09-17-2010, 12:32 PM | #1 |
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Lose Bet And Be My Slave.........Prank War (The Finale)
Hey I'm back but only for writing purposes. Not sure if people even wanted to hear what happened next in this series but here it is and enjoy
Part 1 *When Andrew walked outside and seen Jennifer sitting on the step. Even though it was really her fault, he felt bad* Andrew: Hey where are your clothes? Jennifer: Inside Andrew: Oh well why not get them back Jennifer: I tried *still sobbing* *Next thing they knew Heather was calling them from the bedroom window and she had Jennifer's clothes in her hand.* Heather: I guess you'll be wanting these back Jennifer: Yes please Heather, I'm so sorry Heather: Nah I don't believe you Andrew: Come on Heather she is sorry Heather: She might be but I can't forgive her for this Andrew: Why is this even such a big deal? Jennifer: Did you not tell him Heather? Heather: Shut up you, I was going to Andrew: Tell me what Heather: *begins to sob also* I still love you or at least I did, before this Andrew: Oh Heather: Yes and now you go and fuck my friend Andrew: I'm sorry Heather: Too late and actually Jennifer I've changed my mind, you can have these back. *Heather tossed Jennifer's clothes out the window down to her but they were all cut up into pieces, even her shoes.* Jennifer: You bitch Heather: No your the one who's the bitch *Heather closes the window* Jennifer: Please Heather we can talk this out *she got no response* Jennifer: Thats just great, what am I gonna do now Andrew: Surely she can't keep ignoring us Jennifer: She can and is Andrew: *sigh* *Andrew began to remove some of his clothes, his hoody, jacket, bottoms and shoes.* Andrew: Here you can wear these Jennifer: Thanks but not sure they will fit me Andrew: Well it's better then nothing *Jennifer put on the clothes but the bottoms and shoes were way too big.* Jennifer: Here these are too big Andrew: Hey take my socks, don't want your feet to be cold Jennifer: Okay thanks *they switched clothes around again.* Andrew: Okay so hows about we head home? Jennifer: Home? I can't go home looking like this Andrew: Okay how about you stay at my apartment? Jennifer: I can't Andrew: You can, I'll sneek you in, my room mates should be in bed by now and I can sneek you out in the morning Jennifer: I dunno, sounds risky Andrew: Well it's a better option then just standing around here all night Jennifer: Okay Andrew: Come on lets go *Andrew put his arm around Jennifer and they walked to his apartment. They were lucky as Andrew's room mates were asleep. He opened the door and they went to his room. She slept on his floor cause that was considered the best thing and they would sort stuff out in the morning.* To Be Continued
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09-20-2010, 08:46 AM | #2 |
getDare Sweetheart
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please go on want to hear more
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09-20-2010, 12:15 PM | #3 |
getDare Cultist (Outer Circle)
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Part 2
*Jennifer awoke early to find that Andrew wasn't their. It was early enough so she assumed that he had gone to the toilets. She waited a couple of minutes, lying on his bedroom floor. He didn't come back so she then started to get a bit worried. Then she heard footsteps coming towards the room. She didn't want to be caught by any of Andrew's room mates. She hide in his closet. Their wasn't much space but holes in the doors so she could breathe. It was Andrew's room mate Sally. She was looking for something but couldn't remember where she put it.* Sally: Damn it, it must be around her somewhere. *It turned out it was a phone charger she was looking for. She couldn't find hers so she looked for Andrew's* Sally: Maybe he has it in his closet *As Sally neared the closet Jennifer got more nervous and thought she was going to be caught but then the door bell rang.* Sally: God damn it *Sally went downstairs to answer the door and it was Andrew.* Sally: Hey where is your key? Andrew: Sorry I must have left it here Sally: Okay, hey do you know where their is a phone charger? Andrew: Their is one on the table Sally: No their isn't *Andrew walked into the kitchen and picked up the charger on the table.* Andrew: Their Sally: It wasn't their when I looked Andrew: Right I believe you Sally: God, just leave me alone Andrew: Okay okay no need to get touchy *Andrew went upstairs and was surprised when he didn't see Jennifer their. He called her name and she came out of the closet.* Andrew: Ha ha, what were you doing in their? Jennifer: Hiding Andrew: Why? Jennifer: In case your room mate seen me Andrew: Ha I was only kidding about that, they don't mind me having people over. Jennifer: You could have told me that earlier Andrew: I could have but this was more fun *Jennifer shakes head in disapproval.* Jennifer: Where were you anyway? Andrew: At your house, they were quite worried as to where you had gone. Jennifer: Oh shit, I'm gonna be in so much trouble. Andrew: Come on Jen your big and old enough to do what you like Jennifer: Yeah I suppose but why did you go their anyway? Andrew: To get these *Andrew holding up a sports bag.* Jennifer: You had to get your sports bag from my house? Andrew: No, to get you some clothes Jennifer: Oh god you didn't tell my parents about last night? Andrew: No but your sister knows and she promised to keep quite Jennifer: Well thank you but with her it always comes at a price Andrew: Just be happy that your safe Jennifer: I am thanks *Andrew hands Jennifer the bag.* Andrew: You can get dressed in bathroom if you want Jennifer: Yeah I will ha ha Andrew: Damn was hoping you wouldn't Jennifer: ANDREW!! Andrew: Kidding, I seen enough last night anyway Jennifer: Oh god *blushes* Andrew: Don't worry I won't tell anyone Jennifer: Thanks Andrew: Stop it, it's fine, I don't mind Jennifer: Okay *Jennifer went off to the bathroom and got changed. When she came back she did have to leave soon after.* Jennifer: Hey I've got to go but again thank you Andrew: Seriously it's nothing *Jennifer gives Andrew a peck on the cheek.* Jennifer: Well I really appreciate it anyway Andrew: Well thats good Jennifer: Talk again Andrew: Yeah Jennifer: Bye Andrew: Bye *Jennifer then went home.* To Be Continued
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09-22-2010, 01:46 PM | #4 |
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*Andrew went upstairs and was surprised when he didn't see Jennifer their. He called her name and she came out of the closet.*
So it turns out that Jennifer is actually a lesbian? Is there any reason that you use * instead of " for character dialog sentences? Always an interesting chapter in your stories! |
09-23-2010, 01:55 PM | #5 |
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I just started using * instead, i did realise that it wasn't the correct way to do it but i'd wrote so much using it that i figured not to change it and plus it gives my stories a little difference
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Best Truth Giver 2016 & 2017 My Real Experiences http://www.getdare.com/bbs/blog.php?b=81891 Send me a pm if you want, I'm always up for chatting to people CHECK OUT MY NEW FICTIONAL STORY "Pushed to Fantasy (On Vacation)" LINK BELOW https://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthre...00#post4465100 I've also got snapchat, kik, skype and messenger. If you want to add me just send me a pm and I'll give you my username(s) |
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