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Old 03-28-2008, 05:56 PM   #1
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THIS STORY IS FICTION IT DOES NOT CONTAIN ANY REAL LIFE EVENTS. ENJOY =)



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Across the street


Nick was a normal 15 year old kid, but has always fantasized about naughty things. The last day of school then a 5 month break, the wonders no parents, no school work, no nothing. Just me and a 5 month vacation, but the sad part is it’s with the neighbors mom across the street. The good thing was she was dam hot and acted like it around boys. So the next day had come and my parents had left and I had left to her house. When I rang the doorbell she smiled and greeted me warmly while wearing a pink shirt and jeans. She has 36 DD and had the roundest ass ever! So as she explained to me all the rules she named a few specific rules. 1. This house is strict; you must do as I say without question, 2. No staying up past 2:00 P.M., 3. There are chores but not many, and 4. Stay out of trouble. She then said with a polite voice we are going to my other house which is about 25 miles away and is quiet beautiful. Without warning she said go to the car and I’ll be there in a second. Nick in shock said wait I need to go get my clothes, She then replied with don’t worry we will get it tomorrow, also I forgot to tell you my name is Emily. As she was walking to the car I noticed she had 2 suitcases both of which were filled completely. So when we had gotten to the house the first thing Nick noticed was that there were 2 stories and a huge swimming pool. So as they walked into the house Emily nudged Nick to follow her upstairs as they did she pointed to a room and opened the door, and said this will be your room I’m sorry that it is pink and has a lot of girl things in it but my friends sometimes stays over . Nick was in shock and calmly said it will do in a grumpy voice, Emily just smiled and walked off. As the night wore on Emily told Nick that she and friends would be going out until 10:00 P.M. Nick quickly looked at the time and it was only 6:00 so he smiled and said have a good time. As Emily left Nick quickly dashed to her bedroom and went through all the drawers looking for anything he can find until he came across her panties. As he scattered through the drawer he noticed a vibrator and laughed. He then remembered the time he had cross dressed and wanted to see what it was like again so he thought it through and decided to go through with it. He grabbed a small thong from the pink room he was staying in since there were drawers and a closet full of girl clothes. Then he grabbed a small skirt, a bra, and a blue top. He smiled and quickly went to make up but not overdoing it. As the night wore on he quickly forgot that he was wearing girl clothes and fell asleep on the couch with a porno and a vibrator he had found…..



This is my first story and I didn't really check for mistakes. Some parts not make sence because I might of forgot to mention them earlier. So if you have any suggestions or questions just ask =). I'll try to work on more.

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Old 03-28-2008, 07:16 PM   #2
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really good i didn't notice any big mistakes so i think your good.
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Old 03-29-2008, 01:51 AM   #3
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this is excellent work so far, as well as good grammar and a nice little cliffhangar ending. I think I know where it could be going, and I like it
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Old 03-29-2008, 12:07 PM   #4
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As time passed the front door opened and 3 figures walked through the door. Nick awoke immediately but still shaken up. The 3 figures immediately grabbed their cell phones and started taking pictures and laughing. Nick finally looked at him still and to his surprise was still wearing the girl clothes as well as holding a vibrator in his hand. He froze in shock and dropped the object and just stood there. Finally Emily stood forward and told the girls to stop taking pictures with an evil smile. She then demanded Nick to stay there while they thought of what to do. If he didn’t they would post the pictures all over the internet as well as give them to his parents. He just nodded while his face turned cherry red.
Finally the girls turned and faced Nick and finally said ok this is how it will work, for the next 5 months you shall be our little slut daughter or we will post the pictures everywhere and will make you regret it. Nick started to shake, turn red, and mumble, but finally submitted to their request and said yes mistresses. The girls all applauded and told him to get washed up and enjoy what’s left of tonight because tomorrow you will wish you never cross dressed. Nick gulped and just walked up stairs to clean up while the girls started making plans for tomorrow morning as well as the 5 months to come.



Also is it bad if it goes abit naughty like sex? I just don't know if these stories are allowed to go that far? and also here is the next part I ddn't want to go to far.

And finally to clarify emily's husband went on vacation as well as business work for 5 months.
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Old 03-29-2008, 12:26 PM   #5
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I can't wait to see how this turns out. I always love it when the guys get pushed around...anyway good story, keep going!
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Old 03-29-2008, 12:31 PM   #6
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Lmao I am a guy. I just like stories like this, I like us guys being slave masters but theres not much to do. But if the girl is then there is lol. But you never know the kid might get revenge Also thanks =).
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oooh!i cant wait to see what that neighbor does to nick!i luv this story!
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Part 3


As the night passed Nick laid in his bed still shocked from what has just happened and is not sure what to do, but is excited at the same time. Wake up Nick! Flopping off the bed in an instant nick looked at the clock reading 10:00 A.M. And slammed his fist on the table in anger! You have 10 seconds to get down here or else stammered Emily. Nick quickly regained himself and dashed downstairs as the 10 seconds where diminishing and made it to the kitchen just in time. Emily pointed to the table and said come eat breakfast which consisted of a bowl of cereal, bacon, toast, and some orange juice. Nick then thought in his mind in a confused manner of how everything seemed normal, it’s as if she had forgot about what happened yesterday but he just sighed with relief and began to eat. 15 minutes had past and Emily had just got off the phone with 4 of her friends frequently using Nicks name in the conversation which got nick a bit nervous. After she had gotten off the phone she walked into the kitchen and told nick to go to the salon which was in the west side of the house. Nick was in complete shock not even able to move until Emily yelled RIGHT NOW! Nick quickly regained himself put his head down and said yes mistress. A few minutes later Nick arrived in the salon which was pretty big and consisted of many different tools of trade of a person who worked at a salon. All over the walls where pictures of girls in makeup and fancy dresses which Nick would expect from a salon. A few minutes past and the door rang a few times as a well a few greetings, then there where steps, getting closer and louder until the door opened. 5 People walked through the door and started to smile and laugh while holding the picture of Nick in girl close. They all walked up to him and said you are going to be our little slut daughter! Nick’s face turned pale as snow and his eyes turned black as if he had just fainted. Those moments where the last of his manhood.


I'm taking this slow trying to explain my way through the story thats how I am in reallife and online I apologize but thats me. Hope you like it =).
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I DO like this, I encourage you to keep writing
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Part 3

Emily walked behind nick and placed a small blindfold that only covered his eyes over him while the girls tide his wrists, and ankles to the chair. The girls then pondered for a moment while Nick over heard words such as pluck, shave, and lashes. He immediately got a sense of what was going down and started to worry what might happen to him. Moments later the girls started on him. First they shaved Nick’s legs, armpits, arms, ass, and privates. The next step was eye plucking and was probably going to hurt the most. Emily said hold still and it won’t take long so he did, and 5 minutes passed and the girls took a step back. A small chuckle, then 2, and then everyone was laughing and said wow you’re such a girl. The next thing was to put on fake eye lashes and permanent eye liner. The girls said they where just putting on washable but instead they put on a huge amount of permanent as well as the long eyelashes. They then scooted the chair over to a sink and mixed in a special soap so Nick’s hair would grow immensely fast and silky. They then moved onto makeup. They put mascara, lipstick, blush, eyelid color, and fake earrings. Standing back the girls took out their cameras and started snapping pictures of Nick while laughing all the while Nick had regretted what he had done yesterday. A moment later the girls came back and brought with them 2 suits. They gave him a size small pink g string, and pink braw, a mini skirt, a tight pink shirt, and some 2 inch heels. After they placed the cloths on Nick they released him and told him to pose for them or else. Nick looked at himself and said you are a bitch Emily…. There was moment of silence and then laughter. Walking up to Nick Emily slapped Nick on the face and said you never call your mistress a bitch you got that you Fing slut. Trembling nick lowered his head and said yes mistress.
Nick started to pose showing his hips, bending over and showing his ass, and doing all kinds of girly poses all while having pictures taken of him. Emily was then handed 4 pills, she proceeded to walk up to Nick and looked at him sternly and said eat these you will need them. Nick looked at the pills and thought to himself it can get much was than this. Moments later he passed out.



Sorry that I didn't make the characters sound like real people lol, but heres the next release and I have a question can we use the F word?
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Old 04-04-2008, 09:29 PM   #11
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I wish that there was special soap to make my hair immedietly grow long and silky! I'm just givivn' you a hard time. Good job on the story; but fyi, you spell BRA with an A. Sorry, I just wanna help
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Thanks. I see that there havn't been many posts besides you bebe so I don't know if I wan't to continue the story =/. I wan't to but I need people actually commenting and giving suggestions rather than ignoring the thread
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it is a good story, it's just that most people never get around to posting what they think of it
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Old 04-09-2008, 10:27 AM   #14
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they are to busy wanking off at it?
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Is a good story
if u feel like u want to finish the story then do it
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