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Old 05-06-2010, 11:26 PM   #16
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Brilliant! keep it up can't wait to see what's next : )
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As you know every reader has a certain genre that they like to read. My main one are thriller/suspense novels but on getdare that's a bit different...but I digress. I can say that I am not entirely fond of over sadistic stories. Just getting pleasure out of inflicting pain, kind of contributes to the common misconception that dominants are evil. Having said that though, I am enjoying reading your story mainly because of the style Switching from the viewpoints of first and third person is a unique touch and you spare no details in your writing. While this may not be my style of story that I enjoy, I encourage you to keep writing as you have been. You have a good story on your hands and I wish you the best of luck as, and if, you continue.
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As you know every reader has a certain genre that they like to read. My main one are thriller/suspense novels but on getdare that's a bit different...but I digress. I can say that I am not entirely fond of over sadistic stories. Just getting pleasure out of inflicting pain, kind of contributes to the common misconception that dominants are evil. Having said that though, I am enjoying reading your story mainly because of the style Switching from the viewpoints of first and third person is a unique touch and you spare no details in your writing. While this may not be my style of story that I enjoy, I encourage you to keep writing as you have been. You have a good story on your hands and I wish you the best of luck as, and if, you continue.
Thank you. It may suit your tastes through time as well, I have a few surprises in my pocket. I understand your concerns about misconceptions, and, as a Dom I can relate. However, for me I use my writing as an outlet for my overly sadistic nature. I do personally have a high level of sadism within me, so much so that I've even thought about talking to a psych about it, however, for the time being writing keeps my levels to a reasonable level. However, I'm not purely a sadist. As I said I am a Dominant, and when it comes to actual relationships, whether vanilla or M/s or whatever, I am caring, thoughtful and know the limitations of consensual fun and abuse. While this story may seem a bit sadistic right now, as I said it is mainly an outlet for that side of me to keep me from lashing out on people, I would never hurt anyone and have enough moral fortitude to keep myself restrained but there's always that ingrained feeling of sadism and I have to let it out. It's not strong enough to cause me to lash out but it is strong enough to require some release.

However, as the story progresses, which it most certainly will for at least a few more chapters. It will contain elements everyone can enjoy. The sadists, the masochists, the lovers, the fighters, the story lovers, the ones here for a quick bit of pleasure, whatever. I try to accommodate all audiences in various parts as I contain all those sides within me as well and a good author should be able to express himself entirely through his story, to expand and broaden genres, and cross boundaries without losing substance and the essence of the story itself.

Keep reading. I'm sure you'll be surprised.
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And to everyone else who has been posting comments. Thank you, glad to see people are reading.
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Chapter 4 “New Friends”
To the wonderful people of Seattle, WA.
Currently in my possession are two young females approximately 20-29 years old. One’s a blonde the other a brunette. Both are very frightened and at my complete mercy. One of these girls has ties to your city. Some of you reading this article may know her. Unfortunately, I will not be revealing her name. But, as some consolation, if you are currently related to or friends with a missing person in your area, she may be the one I’m holding. Just know that she is alive…for now, though she is suffering a great deal for my entertainment. If she is cooperative and if I get the publicity I so desire, she’ll be returned…relatively unharmed. I hope this allows your minds to sit well.
Sincerely,
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To the great city of Pittsburgh.
You may not know me, though you might. You certainly will know of my deeds after today. For if you don’t, well you’ll be the cause of these two young girl’s, which I currently hold in my possession, death. It’ll be on your hands. So make sure this gets the press and attention I so desire. A few of you in this town might know the girl I’m holding. She’s young, pretty, blonde hair, and has been here before. I know at least one person in this city is related to her so take it from me, she’s being…taken care of. Sleep well, now that you know your…acquaintance…is alive.
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I wrote ten more of these letters, all just as vague. All, however, are completely true. These girls do have ties to all these cities, relatives, friends, colleagues, classmates, whatever. I may be labeled many things, but liar is not one of them. Every word I tell you is true, I just carefully conceal my truth so that you can’t use it against me. I will slowly reveal more and more as time goes on and this game begins to bore me. But until then, just enjoy the “show.”


Piglet laid in anguish listening to the sounds of the sobbing girl, she knew not where it came from but she could sense a horrible fear in her cries. She knew this girl must be new and not someone he had been hiding from her. Those were not sobs of pain or punishment but of pure fear.

“Hello? Who’s there?” piglet said in a small whisper, hoping he wasn’t in the room to hear.
Silence.
“Hello? Can you hear me?”
Nothing.

She realized either the girl couldn’t communicate, couldn’t hear her, or he was in the room and she was too frightened. She hoped for one of the first two.

Then she heard the door open and his footsteps come closer to her.

“I see you’re trying to get acquainted with our new little friend eh?”
“Who is she? Why did you take her too?”
“Aww, is poor little piglet feeling a bit jealous that Master’s attention isn’t solely on her? Truth is, it was a complete surprise. She happened by, and I couldn’t resist. Her cute little face, perfect tight ass ready to be fucked for the first time, sweet little body of a gymnast small, compact, easy to throw around and have some fun with. How could I pass that up?”
“How can you do this? How can you be so cruel and cold?”
“Cruel and cold? Most men like me would have raped you and killed you by now, I’m doing you a favour, I’m keeping you alive and caring for you. my only cruelty is when you displease me. Granted it may not be the most comfortable living conditions, but you’re alive nonetheless.”
“Please, just let her go, you said it was an accident, and just happened, you can let her go and not worry about it.”
“But that’s just the thing, I can’t. Unlike you she knows where I live, she saw my face, I can never let her go, she’s going to live and die here. You on the other hand, have a chance. Besides, why do you care about her so much, you haven’t even seen her, you don’t know her, why do you care what happens to her?”
“Because, she seems so scared, I know how she felt. Please, just let her go and I’ll endure anything you planned for her.”
“Sorry, but as amazing as an offer that might sound, why would I want to focus all my attention on one slave when I got two to play with. Now I’m done talking to you, time to shut you up.” With that he shoved a large ring gag into her mouth, wedged nicely behind her teeth forcing her jaw open to joint popping proportions.

Once the gag was in place, he tied her hair back into a nice tight ponytail. Then he walked behind her and grabbed the end of the butt plug holding in the enema that’s been inside her all night.

“When I pull this out feel free to let out all the fluid. You should be nice a clean.”

He pulls the plug and a gush of water comes flooding out, most of it he catches in a bucket. He takes the bucket and places the foul smelling fluid under her nose.

“You smell this? You’ll be drinking it with breakfast if you fail to please me with your next task so consider yourself warned.”

With that he walks behind her again and pulls out a large curved asshook with a two and a half inch diameter metal ball on the end, with the main rod approximately one and a half inches. He places the ball against her sphincter and begins to press on it. Her, nearly virgin asshole tightens up and refuses to let it in, the only thing ever in there was the enema nozzle from the night before, nothing ever this big. After some forcing her butt slowly starts to open up and she begins to scream through her gag. It forces it’s way in and he hears the distinct pop as the widest part passes through and glides deep into her bowels. Piglet is in tears as her ass is penetrated even deeper until the hook’s curve meets her crack and lays on her back. Inside of her is nearly seven inches of cold steel with a large ball stretching her insides even more. But that’s not the worst of it, he ties a rope to the ring on the end of the hook that’s laying on her back and ties the other end to her hair. Using some skilled rope work he tightens it up so that her head is forced backwards until her neck is straining and the hooks is forced deep into her. He loosens is just a bit so that moving her head forward will be possible but only about two inches of movement enough to force the hook in and out of her ass. He doesn’t want her immobile, he wants her to force herself to hold her head back painfully far rather than just having it tied that far back. Also he wants some movement for the next part of his morning ritual with her.

He moves to the front of her table and smacks her face a few times.

“You better make me happy with this, or that drink is going right in this open mouth.”

With that he pulls out his rock hard cock, it’s large not porn star huge but bigger than most men, just shy of eight inches long and about two in diameter. He grabs her head, eliciting a scream as the hook drives into her stretched butt. With one quick motion he rams his cock to the back of her throat causing her to gag instantly, a reaction he’ll fix over time as he conditions her throat. She furiously works her tongue up and down his member as best she can with the pain from him forcing her head back and forth causing her ass to get fucked, and the inability to breathe much from her airway getting cut off. She does all she can to please his cock, not cause she wants to or because she likes it but simply because the thought of drinking that liquid makes her sick just thinking about it. She is beginning to realize, acceptance of her condition causes things to be a lot easier. After five long minutes for her he cums in her mouth and she quickly tries to swallow with her mouth still forced open.

Secretly she thinks, “Wow, this guy is fast, maybe I won’t have to endure as much if he’s gonna blow that quick.” But then she hears something that chills her to the bone.

Squealing from behind a gag, a distinct sound she remembers from when her mouth was full of that awful rubber ball.

“Thank you for the warm up, piglet. Not the best but you won’t be drinking that concoction, at least not yet. Now for me to pop this little slut’s anal cherry.” He walks over to piglet and takes out her contacts so she can see everything that happens. There she sees him standing, masked of course, in front of a traditional sawhorse and he can see legs stretched to each side, and arms coming down on the other side. He steps back, lets piglet see the girl, helpless and scared tied to this device. Piglet begins to sob and tries in vain to beg through her gag.

“Don’t waste your breath slut, this little girl is gonna take every inch of me in this tight little asshole of hers. And I can tell, it’s never even felt a finger in it. You ready to witness this little whore’s final shred of innocence get ripped away?”

piglet is in tears at this point as he positions himself behind the girl’s perfect ass that’s propped up at perfect height for his cock to penetrate deep into her. He takes hold of her hips and the feeling makes her start to shake, when she feels the tip of his cock at the entrance to her forbidden hole she cries out through the giant rubber ball in her mouth, muffled cries for mommy and daddy, her boyfriend, and anything else she can think of. And in one swift motion he pulls on her hips and drives forward, her head thrown back and she screams as his giant cock fills up her tiny virgin ass. Over and over he pulls out and thrusts all the way back in. Vigorously pounding away at her as she cries and bawls her eyes out, tears flooding down from behind her blindfold. He grunts and smacks her ass over and over as the merciless fucking continues for well over forty-five minutes. By the time he’s done both girls are in tears, pools of salty water is below both of them from their tears falling down, small traces of blood are seen coming down the girls ass from small tears in her rectum from the brutal fucking. One last smack that doesn’t even get a yelp out of her and he walks around to in front of her.

He removes her blindfold and gag and ear plugs, then walks to piglet and does the same.

“I’ll leave you two to get to know each other. I’ll be back in about three hours. You can talk about anything, except who you are. Either of you say any name other than the ones I give you, you’ll both be spending your last few minutes in a box buried on my property. I got cameras recording you so I know if you break this rule. By the way, welcome to your new life, I think I’ll call you fuckhole. Fuckhole, meet piglet.”

Both girls still to hoarse from screaming don’t even have the energy to say anything back as he walks out of the room.
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nice story i loved it keep it up
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Amazing story man, keep writing! I want more! Rated 5 stars
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Thanks. I'll prob write the next section today or tomorrow.
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about how old are they? the other girl sounds like she is younger
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That bit of information hasn't been fully revealed. If you read the first newspaper letter in Chapter 4 you can see they are 20-29. But I can't divulge any more information. But you would be correct in assuming the second girl is younger.
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Ahhhhh, the story is malicious, vicious, and delicious. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Sorry it was a little late from when I stated. I got caught up with some stuff. But here's the next section.



Chapter 5 “Deaf Leading the Blind”
I’ve grown tired of just leading on the police. I watched the news this morning and there was only a thirty second segment about how I have two girls “allegedly kidnapped” and for people to be on the lookout for someone suspicious. I guess I need to show them proof. piglet and fuckhole will not like this. I wonder which one I should use? Lets list out the pros and cons of each:

fuckhole. She’s young and cute, just like I like them. She’s easily scared and doesn’t react well at all to pain which could prove to be very entertaining. However, I have no intentions of ever releasing her and I don’t want to do something drastic as proof that’ll make her less attractive to me in the long run.

piglet. She’s very strong willed which creates a very fun game of trying to break her spirit. She’s able to withstand much more pain, thus, allowing me to exact much harsher treatment on her, to satisfy my deepest sadistic desires, without her passing out and causing problems. However, she’s older, wiser, very observant and cunning. I can sense her trying to develop some form of escape plan. Also people will have known she’s gone, so anything I send of hers will automatically set off the cops as to who is missing thus leading them closer to me.

Oh, decisions, decisions.

Well I’ll go with my gut feeling on this one.


As fuckhole and piglet talked he listened in to their conversation through microphones set up in the room. He wanted to learn as much as he could about them so he could exploit their emotional weaknesses. They talked about school, where they were from, how their families were, and other general conversation. I could tell they were avoiding the “elephant in the room” and not talking about their situation. However, finally piglet gathered the courage to bring it up.

“So, how did he get you?”
“What?” fuckhole replied.
“How did he get you?” piglet asked again, “Did he kidnap you or abduct you?”
“No, neither, I stopped at the house for directions and gas, me and my boyfriend were camping and I left…” and fuckhole proceeded to tell the story.
“So he didn’t plan to abduct you?”
“No, not unless he somehow got my boyfriend to piss me off, know I’d leave, and make me run out of gas just in front of his house magically.”
“That’s good, you gave me an idea.”
“What?! How is that good? What kind of idea?”
“If he didn’t plan on taking you like he did me, that means he has no plan to take care of you. He’s told me he planned to take me so it’s all set up, look around, do you think any of this was just by chance?”
“No, I guess not.”
“Exactly, he’s too good to screw up with me, but you’re a wild card, he doesn’t know what to expect.”
“So what do I do?”
“Here’s the plan…”
“Wait, what if he’s listening? He said he’s recording us.”
“That’s a risk we have to take, we can’t wait any longer. Besides he said he’s leaving, and told us when he’d be back that won’t give him enough time to review the tapes, it’s already been at least two and a half hours. We just gotta do this as soon as he gets back. This is what you gotta do…” and piglet proceeds to explain her “Master Plan” to fuckhole, hoping he can’t hear. Unfortunately, he hears every word, no matter how quiet they talk.
“THAT’S ENOUGH” he says as he busts into the room, “WHAT HAVE YOU TWO SLUTS BEEN TALKING ABOUT?!”
“Nnn-nootthin-gg,” fuckhole squeaks out.
“That’s ‘nnn-nottthinngg SIR’ do you understand fuckhole?”
“Yes Sir,” she replies.
“Good, I’ll be watching the tapes in the morning to make sure neither of you broke my rule, but for now lets have some fun.”

He then unties both girls from their positions and brings them both to their knees but back to back so they can’t see what’s happening to each other. He cuffs their hands behind them and says, “Now we’re gonna play a game.” With that he gets some earplugs and shove them deep in piglets ears, followed by covering the plugs in candle wax, the heat of which brings screams from piglet. Once her ear is completely covered in wax all sound is gone for piglet, she’s become completely deaf. He then takes a pair of, what look like swimming goggles except they have a metal band instead of the rubber band, and there’s two large pads on them that go over the ears. He places them on piglet and then adds a small padlock to the back. She can now still see but there is no way the plugs are coming out of her ears without this thing coming off.

He then moves to fuckhole, for her it is a simple task. He simply takes another metal band, this one with a solid metal plate in front and secures it to her head effectively blinding her.

Then to prevent both of them from slipping the bands off their heads he attaches metal collars to each of them, locking them on and bringing two leather straps from each of their pieces of “eyewear” in front of their ears and locked them to the sides of the collar and one leather strap from the back of the band to the back of the collar. They are now deaf and blind.

All of a sudden a light starts flashing above the door, and a siren starts blaring. He screams “COPS” and jumps up and without thinking runs out the door. The two girls look at each other, fuckhole hoping she’s looking the right direction.

“What did he just say?” piglet asks.
“He said cops” replied fuckhole.
“WHAT? Talk slower so I can read your lips my ears are plugged but I can see.”
“He…said…cops,” fuckhole said much slower.
“No way, this is our chance. He left the door open. Can you grab my hand?”
fuckhole reaches over and takes piglet’s hand behind her.
“Good, now just follow me, if I ask you something squeeze once for yes, twice for no, and if you hear him squeeze really tight over and over and pull my arms in the direction you hear it, understand?”
One squeeze.
“Lets go. Stay quiet”
One squeeze again.

The girls make their way down the hall piglet looking everywhere for him. They make their way to the living room and piglet peers around the corner and sees nothing in the room, then looks to the other side and sees down the entrance hall and the front door is wide open. She figures he went out that way to find the cops and talk to them so she decides to lead to the back. They run across the living room as quietly as possible. Once across they enter the kitchen and she sees a pistol laying on the kitchen counter. She pulls fuckhole close and whispers, “Hold on a second, I’m grabbing something.” fuckhole squeezes once and lets go. piglet grabs the gun and puts her hand back to fuckhole’s and fuckhole shakes when she feels the barrel brush against her, instantly knowing what it is. piglet feels her shake and whispers, “It’s ok, we’re safe, he’s not around. Lets go.” With that they move to the backdoor in the kitchen and piglet opens it with a little difficulty and they run out. Soon they’re in the woods bordering the back of the property only a hundred or so feet from the backdoor. piglet does her best to lead them through the woods and they trip and stub their toes on everything but they keep moving knowing if they stop he’ll find them. After about ten minutes of running they know he’s got to be back by know and already looking for them. They keep running and come to a small stream covered in brush.

“Stop here for a minute, get yourself some water, it seems clean, we’ll need it to keep going.”
One squeeze and they both lean down and try to lap up some water as best they can, it tastes amazing as they haven’t eaten or drank anything in a long time.
“You doin ok?”
One squeeze.
“Good. I’m not sure where we are, do you happen to remember the way you came in? Or roughly which direction?”
A small pause then a squeeze.
“Good. Now if it was north squeeze my thumb, south my pinky, west my middle finger, or east either my index or ring.” It sounded confusing but that way she wouldn’t have to discern between which was which they were easy to figure out.
A quick squeeze on her middle finger and she asked, “So you came in from the west?”
One squeeze.
“Then it’s east we go.” She’s glad now that her dad took her camping all those years ago and taught her how to navigate in the dark.

With that they set off running. Luckily the stream ran roughly east-west and they just followed it as best they could. piglet knew following the stream would be dangerous as it’s a easy tactic to be caught but it was their fastest way to the road. She just hoped fuckhole’s hearing was good.
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Aw man, did you have to leave it there? Haha, its great!
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Yes I had to. I'm evil. I leave people guessing...it'll continue don't worry.
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