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One thing I haven't ever done in this blog is post a piece of writing I've done on the day of it being written. Well, this was written about 15 minutes ago; it's in it's freshest state. They are song lyrics which I haven't titled yet. They are written about someone from my life, but that's a story for another time. It's also not about my life, directly; more an observation of this person.
Since it's so new I'm open to suggestions, alternative interpretations and even a title. I'd love to hear your suggestions.
We値l wait to see how far apart
we are
where壇 you go?
Why can稚 you just stop and stare
at me
from afar
with a forest-fire heart?
Loser痴 art,
cost an arm,
more than I am willing to pay
for a love,
lasts a day
and not a single second more.
Smells decayed,
looks so new,
feels like death has come to play
with your mind,
with some ropes,
turn the lights out, tapes you mouth.
Count out loud,
calm right down,
Feels like an end just way to soon.
You値l be lost,
just like me,
second chances don稚 come free.
But I値l wait a long, long time.
I値l give it my best light to shine.
I値l wait for you.
I値l wait, I値l wait.
Coming back,
spark to life,
spend a little, make a lot.
Gone to pot,
heart robot,
makes it seem like you池e alive.
Dreaming state,
clean slate,
messy habits cleaned away.
Wipe your eyes,
dry your mouth,
bite your fingers until the bleed.
If I知 in a long, long line.
I値l make sure I知 ready this time.
I値l wait forever and a day,
I値l wait, I値l wait, I値l wait.
I'm okay.
I'm alright.
And I will only mime
until I know that you池e fine.
Always giving you one more day.
I値l wait, I値l wait, I値l wait, I値l wait.
Since it's so new I'm open to suggestions, alternative interpretations and even a title. I'd love to hear your suggestions.
We値l wait to see how far apart
we are
where壇 you go?
Why can稚 you just stop and stare
at me
from afar
with a forest-fire heart?
Loser痴 art,
cost an arm,
more than I am willing to pay
for a love,
lasts a day
and not a single second more.
Smells decayed,
looks so new,
feels like death has come to play
with your mind,
with some ropes,
turn the lights out, tapes you mouth.
Count out loud,
calm right down,
Feels like an end just way to soon.
You値l be lost,
just like me,
second chances don稚 come free.
But I値l wait a long, long time.
I値l give it my best light to shine.
I値l wait for you.
I値l wait, I値l wait.
Coming back,
spark to life,
spend a little, make a lot.
Gone to pot,
heart robot,
makes it seem like you池e alive.
Dreaming state,
clean slate,
messy habits cleaned away.
Wipe your eyes,
dry your mouth,
bite your fingers until the bleed.
If I知 in a long, long line.
I値l make sure I知 ready this time.
I値l wait forever and a day,
I値l wait, I値l wait, I値l wait.
I'm okay.
I'm alright.
And I will only mime
until I know that you池e fine.
Always giving you one more day.
I値l wait, I値l wait, I値l wait, I値l wait.
Total Comments 3
Comments
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I would Suggest "The Way"
Although thats a song by Zack Hemsey.
The song would fit nevertheless.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oN2Xs-MvxLwPosted 12-06-2014 at 09:02 AM by SweetTeen 
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I loved it! These feelings are very sweet and romantic.
I had been there.. wasnt fun x_x
And regarding the title, I would suggest maybe 'Wait' and its synonyms.
Posted 12-06-2014 at 11:52 AM by rossesred
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I actually quite like the music there. Haven't been able to quite make it fit to that exact piece, but it could workQuote:Originally Posted by SweetTeen
I would Suggest "The Way"
Although thats a song by Zack Hemsey.
The song would fit nevertheless.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oN2Xs-MvxLw
Yeah, I quite like that title. Simple.Quote:Originally Posted by rossesred
I loved it! These feelings are very sweet and romantic.
I had been there.. wasnt fun x_x
And regarding the title, I would suggest maybe 'Wait' and its synonyms.
Posted 12-07-2014 at 11:08 AM by An_Jon
