Fiction: 18 years old

Slushpup · 04-11-2011, 07:20 AM

This is my first story so please tell if it is good or bad. I will take any suggestions to make it better.

Friday: It was a normal Friday. I had swimming afterschool. I decided to stay late. I was having a shower in a cubical when a boy called James walked in. He slipped his phone out of his blazer. He poked it through the curtain and got some pictures of my pussy and tits. When I was finished I went to a spare cubical where I had left my cloths. I found a note. The note said:

" Ok I have 5 great pictures of you naked. So from now on you will do what e ever I say or I'll put in the school newspaper and on the school website. I will be on MSN when you get home. Talk to you soon my slave."
There was a copy of the pictures attached the the note.

I ran home and logged on to msn to find James was online. He started a chat with me.
James: Hey my sexy slave.
Me: I'll do any to get those pictures back but I won't be your slave you sicko.
James: I don't want anything esle so it's that or the pictures go public.
Me: Ok fine you win.
James: I know that your parents will be away for 4 weeks. Is that right.
Me: Yes
James: so I'll be moving in. I'll be there soon I'll send you my rules. Goodbye for now.
With that he signed off. A couple of minuets later a got the rules for James in an email. The email said:
My Rules
1. You will address me as master or sir.
2. You will call your self this slut or this slave not I.
3. You may not masturbate or cum with out permission.
4. At school you'll act as if I'm your boyfriend.
5. At home you will always be naked.
6. You will sleep in a cupboard and I will sleep in your bed.
If you disobey or brake the rules you will be punished.
Master James

So I stripped and sat back on the desk chair thinking about what is in store for me. 5 minuets later the door bell rang. It was James.
"hello master" I said quietly.
"Hello my little slut. Can I come in?"
"Yes of course master." I stepped a side letting him in.
" show me to your room so I can unpack" he said while his fingers started moving around my body.
" Right this way master"

Daring nemder · 04-11-2011, 08:01 AM

Great start plz wright more.

Ozpossum · 04-11-2011, 02:10 PM

good story pls post again soon

irish · 04-12-2011, 10:43 AM

yeh write some more want to see where this goes?

Slushpup · 04-12-2011, 03:27 PM

Hey I'll write more soon Im very busy at the moment. I could do with soon helpful ideas so pm if you have any.

Bidz4321 · 04-14-2011, 08:52 AM

Looks like a really promising story, keep it up!

One thing I would say, is slow it down slightly. Looking forward to the next installment.

04-11-2011, 07:20 AM	#1
Slushpup Junior Member Join Date: Apr 2011 Posts: 14 Blog Entries: 1	18 years old This is my first story so please tell if it is good or bad. I will take any suggestions to make it better. Friday: It was a normal Friday. I had swimming afterschool. I decided to stay late. I was having a shower in a cubical when a boy called James walked in. He slipped his phone out of his blazer. He poked it through the curtain and got some pictures of my pussy and tits. When I was finished I went to a spare cubical where I had left my cloths. I found a note. The note said: " Ok I have 5 great pictures of you naked. So from now on you will do what e ever I say or I'll put in the school newspaper and on the school website. I will be on MSN when you get home. Talk to you soon my slave." There was a copy of the pictures attached the the note. I ran home and logged on to msn to find James was online. He started a chat with me. James: Hey my sexy slave. Me: I'll do any to get those pictures back but I won't be your slave you sicko. James: I don't want anything esle so it's that or the pictures go public. Me: Ok fine you win. James: I know that your parents will be away for 4 weeks. Is that right. Me: Yes James: so I'll be moving in. I'll be there soon I'll send you my rules. Goodbye for now. With that he signed off. A couple of minuets later a got the rules for James in an email. The email said: My Rules 1. You will address me as master or sir. 2. You will call your self this slut or this slave not I. 3. You may not masturbate or cum with out permission. 4. At school you'll act as if I'm your boyfriend. 5. At home you will always be naked. 6. You will sleep in a cupboard and I will sleep in your bed. If you disobey or brake the rules you will be punished. Master James So I stripped and sat back on the desk chair thinking about what is in store for me. 5 minuets later the door bell rang. It was James. "hello master" I said quietly. "Hello my little slut. Can I come in?" "Yes of course master." I stepped a side letting him in. " show me to your room so I can unpack" he said while his fingers started moving around my body. " Right this way master"

04-12-2011, 10:43 AM	#4
irish Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2011 Location: ireland Posts: 102	yeh write some more want to see where this goes? __________________ 18 male ireland likes-mild pain,anal,orgasm control,pee,other,light public dislikes- scat, severe pain, mild public limits- permanent,illegal, family , extreme pain, extreme public Ask me anything My Story: Sister needs comforting from the Zombies

04-12-2011, 03:27 PM	#5
Slushpup Junior Member Join Date: Apr 2011 Posts: 14 Blog Entries: 1	Busy Hey I'll write more soon Im very busy at the moment. I could do with soon helpful ideas so pm if you have any.

04-11-2011, 08:01 AM	#2
Daring nemder getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Mar 2010 Posts: 478	Great start plz wright more.

04-11-2011, 02:10 PM	#3
Ozpossum Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2010 Posts: 130	good story pls post again soon

04-14-2011, 08:52 AM	#6
Bidz4321 Member Join Date: Jan 2010 Posts: 49	Looks like a really promising story, keep it up! One thing I would say, is slow it down slightly. Looking forward to the next installment.