09-24-2011, 11:10 PM | #1 |
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The Moronification of men due to Feminism
Hello all,
I recently got an assignment at school to write an essay and I actually found the topic quite interesting. The topic was "The 'moronification' of men is a further sign that feminism has taken away male role models for adolescent boys". I just finished my essay, but thought it was a pretty interesting subject and would like to hear your opinions.
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09-25-2011, 01:37 PM | #2 |
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You should post some of your essay so we can comment more. It sounds like an interesting topic.
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09-25-2011, 11:36 PM | #3 | |
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Hehe, well it is a small little essay (Approx. 500 words). I dont really like the quality of it myself, but I guess I might as well post it.
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In my own personal opinion, yes, Feminism has led to the moronification of men (Both in image and in practicality). I hope that the quality wasnt to bad
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09-26-2011, 12:13 AM | #4 |
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This is all just speculation, and you don't have a lot of evidence linking the two.
All in all a very weak argument.
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09-26-2011, 12:27 AM | #5 | |
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Thanks for your feedback though, I am more interested in the topic than my not so great writing
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09-26-2011, 12:32 AM | #6 |
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Here's the problem... if i respond to this topic in the way that i want to, i will probably end up doubling your essay length, without even really trying. I'll give you the benefit of the doubt and say that you did what you could with a throughly shitty essay prompt. It is bad writing in and of itself, but more importantly, it invites bad writing. For starters "moronification" is not a word. But most importantly, it implies the very condition it is asking you to write about. The section of the prompt that reads "... is a further sign..." means that by simply accepting the topic and writing about it, you are tacitly agreeing to the notion that feminism has already removed role models for adolescent males. Thus, it pushes the writer towards agreeing with the premise, as the alternative is to admit that either the "moronification" of men is either not feminism's fault, or that if it is, it does not remove role models. That's what we call a terrible prompt.
I'll grant, i was an arrogant bastard in high school, but i was also a champion debater. I'd have been tempted to return that prompt with a single page containing two sentences, "This is a stupid prompt, and a waste of my time and yours. Please try again." What i probably would have done is written 500 words rejecting the entire underlying premise of the prompt... and then called it stupid. |
09-26-2011, 12:47 AM | #7 | |
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Yeah, I will agree to the fact that the essay is short, we were put on a word limit and a small amount of time. I would have loved to have written more and gone into a more detailed argument, but I didnt have the time and definitially not the skill.
The question was not verry well worded and I did not belive it was verry good, but it counts towards my final grade, so I have to do it. I did not really start the thread for a response on my essay, but for more opinions on the starting questtion. The teachers based the question on this article from the sydney Morning Herald, however we were told not to refrence it Quote:
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09-26-2011, 12:51 AM | #8 |
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only a short reply because i have this this called work.
the "Moronification" and commercials is nothing to do with Feminism its to do with the industry proving how it is simple and easy to do, if you use "an airhead of a woman" you will encounter wrath, if you use a guy they wont make too much of a fuss, simple as that.
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09-26-2011, 01:04 AM | #10 |
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I have two further points:
1. Don't feel bad if your essay was crap, that article was crap too. 2. What the fuck are they showing on television in Australia? The only thing i watch from Australia is Hawthorn Hawks football. |
09-26-2011, 01:15 AM | #11 |
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Haha, thanks. I actually got above average marks in my english exam yay, surprise . And I am not even from Australia, I don't see why the teachers chose a news article from there.
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