Fiction: My first experience. Part 1

Flustro · 06-24-2009, 03:31 AM

Okay so this story is mostly true, but some parts are exaggerated or just made up.

lets get characters out of the way
Thomas(me) 12, really long hair, tech geek
Jake 13, short blond hair, video gamer
Sam 13, short black hair, "cool", kind of a pervert
Emily 12, bleach blond hair(lost a bet), most boys in the grade "like" her
Colette 13, curly brown hair, hot but sort of slutty
Carol 12, redhair, sweet, shy

School had only been out a week and Tom was already bored out of his mind.
Tom was just sitting on their deck browsing the web on his laptop.
He heard the phone ringing from inside.
He closed his laptop lid and ran inside to pick up the phone.
"Hello?"
"Hey Tom"
"Oh... hey Jake"
"Guess what?"
"What?"
"My parents are visiting my aunt and uncle and left me here alone all week!'
"Sweet dude!"
"Guess what else?"
"What?"
"I'm having a four day, five night sleepover!"
"Cool! Who's coming?"
"You, Emily, Colette, and Carol, oh and Sam."
"How did you get the girls to come?"
"Well I asked and they said yes!"
"Nice so when should I come over?"
"Anytime is good, but it doesn't really start 'til 6"
"See ya' there!"

Flustro · 06-24-2009, 04:34 AM

Okay guys, sorry part one was so slow, I'm just telling it the way it happened.

Thomas walked the steps up to Jake's door and knocked. The door swung open to reveal Jake smiling with excitement.
"Don't just stand there come in!" screamed Jake, while he pointed Tom to the living room.
"Thanks" replied Tom while walking in. Tom entered the living room a plopped down on the couch. He stared at the clock. 5:45. "People should start showing around 6" thought Tom.
Before he knew it the doorbell rang. Tom got up from his seat on the couch to see that Emily and Colette had arrived.
They greeted each other and talked for a bit before they all wound up on the couch watching The Simpsons. Somehow Caroline and Sam had managed to take their seats on the couch without being noticed.
When the credits came on Jake turned the tv off and started talking.
"Okay, what do you guys want to do first?"
"I have an idea" shouted Sam.
"What is it?" asked Jake.
"Strip Poker"
Jake gave him a grave look.
Sam chuckled and said, "Okay, what about truth or dare?"
The group nodded and murmured in agreement.

The game started out slow with things like "Have you ever kissed someone?" and "I dare you to like your palm".
It went on like that for a while until Sam said, "Okay Emily truth or dare?"
"Truth"
"Have you ever masturbated?"
Emily blushed and clenched her teeth until she finally came out a relutant
"Yes."
The group was shocked.
"What was it too?"
"That wasn't part of the question!" Interjected Jake trying to spare whatever shred of dignity Emily had left.
It was Emily's turn.
"Okay Tommy, truth or dare?"
"Dare."
"I dare you to run around the backyard."
"Okay, heh"
"I'm not finished, I dare you to run around the backyard, in your underwear!"
The group shrugged.
"Fine" said Tom as he started taking off his shirt.
The girls faces lit up.
In a few seconds Thomas was reduced to his tighty-whities.
"Okay, I'm going"
He was back in about a minute and started putting his clothes back on.
Tom's turn.
He turned towards Colette.
"Truth or dare?"
"Colette, I dare you to strip to your undies and give Sammy a blow-job"
Colette smiled and seemed eager in fact.
"Sure"
Within a minute she was down to a green bra and turquoise panties.
She moved towards Sam and slowly unbuttoned his pants reached her hand in and pulled out his dick.
The girls just stared at it. Jacob and I however were staring at her surprising developed body.
She bent leaned over and started sucking on it.
About a minute later she removed her mouth and went back to her spot.
"How did it taste?" inquired Sam
"What? Your cum? Well, it tasted kind of like salt flavored jello"
"Okay go on, it's your turn."
"Oh, okay, um.. Jake. Truth or Dare?"
"Dare of course!"
"Okay I dare you to strip naked!"
"What!" screamed Jake.
"Strip naked, it's only fair, I mean, I'm only in my underwear"
"Oh, well fine"
And he did, Jake slowly removed his clothing, until he was butt naked.
The girls(and sam) all stared at his erect 6 or 7 inch penis.
"Hey guys!" said Jake.
"I have an idea."
"What is it?" asked Thomas
"Teams"
"Huh?"
"Boy and girl teams, we just dare eachother as teams and everyone on the team has to do the dare"
The group seemed to like the idea, and they all agreed.
"This is going to rock!"

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Okay guys I'm going to stop telling the somewhat truth and just make the whole thing made up

Flustro · 06-24-2009, 05:03 AM

"Which team goes first?" asked Emily.
"Well since it is a guys turn I figure the boys should go first" replied Jake.
"Dam" said Emily.
"Hey guys can chose the dare this time?" inquired Sam.
"No! No way! Sam!" screamed Thomas.
"Come one, give him a chance.", pleaded Jake.
"FINE!" said Thomas.
"Okay, I dare you to be our slaves for the rest of the night!"
Jake smiled radiantly.
"Yes!", screamed Jake! "Good dare man!"
Thomas and the girls had confused looks on there faces.
They just sat there until Thomas finally asked.
"Wait, wait, wait, what do ya' mean by 'slaves'?"
"You're kidding."
"Nope"
"It means they do whatever we say!"
"WHAT!" screamed the girls.
"Isn't that a little unfair" said Tom.
"No" said Jacob.
"Yeah it is and you know it, listen I'm going home if you're going to be such an asshole."
"No, you started playing the game and you will keep playing the game until the sleepovers, well, over. You need the key to open the doors remember? You might as well cooperate."
"No" said Tom.
"Thats sad to here Tom. I guess you'll have to become a slave"
"Make me"
"If you haven't noticed both me and Sam are almost 160 pounds and almost 6 feet tall. You're only like four feet. Same goes for you girls"
"They've won" thought Tom.

I DON'T WANT TO FINISH THIS SOME ELSE FINISH IT

myswagga · 06-24-2009, 05:05 AM

come on keep going it is great!!

pranadevil · 06-24-2009, 10:02 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Flustro

I DON'T WANT TO FINISH THIS SOME ELSE FINISH IT

May I ask what the point in starting it was if you had zero intentions of finishing it? It kinda sounds to me more like you want to hear what other people would make your "friends" do in this situation, and so want them to finish the story.

If you're too lazy to complete your own story, don't go expecting someone else to do so, much less when it's just a generic "let's make the girls the slaves of the guys" opening.

Person · 06-24-2009, 12:40 PM

Come on, continue it, this is getting good. Please continue.

06-24-2009, 03:31 AM	#1
Flustro Junior Member Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: I won't be specific, but somewhere in the east San Francisco Bay Posts: 3	My first experience. Part 1 Okay so this story is mostly true, but some parts are exaggerated or just made up. lets get characters out of the way Thomas(me) 12, really long hair, tech geek Jake 13, short blond hair, video gamer Sam 13, short black hair, "cool", kind of a pervert Emily 12, bleach blond hair(lost a bet), most boys in the grade "like" her Colette 13, curly brown hair, hot but sort of slutty Carol 12, redhair, sweet, shy School had only been out a week and Tom was already bored out of his mind. Tom was just sitting on their deck browsing the web on his laptop. He heard the phone ringing from inside. He closed his laptop lid and ran inside to pick up the phone. "Hello?" "Hey Tom" "Oh... hey Jake" "Guess what?" "What?" "My parents are visiting my aunt and uncle and left me here alone all week!' "Sweet dude!" "Guess what else?" "What?" "I'm having a four day, five night sleepover!" "Cool! Who's coming?" "You, Emily, Colette, and Carol, oh and Sam." "How did you get the girls to come?" "Well I asked and they said yes!" "Nice so when should I come over?" "Anytime is good, but it doesn't really start 'til 6" "See ya' there!"

06-24-2009, 04:34 AM	#2
Flustro Junior Member Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: I won't be specific, but somewhere in the east San Francisco Bay Posts: 3	Part 2 Okay guys, sorry part one was so slow, I'm just telling it the way it happened. Thomas walked the steps up to Jake's door and knocked. The door swung open to reveal Jake smiling with excitement. "Don't just stand there come in!" screamed Jake, while he pointed Tom to the living room. "Thanks" replied Tom while walking in. Tom entered the living room a plopped down on the couch. He stared at the clock. 5:45. "People should start showing around 6" thought Tom. Before he knew it the doorbell rang. Tom got up from his seat on the couch to see that Emily and Colette had arrived. They greeted each other and talked for a bit before they all wound up on the couch watching The Simpsons. Somehow Caroline and Sam had managed to take their seats on the couch without being noticed. When the credits came on Jake turned the tv off and started talking. "Okay, what do you guys want to do first?" "I have an idea" shouted Sam. "What is it?" asked Jake. "Strip Poker" Jake gave him a grave look. Sam chuckled and said, "Okay, what about truth or dare?" The group nodded and murmured in agreement. The game started out slow with things like "Have you ever kissed someone?" and "I dare you to like your palm". It went on like that for a while until Sam said, "Okay Emily truth or dare?" "Truth" "Have you ever masturbated?" Emily blushed and clenched her teeth until she finally came out a relutant "Yes." The group was shocked. "What was it too?" "That wasn't part of the question!" Interjected Jake trying to spare whatever shred of dignity Emily had left. It was Emily's turn. "Okay Tommy, truth or dare?" "Dare." "I dare you to run around the backyard." "Okay, heh" "I'm not finished, I dare you to run around the backyard, in your underwear!" The group shrugged. "Fine" said Tom as he started taking off his shirt. The girls faces lit up. In a few seconds Thomas was reduced to his tighty-whities. "Okay, I'm going" He was back in about a minute and started putting his clothes back on. Tom's turn. He turned towards Colette. "Truth or dare?" "Colette, I dare you to strip to your undies and give Sammy a blow-job" Colette smiled and seemed eager in fact. "Sure" Within a minute she was down to a green bra and turquoise panties. She moved towards Sam and slowly unbuttoned his pants reached her hand in and pulled out his dick. The girls just stared at it. Jacob and I however were staring at her surprising developed body. She bent leaned over and started sucking on it. About a minute later she removed her mouth and went back to her spot. "How did it taste?" inquired Sam "What? Your cum? Well, it tasted kind of like salt flavored jello" "Okay go on, it's your turn." "Oh, okay, um.. Jake. Truth or Dare?" "Dare of course!" "Okay I dare you to strip naked!" "What!" screamed Jake. "Strip naked, it's only fair, I mean, I'm only in my underwear" "Oh, well fine" And he did, Jake slowly removed his clothing, until he was butt naked. The girls(and sam) all stared at his erect 6 or 7 inch penis. "Hey guys!" said Jake. "I have an idea." "What is it?" asked Thomas "Teams" "Huh?" "Boy and girl teams, we just dare eachother as teams and everyone on the team has to do the dare" The group seemed to like the idea, and they all agreed. "This is going to rock!" __________________________________________________ ______________ Okay guys I'm going to stop telling the somewhat truth and just make the whole thing made up

06-24-2009, 05:03 AM	#3
Flustro Junior Member Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: I won't be specific, but somewhere in the east San Francisco Bay Posts: 3	Part 3 "Which team goes first?" asked Emily. "Well since it is a guys turn I figure the boys should go first" replied Jake. "Dam" said Emily. "Hey guys can chose the dare this time?" inquired Sam. "No! No way! Sam!" screamed Thomas. "Come one, give him a chance.", pleaded Jake. "FINE!" said Thomas. "Okay, I dare you to be our slaves for the rest of the night!" Jake smiled radiantly. "Yes!", screamed Jake! "Good dare man!" Thomas and the girls had confused looks on there faces. They just sat there until Thomas finally asked. "Wait, wait, wait, what do ya' mean by 'slaves'?" "You're kidding." "Nope" "It means they do whatever we say!" "WHAT!" screamed the girls. "Isn't that a little unfair" said Tom. "No" said Jacob. "Yeah it is and you know it, listen I'm going home if you're going to be such an asshole." "No, you started playing the game and you will keep playing the game until the sleepovers, well, over. You need the key to open the doors remember? You might as well cooperate." "No" said Tom. "Thats sad to here Tom. I guess you'll have to become a slave" "Make me" "If you haven't noticed both me and Sam are almost 160 pounds and almost 6 feet tall. You're only like four feet. Same goes for you girls" "They've won" thought Tom. I DON'T WANT TO FINISH THIS SOME ELSE FINISH IT

06-24-2009, 05:05 AM	#4
myswagga Member Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: usa Posts: 92	come on keep going it is great!! __________________ Male USA

06-24-2009, 12:40 PM	#6
Person getDare Sweetheart Join Date: May 2009 Location: USA Posts: 273	Come on, continue it, this is getting good. Please continue.