BETA Boyz

vivala_dare · 07-10-2008, 11:40 AM

Hands on socks get them of cocks!!!!. Shut the fuck up Billy I shouted. My names Tommy Ox and my best mate Billy Grappler has just woken me up. Billy why the fuck are you in my room its 7 pissing a clock in the morning. Well the way I’m looking at you its 7 o cock shouts Billy, been up all night spanking the monkey he laughs. Pass me my boxers dip o. Billy chucks me my tight pair of boxers. There plain white nice and snug. Wear them they will make your little friction burned cock look bigger he laughs while flicking trough my porno mag.

I’ve know Billy since I was 12 we met at primary school and we are best mates. Were both 17 now and were going of to Lake Suck for the week. So Billy’s just woke me up. Billy were not going to set of till 11 go home and come back later I moan. I get up my package looks so much better in these pants. I get changed and pull out a bag while I’m packing Billy’s says he’s using the bathroom. After I am packed Billy comes in. Errrrr dude your mum won’t mind that I got yogurt on the towel will she. Mates don’t tell me you blew your load on the towel I say. Yeh mate sorry o well could have been worse could have done it on her panties she left in there. Shut the fuck up get in the damn car I say louder then I meant. Billy walks to the car laughing.

We set of on the way we pick up Billy’s girl friend and her cousin. She’s called Jess. And her cousins called Rachel. So we set of about half way trough the trip jess goes down on Billy he’s driving and jess is sat next to him she’s sucking him off it looks hot. I pull out the blanket and cover my self up Rachel who’s sat next to me comes under the blanket with me. Seeing as wear away I’m sure we both want to get up to some shit so I am free and your hot she whispers. My dick is solid, ok I stammer I shake myself. Wake up I say in my head. Ok Rach lets do it you hot bitch. She removes my belt and licks my pubic rim. Then she squeezes my package which is looking good. She grabs my cock and starts sucking her lips moving up and down after what seems like time has stopped I am ready to cum. Ii tell her she then goes quicker and faster with her hand then licks my bell end then goes at it with her hand BOOM my load fires she carries on the orgasm is intense. She pulls out some baby wipes and cleans up the mess the wipes feel weird against my cock. She kisses my dick and says I will se you later. We pull the blanket up. Billy turns round, Jesus mate you were under there awhile couldn’t get a hard on he jokes. Just coz I can last longer I joke at him. We all have a laugh. We carry on the drive it will be a few more hours before were there I hope I get another blow.

I will Carry this on in parts.
and if you are wondering about title you will find out in the next part

Knots101 · 07-10-2008, 12:04 PM

More funny then erotic.
Props to you.

DareByrd · 07-10-2008, 04:51 PM

It's an good story.
Would be better if it had parentheses.

vivala_dare · 07-18-2008, 02:14 PM

Billy slow down before we get pulled over i shout. Shut up hamster balls Billy laughs at me, what the hell of a come back is that says Jess to Billy. we all start laughing. id say another 2 or 3 hours shouts Billy. Rachael lies back and has the blanket over her i climb under with her. She says she wants sex, Jesus err here under the blanket on the back seat. No on the fucking moon...of course right here right now Rach says. I slide my pants down and lift her skirt up i pull her panties down then slip my semi erect cock in her shaven pussy. I start pumping. My cock is wet and there’s a hell lot of juice coming from her pussy. I whip my cock out and then she takes the load in her mouth then i get down and start licking her pussy. Then she says maybe it’s not a good idea. i carry on licking her clit like there’s no tomorrow. Mike you mite not like what happens next she whispers to me. Listen Rach I’m ready your hot nothing you do will surprise me. I lick her clit then from left to right up down little circles she shouts I’m Cumming I’m Cumming. Fuck me pussy juice comes squirting out of her pussy on my face and its keeps going then she squirts a little more then stops. Fucking hell fuck me what the fuck holly shit fuck I repeat every swear word in history. I’m sorry rach says looking embarrassed. Its mint do you do that every time. Yes don’t you mind or something rach says. nah its great I love it and i cant wait I say. We come up from the blankets.

ha ha ha you lucky cunt you have a squirted Billy shouts fuck me pussy juice or what. Jess says to Billy that it ruins in the family and she squirts. Billy starts clapping his hands getting excited i have a squirter yes thank god. I sit back in the corner look at rach who’s still recovering from the orgasm. Then Billy he’s going mad then jess who’s flicking trough a mag. what a trip and there’s more to come.

StylishKidInTheRiot · 07-18-2008, 06:40 PM

speech marks please.

slave1987 · 07-19-2008, 11:41 AM

Definately has potential as a story, but the speech needs to be broken up rather than just run together so no-one knows who's saying what

StylishKidInTheRiot · 07-24-2008, 05:27 PM

why the fuck did i get bad rep for asking for speech marks?

vivala_dare · 07-25-2008, 02:19 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by StylishKidInTheRiot

why the fuck did i get bad rep for asking for speech marks?

i dont rep ppl m8 so dont blame it on me

07-10-2008, 11:40 AM	#1
vivala_dare Distinguished Member Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: earth lol Posts: 551 Blog Entries: 12	BETA Boyz Hands on socks get them of cocks!!!!. Shut the fuck up Billy I shouted. My names Tommy Ox and my best mate Billy Grappler has just woken me up. Billy why the fuck are you in my room its 7 pissing a clock in the morning. Well the way I’m looking at you its 7 o cock shouts Billy, been up all night spanking the monkey he laughs. Pass me my boxers dip o. Billy chucks me my tight pair of boxers. There plain white nice and snug. Wear them they will make your little friction burned cock look bigger he laughs while flicking trough my porno mag. I’ve know Billy since I was 12 we met at primary school and we are best mates. Were both 17 now and were going of to Lake Suck for the week. So Billy’s just woke me up. Billy were not going to set of till 11 go home and come back later I moan. I get up my package looks so much better in these pants. I get changed and pull out a bag while I’m packing Billy’s says he’s using the bathroom. After I am packed Billy comes in. Errrrr dude your mum won’t mind that I got yogurt on the towel will she. Mates don’t tell me you blew your load on the towel I say. Yeh mate sorry o well could have been worse could have done it on her panties she left in there. Shut the fuck up get in the damn car I say louder then I meant. Billy walks to the car laughing. We set of on the way we pick up Billy’s girl friend and her cousin. She’s called Jess. And her cousins called Rachel. So we set of about half way trough the trip jess goes down on Billy he’s driving and jess is sat next to him she’s sucking him off it looks hot. I pull out the blanket and cover my self up Rachel who’s sat next to me comes under the blanket with me. Seeing as wear away I’m sure we both want to get up to some shit so I am free and your hot she whispers. My dick is solid, ok I stammer I shake myself. Wake up I say in my head. Ok Rach lets do it you hot bitch. She removes my belt and licks my pubic rim. Then she squeezes my package which is looking good. She grabs my cock and starts sucking her lips moving up and down after what seems like time has stopped I am ready to cum. Ii tell her she then goes quicker and faster with her hand then licks my bell end then goes at it with her hand BOOM my load fires she carries on the orgasm is intense. She pulls out some baby wipes and cleans up the mess the wipes feel weird against my cock. She kisses my dick and says I will se you later. We pull the blanket up. Billy turns round, Jesus mate you were under there awhile couldn’t get a hard on he jokes. Just coz I can last longer I joke at him. We all have a laugh. We carry on the drive it will be a few more hours before were there I hope I get another blow. I will Carry this on in parts. and if you are wondering about title you will find out in the next part

07-10-2008, 12:04 PM	#2
Knots101 Account Banned Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Canadian land eh Posts: 374 Blog Entries: 26	More funny then erotic. Props to you. __________________ Left getdare, due to extreme bullshit. If you need to get ahold of me you can send me a PM and their is a chance i may check it.

07-10-2008, 04:51 PM	#3
DareByrd getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 341	It's an good story. Would be better if it had parentheses. __________________ 26/m/sub Gay Kik me at dkb1992 Likes: orgasm denial, hypno, rules, dares, games of chance, occasionally chastity. Very open minded otherwise Limits: public, friends and family, blackmail, feminization, illegal, permanent damage, messy, scat

07-18-2008, 02:14 PM	#4
vivala_dare Distinguished Member Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: earth lol Posts: 551 Blog Entries: 12	Billy slow down before we get pulled over i shout. Shut up hamster balls Billy laughs at me, what the hell of a come back is that says Jess to Billy. we all start laughing. id say another 2 or 3 hours shouts Billy. Rachael lies back and has the blanket over her i climb under with her. She says she wants sex, Jesus err here under the blanket on the back seat. No on the fucking moon...of course right here right now Rach says. I slide my pants down and lift her skirt up i pull her panties down then slip my semi erect cock in her shaven pussy. I start pumping. My cock is wet and there’s a hell lot of juice coming from her pussy. I whip my cock out and then she takes the load in her mouth then i get down and start licking her pussy. Then she says maybe it’s not a good idea. i carry on licking her clit like there’s no tomorrow. Mike you mite not like what happens next she whispers to me. Listen Rach I’m ready your hot nothing you do will surprise me. I lick her clit then from left to right up down little circles she shouts I’m Cumming I’m Cumming. Fuck me pussy juice comes squirting out of her pussy on my face and its keeps going then she squirts a little more then stops. Fucking hell fuck me what the fuck holly shit fuck I repeat every swear word in history. I’m sorry rach says looking embarrassed. Its mint do you do that every time. Yes don’t you mind or something rach says. nah its great I love it and i cant wait I say. We come up from the blankets. ha ha ha you lucky cunt you have a squirted Billy shouts fuck me pussy juice or what. Jess says to Billy that it ruins in the family and she squirts. Billy starts clapping his hands getting excited i have a squirter yes thank god. I sit back in the corner look at rach who’s still recovering from the orgasm. Then Billy he’s going mad then jess who’s flicking trough a mag. what a trip and there’s more to come.

07-18-2008, 06:40 PM	#5
StylishKidInTheRiot Member Join Date: Dec 2007 Posts: 49	speech marks please.

07-19-2008, 11:41 AM	#6
slave1987 getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Apr 2007 Posts: 430	Definately has potential as a story, but the speech needs to be broken up rather than just run together so no-one knows who's saying what

07-24-2008, 05:27 PM	#7
StylishKidInTheRiot Member Join Date: Dec 2007 Posts: 49	why the fuck did i get bad rep for asking for speech marks?