[Fiction] Onioni (MxM)

[Kewai]

Hello,

I started writing this story a while back but stopped as I sort of had a few problems I had to deal with, but now I am back and really want to get a story out there.

This story will be MxM.

I will be posting a few chapters, one a week. If you like it and want to see more, please comment and I will continue
(At this time I am planning on continuing the story to the end)

Anyways Here it is I hope you enjoy:



Onioni
Chapter One
(Saturday 10:30PM)

Tommy sat on the cold metal roof, the moon gleaming onto his eyes. He could make out nothing but vague images cast by the moonlight falling on the valley. A small green light was flickering on and off at the other side of the valley. It was 10o'clock but the cold did not bother Tommy, He was alone on the roof outside his bedroom resting as the summer holidays had just started and his parents had left him alone for seven weeks. He looked up at the moon in all its loneliness, all alone in the sky with no-one to hover over the earth with. Tommy was about 185cm with sandy-brown hair and a medium build. Tommy shivered, It was getting cold so he got up to head inside to bed. Just as he was clambering back in the window his phone vibrated in his pocket. It was his friend Corey whom he hadn't seen in a few months..

'Hey, the holidays have just started we should meet up sometime?'

Tommy considered this for a while. He, sort of liked Corey last time he saw him but never decided to act on it. Now he hadn't seen him in such a long time he was worried his unresolved feelings would make life difficult for him. He decided that an offer was an offer and that the only way to move forward would be to act on it.

'Sure, what time suits best?, I'm free any day"

With some courage he closed his eyes and moved his finger towards the send button. He was worried. He had never properly socialised with people outside of school. His phone vibrated almost instantaneously in his pocket in his pocket. Maybe Corey was actually more motivated to catch up than he thought.

'I'm not too sure, I'll talk with mum, txt you tomorrow bye'

Tommy considered this for a while then replied more confidentially.

'Sounds cool, Cya!!'

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Tommy stepped out of the shower onto the nice warm tiled floor and looked in the mirror. His body wasn't up to the standard that he would like but it wasn't in a state that he disliked. He didn't quite have a six pack or anything like that but wasn't chubby. He dried his medium length sandy-brown hair dropped his towel on the ground and headed out of his en-suite into his bedroom. He jumped onto his bed and pulled his headphones towards him.

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Originally Posted by Dream/Flashback

Tommy closed his eyes, moved his head closer to Rivers and prepared himself. He could feel the warmth of his lips. Moving closer. Rivers hand grabbed the inside of his thy sending a sprawl of shivers across Tommy's body. River could not believe this was going to happen. Tommy's head shot back into the back of his chair.
"Stop!, I can't do this"
River sat back in his seat in silence obviously disappointed. This was the second time that Tommy had done this and River wanted him badly. But he needed to make sure that any of this emotion got into the public domain. It could ruin him and his friend.
Tommy didn't know what had happened. He had wanted this for a long time and it was about to happen. Why? He felt like it wasn't right, HE wasn't ready. Tommy reached into his pocket to look at the time it was 7:36 pm he would be back at boarding school soon.

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(Sunday 10:30AM)

Tommy opened his eyes, something was different he felt light, as if he was floating. He gazed over at his alarm clock it was 7:30am. Tommy rolled over to the end of his bed and held down the button to his intercom.

"John get the car ready please, I would like to go to the cafe in 30 mins."

As Tommy clambered out of bed he glimpsed his parents golf course. The sprinklers were on to keep the grass a nice lush green compared to the barren wasteland of the countryside surrounding it. He reached for his dressing gown and stumbled towards the bathroom.


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That is it for now I will be updating within the next week. If you like it or want to see more COMMENT, if you don't, tell me how to improve.

Thanks for Reading

[AMGWallHax]

Seriously, i love it! Cant wait for more ^.^

[Kewai]

Wow, thanks so much for you're reply, It means allot. I will definitely post more soon.
(I will probably post one this length or longer each week)

[saturdayx]

A chapter a week?!?! That's too long to wait for such a good story!!!

[Kewai]

Haha, thanks. I am trying to be realistic, it will be no less than one chapter a week. I can't promise anything faster than that.

Thanks for your response, I will be posting more soon.

[ussmwm]

It's a good start. You put in some detail, which is very good for a story. I look forward to more.

[gayboi25]

So far Great!!! A lot of possibility, and I love the writing style!

[Kewai]

Originally Posted by gayboi25

So far Great!!! A lot of possibility, and I love the writing style!

Thanks, this is my first story and I may play around with how I write a little bit (maybe) so yeah, I am open to any suggestions.

Thanks again for your support

[Saphir]

yeah you already know this, but whatever :P

I am really happy that you post this story and that you'll continue writing it! :3

I'm really looking forward to more!

Love

[alex987]

YOU ROCK FOR POSTING THIS xD
Needless to say, I want more ;D

[Dylan xX]

I'm gonna have nothing new to read for 4 weeks, but I'm still glad that you decided to go through with this :]


-Dylsterr

[Kewai]

Thank you everyone for your comments and support.

If there is anything you would like to see changed or incorporated into my story please let me know; either by PM or in your Comment

Thanks again, I hope this chapter wont be too boring, I am still introducing setting and Characters and probably will be in the next couple of stories.

Onioni
Chapter Two
(Sunday 11:00AM)


Tommy gently closed the door of his parent's mansion and turned to wait for his car to pick him up. It was a sunny day and he wanted to go and get some breakfast before he thought of something to do.
Tommy's parents were in fact, filthy rich, inside the mansion they had an array of staff waiting on their every command. These summer holidays Tommy's parents had left Tommy at home while they jetted of to explore the world. They had left him in the care of his "Nanny" Daniel. Daniel had only recently left high school and had somehow won Tommy's parents over and gotten then to hire him. Tommy and Daniel got on well, though Daniel kept an authoritative role they still managed to have a laugh.

Tommy heard a buzz and looked over to see the gates of their driveway opening and his car gliding towards him. Behind it, he saw a glimpse of the golf course that Tommy's father had bought in hope to spend some time with Tommy.

John, His Chauffeur got out of the car and walked around to Tommy.

"Morning Tommy" Greeted John Opening the door for Tommy

"Morning John" Tommy replied getting into the car

John closed the door, walked around to the driver's side and sat down.

"Just to the Cafe?" John Asked

"For now, thanks" Tommy Replied

"Sure" John replied

The car slowly glided out of the driveway and began the winding journey out of the Valley. Tommy's parents owned the valley, only his family and his father's business partner's family lived in the valley. It was a large valley the on one end opened up to the sea and on the other end opened up to reveal the city only a five minutes drive away. As the car was passing the golf course Tommy looked out to see the son of his fathers business partner, Philip, playing golf. He had only seen Philip a few times since he moved in to his families newly completed house a few months ago. From what Tommy had seen, Philip was about 175 cm's tall and had a skinny but slightly athletic build. He had wonderful blonde hair that Tommy had fallen in love with the second he laid eyes on it and had a look about him that Tommy could not pinpoint.

Tommy felt his phone vibrate and looked down to see a text from Corey:

"I'm Free if you want to meet up today?" It read

Tommy's heart skipped a beat, He was extremely happy that he could meet up with Corey again. He had not really seen Corey for a while.

"Sure, When and Where?" He Replied

"Here we go" John Said Opening the door

Tommy looked up to see that he had arrived at the cafe that he frequently visited. It was situated on the corner of a small block of shops; it was mostly glass and had a nice, peaceful and private courtyard.

"Thanks" Tommy said getting out of the car

"No Problem" John Replied "I'll be waiting out the back, text me when you need me"

"Sure, thanks"

Tommy walked through the glass door and into the cafe. He walked up to the counter and waited to be served.

"Morning Tommy" Alfeo, the Cafe owner exclaimed cheerfully

"Morning" Tommy Replied

"What would you like this morning?" Alfeo Asked

"Ummm" Tommy said, "Can I have a trim latte and a sparkling water please"

"Sure buddy and anything to eat?"

"Umm" Tommy muttered looking at the menu on the counter in front of him "Can I please have Fruit Creeps?"

"Sure"

"Thanks" Tommy exclaimed

With that, Tommy walked towards a table that had a view out the window and sat down. He looked at his phone and saw that he had received a text from Corey:
"12:30, Courtney Place. Does that suit you?"

"Sounds great!!!" Tommy Replied

Without realizing it, a smile had crept up on Tommy's face, The first in a while.

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That is the end of that Chapter, I hope that you enjoyed it.

Will Tommy end up meeting Corey?

Will they get on?

Thanks for reading; Please COMMENT!!!

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Originally Posted by Dylan xX

I'm gonna have nothing new to read for 4 weeks, but I'm still glad that you decided to go through with this :]


-Dylsterr

Probably Seven weeks, but it has all been re-written since the last time you saw it

[AMGWallHax]

I like it :3 Hope to read more soon!

[pymani96]

Bong! You've got mail - the message follows...
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I like this story quite a lot. i dont think ive seen it before, so it was a nice surprise to get a pm about it. love it anyway
pymani96

[Saphir]

Wow I really like it. Don't worry it's no way boring! <3

I'm really looking forward to the next chapter!