09-10-2008, 05:10 PM
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Join Date: May 2008
Location: Canada
Posts: 106
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okay
this is a good story and I like the fact that it is spelt and punctuated properly. But if you want to make some of the teens slaves or some thing make it consensual like they lost the game or something.
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