my own lake

But I was saved when a man
And grabbed my hair and then cried out:
"I bid five hundred. I have won."
Indeed he did: I was all his

*Heart: butt/ass it's called a heart because, well, a pretty bum looks like a heart

** Star: vagina, it's called a star because it's so beautiful and everyone wants to touch one ^^

II: HOW TO PLEASE

By leash he led me to his home
There I bowed and kissed his black boots
For I was all for his to keep
I depended on his mercy

He tapped my raised Heart with his cane
Then he smiled and lifted my chin
He was quite young, but fair and strong
I was naked before a Prince.

"Please me, Pet, and I will be kind"
He said as he knelt by my side
I kissed hi boots but he stopped me
"No. You must learn first. Follow me."

The Prince took me to a courtyard
There he called "Hog!" and a girl came
She was my age, but fat and red
She lay down and raised her Heart

"Hog, up on all fours" cried the Prince
Her tongue came out, her Twins* hung low
Her Heart well high, her legs apart
"Hog, show my new Pet how to please."

Hog crawled slowly towards the Prince
And seamlessly pulled down his pants
What I saw I had never seen
But I knew it was his Sceptre**

O' how strong it was! O' how thick!
O' my small Twins became so firm!
And O' my Star became so moist!
T'was my first time to feel that way

What next I saw I thought quite odd:
Hog put the Sceptre in her mouth
And then she swallowed it in and out
T'was too big: she looked so stupid

O' how silly she looks I thought
I tried not to, but I giggled
Hog lost focus with my laughter
And so she bit his large Sceptre

The Prince pulled back and kicked her face
Hog bowed and kissed his boots in fear
But the Prince kicked his Hog again
"I will punish you, filthy Hog!"

The Prince picked me up, face-to-face
And both his hands spread wide my Heart
"Stand beneath her, open you mouth"
The Hog obeyed, she opened wide

He ferociously rubbed my Star
Faster and faster, the Prince rubbed
I struggled hard to hold the tears
So instead they poured from my Star

The golden Juice in her mouth fell
I felt so bad and it felt so good
But when I ran out of all my Juice
The Prince gently put me down

"Hog retire, your cage's unlocked.
And you my Pet, forgive Hog's act
She sometimes fails to please her Man.
Now come Pet, I will prepare you."

*Twins: boobs/breasts
**Sceptre: penis

fullofsecrets · 06-19-2012, 06:04 PM

Odd but delightful and intriguing.

Kinsey · 06-20-2012, 09:20 AM

It reminds me of Orhan Pamuk's most fantasically fabulous Nobel Prize winning novel I Am Red.

Submissive9 · 07-02-2012, 02:54 PM

It's nice! Please continue

link99999135 · 08-12-2012, 09:24 PM

PlEase keep going

googly · 03-30-2013, 06:36 AM

Dang it he got banned

06-19-2012, 01:01 PM	#1
MasterMind121 Account Banned Join Date: Jun 2011 Posts: 4 Blog Entries: 2	Sold to the prince This is a story I am working on IT'S NOT REAL AND I'M NOT A CHARACTER IN IT. It's the first person narration of a young girl who is bought by a prince and she becomes his slave. It uses poetic language and so not everything is literal. Look at the footnotes or you won't understand anything.Please enjoy and comment! I: The Bid They led me on, leashed like a dog My bare feet felt the scorching sand My arms covered all that they could But my Heart* and Star** were exposed To the poles I was tightly tied On the altar I was alone Being presented to the bidders I was no longer a human Thrice whipped so I would turn around And twice more so I'd touch the ground O' how hey bid, O' how they cheered For my young, round and tender Heart Like a waterfall my tears came When my Star was rubbed, slapped and smacked The pain caused my Star to burst Juice A golden warmth down both my legs My Heart was whipped with leather tongues One time and twice and thrice and more The more they whipped the more Juice ran Until I stood in my own lake But I was saved when a man And grabbed my hair and then cried out: "I bid five hundred. I have won." Indeed he did: I was all his Heart: butt/ass it's called a heart because, well, a pretty bum looks like a heart * Star: vagina, it's called a star because it's so beautiful and everyone wants to touch one ^^ II: HOW TO PLEASE By leash he led me to his home There I bowed and kissed his black boots For I was all for his to keep I depended on his mercy He tapped my raised Heart with his cane Then he smiled and lifted my chin He was quite young, but fair and strong I was naked before a Prince. "Please me, Pet, and I will be kind" He said as he knelt by my side I kissed hi boots but he stopped me "No. You must learn first. Follow me." The Prince took me to a courtyard There he called "Hog!" and a girl came She was my age, but fat and red She lay down and raised her Heart "Hog, up on all fours" cried the Prince Her tongue came out, her Twins* hung low Her Heart well high, her legs apart "Hog, show my new Pet how to please." Hog crawled slowly towards the Prince And seamlessly pulled down his pants What I saw I had never seen But I knew it was his Sceptre** O' how strong it was! O' how thick! O' my small Twins became so firm! And O' my Star became so moist! T'was my first time to feel that way What next I saw I thought quite odd: Hog put the Sceptre in her mouth And then she swallowed it in and out T'was too big: she looked so stupid O' how silly she looks I thought I tried not to, but I giggled Hog lost focus with my laughter And so she bit his large Sceptre The Prince pulled back and kicked her face Hog bowed and kissed his boots in fear But the Prince kicked his Hog again "I will punish you, filthy Hog!" The Prince picked me up, face-to-face And both his hands spread wide my Heart "Stand beneath her, open you mouth" The Hog obeyed, she opened wide He ferociously rubbed my Star Faster and faster, the Prince rubbed I struggled hard to hold the tears So instead they poured from my Star The golden Juice in her mouth fell I felt so bad and it felt so good But when I ran out of all my Juice The Prince gently put me down "Hog retire, your cage's unlocked. And you my Pet, forgive Hog's act She sometimes fails to please her Man. Now come Pet, I will prepare you." Twins: boobs/breasts *Sceptre: penis __________________ My goal is to train the perfect slave in mind and soul, to make her learn where her place is and who is in command

06-19-2012, 06:04 PM	#2
fullofsecrets Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2011 Location: USA Posts: 206	Odd but delightful and intriguing. __________________ I am the author of "A Hidden Voice" and "Immoral Teaching". Thank you for everyone's comments on my writing. And my stories do not continue without comments. That means no new parts till there are new comments

06-20-2012, 09:20 AM	#3
Kinsey Member Join Date: May 2012 Location: UK Posts: 37	very good It reminds me of Orhan Pamuk's most fantasically fabulous Nobel Prize winning novel I Am Red.

08-12-2012, 09:24 PM	#5
link99999135 Account Banned Join Date: May 2012 Posts: 204	PlEase keep going __________________ LOVES: CUM EATING Likes: spiders, coffee, duct tape bondage, dogs, puppies, diapers, fire, eggs, wetting myself Limits: permenent damage, scat, public, cream cheese I'm SUCH a cum eating whore. Desperate to have guys cuming all over my face and in both my holes. Will do every dare pmed to me

03-30-2013, 06:36 AM	#6
googly Junior Member Join Date: Oct 2012 Posts: 4	Dang it he got banned __________________ Likes: duck tape, urine drinking, pet play, and nude. Maybe: public, blackmail Limits:, pain, long term damage. Loves: hypnosis, anal, bondage, urine drinking, anal bondage, HARD ANAL PENETRATION! I LOVE DIAPER PLAY! I am a sissy. I want to be a female. I LOVE DICKS IN ALL MY HOLES. For ever pm titled likes I will add all content to my likes. 18 malePM Me for a free dare from me or you can give me a dare

07-02-2012, 02:54 PM	#4
Submissive9 Member Join Date: Apr 2012 Location: Kentucky, United States Posts: 41	It's nice! Please continue