Fiction: Your Turn! - Page 2

anonimousbob · 07-22-2009, 02:12 AM

This is an amazing story, can't wait for some more

Komodo Jones · 07-22-2009, 12:22 PM

No cliffhanger this time but it still holds the hook that would make a reader continue to follow the story. I kind of figured that something along those lines was going to be in the ice chest. I am interested to see what is in the backpack though. I am interested to see what happens next.

PeterGibbons · 07-26-2009, 12:02 AM

I'll be posting the next part probably today or tomorrow. Remember, if you would like me to write more, let me know! Encouragement helps motivation a lot

maxim · 07-26-2009, 09:02 AM

Great start hope you contenue!

peaceloverocknroll · 07-30-2009, 11:42 AM

whoa truly spectacular, ur writing is technically almost perfect and the story has such a great plotline, excellent, please continue.

07-22-2009, 02:12 AM	#16
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07-22-2009, 12:22 PM	#17
Komodo Jones getDare Succubus Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: in your fantasies...it's ok you can admit it Posts: 1,755 Blog Entries: 97	No cliffhanger this time but it still holds the hook that would make a reader continue to follow the story. I kind of figured that something along those lines was going to be in the ice chest. I am interested to see what is in the backpack though. I am interested to see what happens next. __________________ KJ 38/male/partially bi/switch D/s Status: Protector, Dom and Daddy of pixie.dust I love meeting new, nice, smart people. I communicate through Discord mainly. What are my limits/likes/supplies? Click here! Check Out my Literary Works Targeting the Ignored [Fiction] Some Stuff I've Done (Non-Fiction)

07-26-2009, 09:02 AM	#19
maxim Account Banned Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: UNITED STATES Posts: 1,121 Blog Entries: 33	Great start hope you contenue! __________________ [SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]

07-30-2009, 11:42 AM	#20
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07-26-2009, 12:02 AM	#18
PeterGibbons Member Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: Arizona Posts: 86	I'll be posting the next part probably today or tomorrow. Remember, if you would like me to write more, let me know! Encouragement helps motivation a lot