best english lesson ever!

[batman]

gotcha no slaves. im glad no one said to do that because i like the way ist different.

[batman]

some people may have noticed i gave no description oy Liam. its because i thought that id leave that bit up to your imaginations.




They arrived at Helens house in about five minutes she lived close. He got in through the door and it was instantly shut and bolted behind him.
“what’s that about?” Liam asked.
“just to keep us safe” Helen answered honestly.
Liam’s heart started to beat a little bit quicker, he didn’t know whether it was excitement, anticipation, nervousness or fear.
Liam followed the girls in to the kitchen where they proceeded to make snacks and drinks. As they did Liam started to check out Hannah and katy.
Hannah was the average height for her age with shoulder length brown hair. Het tits were about a b cup and she had a clear hour glass shape to her which Liam found quite sexy.
Katy was also average height for her age with c cup tits and blond hair that went down to a nice strong bum. She also had big lips. The sort of lips that Liam wanted wrapped around his cock.
He was brought back to reality by a call from the living room. He walked in and saw that the sofas and tables had been pushed to the edge of the room. To make space on the floor, Liam could only wonder why.
“my parents are away for the night so you can stay as long as you like.”
Liam’s parents were away to so he could stay as long as he wanted.
“enough talk let’s play” said Hannah. “I’ll go first. umm truth.”
The girls had never played truth or dare before and Liam could tell. It might have been that they were to eager or maybe that Hannah picked truth first implied that they didn’t know a lot about each other.
“whats the furthest youve gone with a guy?” asked katy.
“I sucked off matty” there was a round of giggles and gasps but Liam was more surprised that she did that kind of thing.
“Liam truth or dare?” asked Hannah
He thought for a second, but of course he was thinking with his penis.
“dare” he said.
“striptoyourunderwear!” Helen blurted out.
“what was that?” Liam asked.
“strip to your underwear”
As instructed Liam stripped to his underwear with a slight tent in his shorts. The girls noticed and giggled. This was already pretty intense and it was only his first turn! His mind wondered for a moment of the possibilities and his tent got a bit bigger.
“Helen truth or dare?”
“truth” dam he wanted her to pick dare.
“are you a virgin?” he asked.
“no” this was the answer Liam wanted to hear. This meant she was confident enough for sex.
“katy truth or dare” asked Helen
“umm hehe dare hehe.” She obviously hadn’t played this before.
Liam took his chance
“I dare you to get naked and stay naked for the rest of the game.”
She sat there, sort of shocked but not unpleasantly shocked. Then she shrugged and got up.
She threw her jumper of and then slowly undid each button of her shirt. Slowly revealing a lacy pink bra. The tent got bigger. Then she slid her skirt down her thighs to reveal a matching set of knickers. The tent got bigger. Then she let her knickers fall to the floor revealing a shaved wet pussy. If the tent was any bigger it would have hit him in the face. Then she removed her bra revealing a lovely pair of stiff nipples.
“Liam you look happy” she said when finished.
“how could you tell” he said sarcastically.

[Komodo Jones]

I know I already commented on this today but I just read the most recent part and I have to say excellent improvement. Take the time do the details makes a lot of difference. Agreeing with the other people, don't really add the slave/master thing. If you're going with the idea of truth or dare, you kind of want to keep that theme going since you did use the word "game." Looking forward to the next part.

[anonimousbob]

I am thoroughly enjoying this and look forward to more

[wicked]

um.... too much free time. how many friends do you have?

I would wait to finish the story next week. it's going on too fast. I'll read the last part you made some other time.

no slaves. slaves are dull.

awesome story.

[Coyote]

I just started reading and i'm glad i did. Nice Job!!

Keep it Up

[HSsportsstar 1]

keep it up sounds great, i really like reading it, leaves me wanting more every time

[batman]

ive noticed people are telling me to expand it out but this was supposed to be a quick thing to find out if i was any good. so ill probobly finish this one soon and then write anouther.

[firenight]

go on this so alsome

[wicked]

Just improve on the grammar and this could be better than it already is =)