Fiction: Sisters Sleepover - The Sub Plot !!!

ShinyDemon · 09-09-2009, 04:04 AM

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Ok guys and girls - since the last update on "Sister's Sleepover - The Sequel - The Story Continues", I have been working on a little sub plot. This is now ready, and the only question was to whether to include this in the main story or as a standalone story.

After a lot of thinking time, I felt that the main story already has a lot of characters, and to include more at this point may detract from the main plot. So I offer this - "Sisters Sleepover - The Sub Plot". The link is as follows...

http://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthread.php?t=28060

Whilst this is a stand-alone story, it may help if you read "Sister's Sleepover - The Sequel - The Story Continues" as it has the build up to this.

I should also mention that some of the characters were inspired by bazman, a fan of the stories. Whilst I don't normally take requests for characters, this fitted in with what I was planning.

Enjoy...

ShinyDemon · 09-09-2009, 04:05 AM

Sisters Sleepover - The Sub Plot

Simon could not believe his luck, finding the DVD poking out of the ‘Video-Me Booth’ that had an image of two girls undressing each other.
The excitement on the bus ride home was obvious, although to observers it would look as though the group of teenage boys had just bought the latest chart CD. There were four boys huddled around, with one tightly gripping his latest acquisition.

It was just a few stops until the bus arrived at Simon’s street, and the boys left the bus at speed.

“The house should be empty, so we can watch this on the big television” Simon said as the group walked hastily towards his house.

“Cool !” his friends Chris, Jack and Dave all said in unison.

The four of them were already beginning to become aroused at the prospect of what they were about to see – it could, of course, all be a horrible ploy. However the group had used the ‘Video-Me’ booth a few times, and knew that the image for the DVD cover was taken during the recording session, so they were all hopeful.

They had reached Simon’s house, and Simon put his key in the door. As they entered the large house, Simon hushed the group… silence. That was what he had been expecting, but just to make sure, he called out, “Anyone in ?”
The only response was pure silence, confirming his hopes and expectations.

The lads kicked off their shoes and rushed into the living room.

Simon’s dad was fairly well off, and liked life’s little luxuries. This was immediately apparent from the living room. The plush leather sofa and chairs included two recliners that faced a huge plasma television which was mounted on the wall.
Beneath the television was a selection of the latest and best branded hi-fi and video equipment.
Simon claimed one of the recliners and immediately adjusted it to a comfortable, laid back position. He reached for the remotes, and the entertainment system sprang to life with clicks, whirrs and a few LEDs.

He gave the DVD to Chris, and told him to put it in the machine – this was the first time that he had let the precious item leave his tightly gripped hands, but in his home he felt it was safe to do so.

Jack took the other recliner, whilst Chris and Dave sat in the other seats.

The ‘Video-Me’ logo appeared on the screen, followed by a short pause that seemed much longer than it actually was.
Finally an image from inside the booth appeared, with two girls wearing clown masks. The music started playing “Hit Me Baby” by Britney Spears, and the girls started singing, and although you couldn’t see their faces due to the ‘Happy’ and ‘Sad’ clown masks, they didn’t seem too enthusiastic. Their singing was pretty awful however the group of boys didn’t mind at all, as the girls began to take off their clothes !
This, of course, was what they had been hoping for, but it was actually happening. This was amazing, watching two girls – strangers – stripping off their clothes.
As the first song was finishing, both girls stood there wearing nothing but their underwear. The ‘happy’ clown was wearing a black bra and brief set, whilst the ‘sad’ clown was wearing a jade-green bra and thong. Both girls had amazing bodies.

The second song began to play, and this was one by Tatu. At this point, the sad clown turned towards the happy clown and reached around her, unfastening her bra and allowing it to fall to the ground. The happy clown’s boobs were now on full display, and this pleased the group of lads who were glued to the screen. Each of them were now fully aroused, although their erections were hindered by each of their clothing.
Sad clown had taken a step back, and was now slowly lowering happy clown’s briefs, revealing a well groomed pubic area. The briefs were just passing the knees, continuing their downward motion when all of a sudden the living room door swung open, startling the lads.

“Boo !” shouted out Jane, Simon’s younger sister. She had a huge smile on her face, knowing that she would have probably scaring the shit out of her brother, and her plan had obviously worked. Simon looked shit-scared, partly from the shock of his sister scaring him, but also from the fact of what she had caught him and his friends watching. His eyes glanced at the screen, naturally causing Jane to also glance out of curiosity.
Her mouth widened as she saw what was on the television screen. Simon scrambled with the remote to switch off the DVD, but in his haste he only succeeded in pausing the image on the screen.

“Simon !” Jane said with a shocked tone in her voice. She stepped back, at which point Lauren, Chris’s younger sister (and Jane’s best friend) also appeared. She too was laughing at their ‘plan’ to scare Simon, but also stopped when she saw the screen.

“What the fuck… is… this ?” Jane said, with pauses between the words.

“We found it… at the mall…” Simon replied in all honesty, although he was ashamed his younger sister had caught him watching something like this. “Someone left it in the ‘Video-Me’ booth.”

There was a long pause, then Jane broke the silence.

“Someone actually did this in the booth at the arcade ? Shit, that takes some guts… and then to leave it there… what are they – stupid or just plain forgetful ?”

“Or exhibitionists ?” Lauren offered.

“Just don’t tell dad… please ?” Simon pleaded with his sister.

“I won’t – so long as you let us watch it with you guys. I’m curious to know how far this goes !” Jane replied.
The lads looked at each other, and none of them had any problems with a couple of girls who wanted to watch this ‘home-made porn’ with them – in fact they probably all were quite excited by the fact. The girls sat on the floor, and Simon restarted the DVD.

The black briefs fell to the floor, and then happy clown proceeded to strip sad clown until she was also naked. The two naked girls then slowly and unenthusiastically danced until the end of the song.

The third and final song began to play, at which point the two girls on the screen began to touch and rub each others bodies, which was extremely erotic to watch for both the boys and the two girls. For around three and a half minutes, the girls caressed each other until the music stopped, and a message appeared: “A ‘Video-Me’ Production”.

The DVD whirred to a stop, and the group remained silent – taking in what they had just watched.

Jane was the first to speak. “Wow !” was all she could manage.

“That was awesome dude !” David said to Simon.

Slowly conversations resumed, everyone agreeing how hot the show was.

“Would you two ever do something like that ?” Jack asked, looking towards Jane and Lauren.

“Not on video.” was Jane’s response.

“But… you would… if it wasn’t on video ?” Jack continued.

The two girls looked at each other. Although they had seen each other whilst changing on several occasions, it had all been totally innocent.

“Perhaps.” Jane said. “Why ?”

“Well, that DVD was hot, but I think that you two could do it a lot better. What would it take to find out ?”

The two girls whispered something to each other, and came up with a deal...

TO BE CONTINUED...

Popcorn · 09-09-2009, 12:40 PM

Wow
like it
=]
x

myself21 · 09-09-2009, 02:10 PM

Awesome!
I hope jane and simon hook up. =]

Raging Rob · 09-12-2009, 11:05 PM

Wow ShinyDemon you even have managed to start an amazing sub-plot!

Hunterman36 · 09-14-2009, 01:56 AM

WOW You absolutely have to continue

rahamn · 09-22-2009, 12:27 AM

I think this has more potential than the original story. Please keep going.

ShinyDemon · 09-22-2009, 08:49 AM

Thank you so much for your comments and ratings - I was beginning to feel as though readers were disappointed by this story, and I nearly laid this one to rest, but both hits and ratings are going up !
I'm pleased to say that this story will continue, although updates will be between 'Sisters Sleepover - The Sequel'.

insane44 · 09-22-2009, 04:20 PM

please finish both of them they're both amazing stories

Hunterman36 · 09-23-2009, 06:58 PM

I can't say it any better than wow so amazing great job I can't wait to read more

Kage · 09-28-2009, 05:44 AM

Dear god, no! I do not wish for you to stop this sub plot. It is interesting and I'm eagerly waiting for more.

sexydare · 07-15-2010, 02:36 PM

WOOOOOW
cant wait to find out what the girls do with him.

Looking forward to new chapters, (hope soon now that the footy has finished)

Also keep going with the sisters sleepover sequel

dabigone · 09-19-2010, 12:36 AM

Hey, just found this story again, I forgot how good it was! Keep up the good work, I can wait to see what happens! Looking forward to both this and the original to continue. You're one heck of a writer Shiny!

emmah100 · 09-19-2010, 10:59 AM

I got to page 5 and realized there was no more story...

Looking forward to your next post!

Thank you!!! (:

Chri5s · 09-20-2010, 05:01 AM

awesome story. hope you continue it soon =D

09-09-2009, 04:04 AM	#1
ShinyDemon getDare Sweetheart Join Date: May 2008 Posts: 277	Sisters Sleepover - The Sub Plot !!! Click here to read the completed story without user comments! Ok guys and girls - since the last update on "Sister's Sleepover - The Sequel - The Story Continues", I have been working on a little sub plot. This is now ready, and the only question was to whether to include this in the main story or as a standalone story. After a lot of thinking time, I felt that the main story already has a lot of characters, and to include more at this point may detract from the main plot. So I offer this - "Sisters Sleepover - The Sub Plot". The link is as follows... http://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthread.php?t=28060 Whilst this is a stand-alone story, it may help if you read "Sister's Sleepover - The Sequel - The Story Continues" as it has the build up to this. I should also mention that some of the characters were inspired by bazman, a fan of the stories. Whilst I don't normally take requests for characters, this fitted in with what I was planning. Enjoy... Last edited by Leopard; 04-29-2012 at 03:52 PM.

09-09-2009, 02:10 PM	#4
myself21 Member Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: New York Posts: 59	Awesome! I hope jane and simon hook up. =] __________________ Likes: Crossdressing, Acting like a girl, Anything Girly, Young Girls, Anal. Dislikes(But will do.): Pee, Animals, enema. Limit: Poop, Extreme Pain, Involving Unconsenting Others. 16/m/ny

09-22-2009, 08:49 AM	#8
ShinyDemon getDare Sweetheart Join Date: May 2008 Posts: 277	Thank you so much for your comments and ratings - I was beginning to feel as though readers were disappointed by this story, and I nearly laid this one to rest, but both hits and ratings are going up ! I'm pleased to say that this story will continue, although updates will be between 'Sisters Sleepover - The Sequel'. __________________ Check out my stories... Sister's Sleepover - T or D - http://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthread.php?t=11496 COMPLETE Sister's Sleepover - The Sequel - http://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthread.php?t=28060 COMPLETE Sister's Sleepover - The Sub Plot - http://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthread.php?t=31635 COMPLETE Sister's Sleepover - The Trilogy Concludes - http://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthread.php?t=107154 - IN PROGRESS

09-22-2009, 04:20 PM	#9
insane44 Member Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: US Posts: 77	please finish both of them they're both amazing stories __________________ 16/m/us i'm chill, ask anything, i'm not putting limits here send me the dare and i'll tell you. interested in finding a female dare partner age like 13-16 17 at the oldest

09-28-2009, 05:44 AM	#11
Kage Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2009 Posts: 200	Dear god, no! I do not wish for you to stop this sub plot. It is interesting and I'm eagerly waiting for more. __________________ [07:20:43] Anjelen: dual hit combo - sub under a desk. Swat their ass and their head hits the underside of the desk.

09-09-2009, 04:05 AM	#2
ShinyDemon getDare Sweetheart Join Date: May 2008 Posts: 277	Sisters Sleepover - The Sub Plot Simon could not believe his luck, finding the DVD poking out of the ‘Video-Me Booth’ that had an image of two girls undressing each other. The excitement on the bus ride home was obvious, although to observers it would look as though the group of teenage boys had just bought the latest chart CD. There were four boys huddled around, with one tightly gripping his latest acquisition. It was just a few stops until the bus arrived at Simon’s street, and the boys left the bus at speed. “The house should be empty, so we can watch this on the big television” Simon said as the group walked hastily towards his house. “Cool !” his friends Chris, Jack and Dave all said in unison. The four of them were already beginning to become aroused at the prospect of what they were about to see – it could, of course, all be a horrible ploy. However the group had used the ‘Video-Me’ booth a few times, and knew that the image for the DVD cover was taken during the recording session, so they were all hopeful. They had reached Simon’s house, and Simon put his key in the door. As they entered the large house, Simon hushed the group… silence. That was what he had been expecting, but just to make sure, he called out, “Anyone in ?” The only response was pure silence, confirming his hopes and expectations. The lads kicked off their shoes and rushed into the living room. Simon’s dad was fairly well off, and liked life’s little luxuries. This was immediately apparent from the living room. The plush leather sofa and chairs included two recliners that faced a huge plasma television which was mounted on the wall. Beneath the television was a selection of the latest and best branded hi-fi and video equipment. Simon claimed one of the recliners and immediately adjusted it to a comfortable, laid back position. He reached for the remotes, and the entertainment system sprang to life with clicks, whirrs and a few LEDs. He gave the DVD to Chris, and told him to put it in the machine – this was the first time that he had let the precious item leave his tightly gripped hands, but in his home he felt it was safe to do so. Jack took the other recliner, whilst Chris and Dave sat in the other seats. The ‘Video-Me’ logo appeared on the screen, followed by a short pause that seemed much longer than it actually was. Finally an image from inside the booth appeared, with two girls wearing clown masks. The music started playing “Hit Me Baby” by Britney Spears, and the girls started singing, and although you couldn’t see their faces due to the ‘Happy’ and ‘Sad’ clown masks, they didn’t seem too enthusiastic. Their singing was pretty awful however the group of boys didn’t mind at all, as the girls began to take off their clothes ! This, of course, was what they had been hoping for, but it was actually happening. This was amazing, watching two girls – strangers – stripping off their clothes. As the first song was finishing, both girls stood there wearing nothing but their underwear. The ‘happy’ clown was wearing a black bra and brief set, whilst the ‘sad’ clown was wearing a jade-green bra and thong. Both girls had amazing bodies. The second song began to play, and this was one by Tatu. At this point, the sad clown turned towards the happy clown and reached around her, unfastening her bra and allowing it to fall to the ground. The happy clown’s boobs were now on full display, and this pleased the group of lads who were glued to the screen. Each of them were now fully aroused, although their erections were hindered by each of their clothing. Sad clown had taken a step back, and was now slowly lowering happy clown’s briefs, revealing a well groomed pubic area. The briefs were just passing the knees, continuing their downward motion when all of a sudden the living room door swung open, startling the lads. “Boo !” shouted out Jane, Simon’s younger sister. She had a huge smile on her face, knowing that she would have probably scaring the shit out of her brother, and her plan had obviously worked. Simon looked shit-scared, partly from the shock of his sister scaring him, but also from the fact of what she had caught him and his friends watching. His eyes glanced at the screen, naturally causing Jane to also glance out of curiosity. Her mouth widened as she saw what was on the television screen. Simon scrambled with the remote to switch off the DVD, but in his haste he only succeeded in pausing the image on the screen. “Simon !” Jane said with a shocked tone in her voice. She stepped back, at which point Lauren, Chris’s younger sister (and Jane’s best friend) also appeared. She too was laughing at their ‘plan’ to scare Simon, but also stopped when she saw the screen. “What the fuck… is… this ?” Jane said, with pauses between the words. “We found it… at the mall…” Simon replied in all honesty, although he was ashamed his younger sister had caught him watching something like this. “Someone left it in the ‘Video-Me’ booth.” There was a long pause, then Jane broke the silence. “Someone actually did this in the booth at the arcade ? Shit, that takes some guts… and then to leave it there… what are they – stupid or just plain forgetful ?” “Or exhibitionists ?” Lauren offered. “Just don’t tell dad… please ?” Simon pleaded with his sister. “I won’t – so long as you let us watch it with you guys. I’m curious to know how far this goes !” Jane replied. The lads looked at each other, and none of them had any problems with a couple of girls who wanted to watch this ‘home-made porn’ with them – in fact they probably all were quite excited by the fact. The girls sat on the floor, and Simon restarted the DVD. The black briefs fell to the floor, and then happy clown proceeded to strip sad clown until she was also naked. The two naked girls then slowly and unenthusiastically danced until the end of the song. The third and final song began to play, at which point the two girls on the screen began to touch and rub each others bodies, which was extremely erotic to watch for both the boys and the two girls. For around three and a half minutes, the girls caressed each other until the music stopped, and a message appeared: “A ‘Video-Me’ Production”. The DVD whirred to a stop, and the group remained silent – taking in what they had just watched. Jane was the first to speak. “Wow !” was all she could manage. “That was awesome dude !” David said to Simon. Slowly conversations resumed, everyone agreeing how hot the show was. “Would you two ever do something like that ?” Jack asked, looking towards Jane and Lauren. “Not on video.” was Jane’s response. “But… you would… if it wasn’t on video ?” Jack continued. The two girls looked at each other. Although they had seen each other whilst changing on several occasions, it had all been totally innocent. “Perhaps.” Jane said. “Why ?” “Well, that DVD was hot, but I think that you two could do it a lot better. What would it take to find out ?” The two girls whispered something to each other, and came up with a deal... TO BE CONTINUED...

09-09-2009, 12:40 PM	#3
Popcorn Junior Member Join Date: Sep 2009 Posts: 6	Wow like it =] x

09-12-2009, 11:05 PM	#5
Raging Rob Member Join Date: Jul 2009 Posts: 93	Wow ShinyDemon you even have managed to start an amazing sub-plot!

09-14-2009, 01:56 AM	#6
Hunterman36 Distinguished Member Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: the moon Europa Posts: 646 Blog Entries: 2	WOW You absolutely have to continue

09-22-2009, 12:27 AM	#7
rahamn Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: Texas retired now Posts: 167	I think this has more potential than the original story. Please keep going.

09-23-2009, 06:58 PM	#10
Hunterman36 Distinguished Member Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: the moon Europa Posts: 646 Blog Entries: 2	I can't say it any better than wow so amazing great job I can't wait to read more

07-15-2010, 02:36 PM	#12
sexydare Account Banned Join Date: Jul 2010 Location: LINCOLNSHIRE Posts: 32	Another fantastic story WOOOOOW cant wait to find out what the girls do with him. Looking forward to new chapters, (hope soon now that the footy has finished) Also keep going with the sisters sleepover sequel

09-19-2010, 12:36 AM	#13
dabigone Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2010 Location: New York Posts: 161	Hey, just found this story again, I forgot how good it was! Keep up the good work, I can wait to see what happens! Looking forward to both this and the original to continue. You're one heck of a writer Shiny! __________________ 18/m PM me for whatever reason and I'll respond to every one! Ask me: http://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthread.php?t=57950 Dare me: http://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthread.php?t=57949 I'll let you know my likes and dislikes as I find them, but right now: Likes: masturbation, light humiliation, semi-public Dislikes: pee Limits: llegal, poop, family, others' participation

09-19-2010, 10:59 AM	#14
emmah100 Member Join Date: Oct 2009 Location: USA Posts: 43	:( I got to page 5 and realized there was no more story... Looking forward to your next post! Thank you!!! (:

09-20-2010, 05:01 AM	#15
Chri5s Junior Member Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Planet named EARTH Posts: 10 Blog Entries: 1	awesome story. hope you continue it soon =D