Fiction: The Orphanage

openinvizion · 12-18-2010, 04:11 PM

The Orphanage. Fiction Story. No T or D. Contains slight illegality and in one part, the suggestion of rape. Hence the story being put into the R18 Section

There will be at least 3 sides to this story.
Side 1 is Molly
Side 2 is Rhys
Side 3 is Katuki
and I might write:
Side 4 is Will

And now follows an intro into each character.
Prologues

~~
Molly
~~

Many people in this world wish that poverty was no more, and homelessness was abolished. We can cater for one and a half of that. We care for the homeless, whether they be old or young, black or white, but we only take males. The Orphanage isn't a care home, it is a lab. Sexual Science is the subject we are most knowledgeable to.

We monitor many subjects, and choose after a lengthy discussion. And there was one person we had in mind. She was a caring young woman, and far more advanced than any other eighteen year old. She had E cup breasts, and had the “hourglass” shape to her body.

And here it begins, the tale of Molly. The girl that changed the Orphanage.

~~
Rhys
~~

Among the hundreds of young boys we have had at the orphanage, Rhys was one of the most contraversial. He took to Molly like a child to chocolate. Yet would never advance beyond spending time with her. After Katuki spoke to him, she discovered that he didn't want to hurt Molly. We found that one of the Intelligence drugs we were giving him were also boosting his genitalia growth. At 13 he had a cock at over 8 inches. Even some of the longest residing subjects had up to 7 inches. Katuki took him away, and after being sedated, we begin at the time when he comes to in a new environment.

~~
Katuki
~~

Katuki. One word describes her down to a tee. Stunner. If it weren't for the fact she had an IQ at 2.5 x Stephen Hawking, we would have let the subjects have their way with her. And her IQ wasn't the only shocking thing about her. Born in Japan, in a world where sex before adulthood, and where adulthood is 25, meant death, we took her on as a virgin. She joined when she was 20, and now, 12 years on, still no cherry popping in her schedule. We mention a lot of her, but she truly shines when she takes Rhys to the Pen.

~~
Will*
~~

Will, a “maybe” character.
Will is one of those young men who see the world as an opportunity. He was taken from what seemed to be a bad family environment. Yet we discovered not even a week into his new life that he had someone in his life more inportant than his family. And we could not obtain this person, without due reason to end an incarceration. Will. A precious nineteen year old, in love with a 17 year old, serving twelve years in prison for escaping the Pen. We couldn't take his lover back. We promised that Kris would never return. Kris and Will. One couple, one world apart. We follow Will's progress at the Orphanage and how Kris escapes prison, breaks into the Pen, in search of his lover after a tip off links the organisations. Will the two be reunited or is this a life that ends too soon.

So, after the intro to Molly, Rhys and Katuki, what do you think. Please don't comment on Will just yet, PM me for now..

Cuffed · 12-18-2010, 04:46 PM

I look foward to this

chubbsman7 · 12-18-2010, 09:01 PM

Interesting set up you have started. In my opinion, I would get rid of the color coded thing, though, if you plan on continue using it. It's theoretically a good idea (the color coding, that is), but honestly, it's a pain to read sometimes. I see promise in this.

openinvizion · 12-19-2010, 08:30 AM

@Chubbsman7. The Color coding was only for the Intros,. not for the full story.

As the story is still a work in progress, I shall post, some time later today, a description of the Pen and the Orphanage.

maddy09 · 12-20-2010, 02:44 PM

sounds interesting, cant wait to see the actual story

Stormwalker22 · 12-20-2010, 03:03 PM

I like it too please write the story it sounds great!

slutpup · 12-25-2010, 08:10 PM

Did this story die or are you still thinking about what to write?

openinvizion · 12-30-2010, 11:25 AM

neither. i know what to write, just need the time to write it..

will probably post the first part of the story in the new year

Happy New Year getDare.

Stormwalker22 · 01-03-2011, 04:03 AM

I hope the new chapter comes soon

12-18-2010, 04:11 PM	#1
openinvizion Member Join Date: Mar 2010 Location: I live in my house, in a small country with other countries nearby Posts: 90 Blog Entries: 13	The Orphanage The Orphanage. Fiction Story. No T or D. Contains slight illegality and in one part, the suggestion of rape. Hence the story being put into the R18 Section There will be at least 3 sides to this story. Side 1 is Molly Side 2 is Rhys Side 3 is Katuki and I might write: Side 4 is Will And now follows an intro into each character. Prologues ~~ *Molly* ~~ Many people in this world wish that poverty was no more, and homelessness was abolished. We can cater for one and a half of that. We care for the homeless, whether they be old or young, black or white, but we only take males. The Orphanage isn't a care home, it is a lab. Sexual Science is the subject we are most knowledgeable to. We monitor many subjects, and choose after a lengthy discussion. And there was one person we had in mind. She was a caring young woman, and far more advanced than any other eighteen year old. She had E cup breasts, and had the “hourglass” shape to her body. And here it begins, the tale of Molly. The girl that changed the Orphanage. ~~ *Rhys* ~~ Among the hundreds of young boys we have had at the orphanage, Rhys was one of the most contraversial. He took to Molly like a child to chocolate. Yet would never advance beyond spending time with her. After Katuki spoke to him, she discovered that he didn't want to hurt Molly. We found that one of the Intelligence drugs we were giving him were also boosting his genitalia growth. At 13 he had a cock at over 8 inches. Even some of the longest residing subjects had up to 7 inches. Katuki took him away, and after being sedated, we begin at the time when he comes to in a new environment. ~~ *Katuki* ~~ Katuki. One word describes her down to a tee. Stunner. If it weren't for the fact she had an IQ at 2.5 x Stephen Hawking, we would have let the subjects have their way with her. And her IQ wasn't the only shocking thing about her. Born in Japan, in a world where sex before adulthood, and where adulthood is 25, meant death, we took her on as a virgin. She joined when she was 20, and now, 12 years on, still no cherry popping in her schedule. We mention a lot of her, but she truly shines when she takes Rhys to the Pen. ~~ Will* ~~ Will, a “maybe” character. Will is one of those young men who see the world as an opportunity. He was taken from what seemed to be a bad family environment. Yet we discovered not even a week into his new life that he had someone in his life more inportant than his family. And we could not obtain this person, without due reason to end an incarceration. Will. A precious nineteen year old, in love with a 17 year old, serving twelve years in prison for escaping the Pen. We couldn't take his lover back. We promised that Kris would never return. Kris and Will. One couple, one world apart. We follow Will's progress at the Orphanage and how Kris escapes prison, breaks into the Pen, in search of his lover after a tip off links the organisations. Will the two be reunited or is this a life that ends too soon. So, after the intro to Molly, Rhys and Katuki, what do you think. Please don't comment on Will just yet, PM me for now..

12-18-2010, 04:46 PM	#2
Cuffed getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: USA Posts: 317	I look foward to this __________________ No thoughts, only ✨ Depp ✨

12-18-2010, 09:01 PM	#3
chubbsman7 Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: Kingdom of Talossa Territory, Antarctica. Posts: 231	Interesting set up you have started. In my opinion, I would get rid of the color coded thing, though, if you plan on continue using it. It's theoretically a good idea (the color coding, that is), but honestly, it's a pain to read sometimes. I see promise in this. __________________ ...And So Summer Starts (Sean's View) ...And So Summer Starts (Lauren's View) With these stories, I'll try to update every Monday or so. It depends on my work schedule, really. But I'll post as often (as appropriate, definitely not everyday!) as I can! Also: A side project of mine: The In The Black Fedora

12-19-2010, 08:30 AM	#4
openinvizion Member Join Date: Mar 2010 Location: I live in my house, in a small country with other countries nearby Posts: 90 Blog Entries: 13	@Chubbsman7. The Color coding was only for the Intros,. not for the full story. As the story is still a work in progress, I shall post, some time later today, a description of the Pen and the Orphanage. Last edited by openinvizion; 12-19-2010 at 08:32 AM.

12-20-2010, 02:44 PM	#5
maddy09 Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Probably somewhere I'm not supposed to be. Posts: 240 Blog Entries: 28	sounds interesting, cant wait to see the actual story __________________ 18/Female/Bi Likes:Light pain, orgasm control, Ice, Semi Public Limits: Family and friends, permanent, extremely messy, sending pic/videos,

12-20-2010, 03:03 PM	#6
Stormwalker22 Distinguished Member Join Date: May 2010 Location: CA Posts: 503	I like it too please write the story it sounds great! __________________ My Friends Betrayal http://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthrea...179#post391179

12-25-2010, 08:10 PM	#7
slutpup Distinguished Member Join Date: Dec 2010 Location: MN Posts: 703 Blog Entries: 8	Did this story die or are you still thinking about what to write? __________________ PM me dares! I will try any dare that gets sent that *doesn't* have anything to do with *any* of my limits! I need help figuring out my likes, dislikes and some limits! Dare me! Likes: Mouth soaping, writing lines, spanking, anal, slight pain, certain public things Dislikes: ??? Limits: Certain public things, permanent, major pain, any type of sex, family, friends If you think I deserve a punishment for not updating my story, punish me. Last edited by slutpup; 12-25-2010 at 08:15 PM.

12-30-2010, 11:25 AM	#8
openinvizion Member Join Date: Mar 2010 Location: I live in my house, in a small country with other countries nearby Posts: 90 Blog Entries: 13	neither. i know what to write, just need the time to write it.. will probably post the first part of the story in the new year Happy New Year getDare.

01-03-2011, 04:03 AM	#9
Stormwalker22 Distinguished Member Join Date: May 2010 Location: CA Posts: 503	I hope the new chapter comes soon