This is my story

sub_at_heart · 07-18-2008, 11:23 PM

This story is fictional, fantasy really. The characters are real, though the
names have been changes for privacy's sake. It is my first story and I hope you like it. I want to thank Feindish, for pushing me to write it. And Master,
should you read this, I hope with all of my heart that it may make you proud of me.

Time slipped by slowly as I lay waiting in the dark room. No sound could
be heard, apart from my breathing. How long have I been here? It seems like many hours, but it really was maybe only one. I shift in my bonds, and try to get more comfortable.

Who am I, you ask? Well, my name is Laisren. I am a 17 year old girl
with, well, you might say a full figure. I am 5'5'' and weigh about 150 pounds.
I boast 36 D breasts on a rather curvy body. I have short hair, with blond
highlights and hazel eyes, and this is my story.
Strapped to a spanking horse and left to await my fate, I could not be more anxious. Master just said he had a surprise, though I am still not sure
whether it is good or bad. I suppose I will just have to find out. For now, I
wait.

I dozed off a little, with nothing to do, but was brought abruptly back
to awareness as the dungeon door opened. In strode my Master, wearing his normal outfit of a pair of jeans and a t-shirt.
Master walked past me to our treasure chest by the wall. I hear him
rummaging inside before everything goes quiet. I jump as I feel his hand on my
back, I had not heard him approach.

"Are you ready for your surprise, little one?" He growled.

"Yes Master" I moan, as his hand moves lower down my ass.

I feel his hand leave my body before,

THWACK!

I gasp as I feel the leather paddle hit my ass.

"That feels so good Master" I moan, after recieving another welcomed
smack of the paddle. The only response I was given was another, harder swat.

Master continued his onslaught for quite some time and did not cease his actions until my ass was a glorious shade of red. His hands carressed my now flaming cheeks, then dipped lower, in between my legs.

"mmmmm" I moan as Master strokes my soaking wet pussy. I whimper as he pulls away. I wait for him to return to his ministrrations, but look up to see
Him just standing there, looking at me. He acts so calm, as though unaffected.

However, I know better than this, as I can see the growing bulge in his pants.

I look up at my Master and lick my lips, longing for the taste of his
sweet cock in my mouth.

Master chuckles "Does my pet want something?"

I nod, whimpering, as He just stands there and smiles.
"Beg for it"

"Master please, this little one wishes for the taste of her Master's
glorious cock, and wants to please Him, show Him that she adores Him. Please Master!"

Master just nods and lower his zipper. AS he opens his pants and boxers,
out pops the object of my desire. At 6.5 inches, Master's cock is more than
enough for me. Its girth still amazes me me to this day. He steps forward and I feel his cock rest on my lips. I open my mouth to have it filled. I gag as it
hits the back of my throat, but calm myself and start bobbing up and down His thick shaft. Faster and faster I go, wanting so bad to taste my Master's cum.

Master moaned as my warm mouth engulfed his member. I sucked harder and bobbed faster and in no time Master growled as he filled my mouth with his seed.

I am able to swallow all but a little bit of it, which dribbles down my chin.
"You did well my pet, except you know that you must now be punished"
Master looks at me, "Do you know why?"

I look at the ground as I reply "Yes Master, I allowed my your precious
cum to drop from my mouth"

"Thats right my little slavegirl, my little slut, that is exaclty what
you did"

I wince as he says this. He knows that is hurts me to be called those
names, and the fact that he has forsaken my chosen name of little one shows his displeasure.

"Yes Master, I am sorry, I didnt mean to..." I say with tears in my
eyes.

Master's voice softens, "I know little one, but you must learn.
With that, He takes my nipples between his thumb and pointer finger and
rubs them until they are hard. The next moment, pain seared through my breasts as my nipples were clamped. Tears rolled down my face, as this new pain was beyond the point of pleasure for me.

"They will remain in place until the end" Master says, standing up.

"Yes sir"

Once again, I hear Him searching our treasure chest.

"sssssss" I hiss as I feel the leather flogger land on my back.
Over and over, the flogger lands on my back, my shoulders, my ass, my
legs. Over and over, He doesnt stop until my body is all red and my pussy
absolutely throbbing.

I hear Master undress and I moan, as I know that satisfaction is near.I
feel the tip of my Master's cock rest on my pussy lips, pushing through the
folds.

"Please Master" I whimper.

"Please what, pet" He asks, with a smile in his voice.

"Please take me Master, please fill me, please fuck me!" I beg and
plead.

I was rewarded with a hard thrust from my Master, as his cock was forced into my wanton body.

"Oh fuck!" I scream, as Master buries himself in me. Then, he starts
fucking me, pulling almost all the way out just to thrust back into me. Faster
and faster he fucks me. I can feel the sting on my skin everytime his hips touchmy flaming ass, it just adds to the pleasure.

Master starts grunting and his thrusts become harder. I can feel my own
release only moments away.

"Please may I cum Master?!" I moan.

"No, wait for me little one" Master grunts. After another couple of
thrusts, Master grabs my hair and pulls back, hard.

"Cum now little one, cum for me now" He growled.

I feel his dick throb as his seed is pumped into me and my body explodes
in pleasure. I lay there, trembling, satisfied at last. We just lay there,
together, too exhausted to move. After some time, Master pulls his now soft cock from my pussy, and smiles.

"Did you like your surprise, little one?" He asks.

"Yes Master, thank you so much" I say in a tired voice.

My eyes start to droop as I feel the ropes being untied, and I moan as
the clamps are removed from my now aching nipples. I start drifting off to sleep as Master lifts me in his arms and carries me to bed.

"Good night, little one" Master says, laying me down.

"Good night Master" I murmur, as sleep takes over.

The end, I hope you liked it. Any feed back is welcome, but
please dont be mean. If you hate it, great, then dont read it again,
but you dont have to tell me

Fiendish · 07-19-2008, 08:37 AM

It sucked!

J/k, it was pretty good. Not bad for a really short story, I look forward to more from you in the future- hopefully longer stories next time

The only part I didn't like was this...

Quote:

Originally Posted by sub_at_heart

This story is fictional, fantasy really. The characters are real, though the
names have been changes for privacy's sake. It is my first story and I hope you like it. I want to thank Feindish, for pushing me to write it. And Master,
should you read this, I hope with all of my heart that it may make you proud of me.

Would it kill you to spell my name right?

I'm Fiendish, and I approve of this story

sub_at_heart · 07-19-2008, 10:12 AM

sorry fiendish, i always mix those two letters up in ant word i spell.

YourMistress · 09-24-2008, 07:49 AM

nice story I enjoyed it a lot

babyboom · 12-28-2009, 01:41 AM

Great story realy enjoyed it

Captain Harkness · 12-29-2009, 02:38 PM

I thought that was truly amazing. Written similar to a script mixed with traditional writing so was easily read and i thought the story line was brilliant and incredibly kinky.

Star Shadows · 12-29-2009, 02:49 PM

My God that was amazing. Love it Love It Love it

Shadow1537 · 01-06-2010, 11:56 PM

I really enjoyed this story I thought it was written well and just loved it

07-18-2008, 11:23 PM	#1
sub_at_heart Junior Member Join Date: Jul 2008 Posts: 20	This is my story This story is fictional, fantasy really. The characters are real, though the names have been changes for privacy's sake. It is my first story and I hope you like it. I want to thank Feindish, for pushing me to write it. And Master, should you read this, I hope with all of my heart that it may make you proud of me. Time slipped by slowly as I lay waiting in the dark room. No sound could be heard, apart from my breathing. How long have I been here? It seems like many hours, but it really was maybe only one. I shift in my bonds, and try to get more comfortable. Who am I, you ask? Well, my name is Laisren. I am a 17 year old girl with, well, you might say a full figure. I am 5'5'' and weigh about 150 pounds. I boast 36 D breasts on a rather curvy body. I have short hair, with blond highlights and hazel eyes, and this is my story. Strapped to a spanking horse and left to await my fate, I could not be more anxious. Master just said he had a surprise, though I am still not sure whether it is good or bad. I suppose I will just have to find out. For now, I wait. I dozed off a little, with nothing to do, but was brought abruptly back to awareness as the dungeon door opened. In strode my Master, wearing his normal outfit of a pair of jeans and a t-shirt. Master walked past me to our treasure chest by the wall. I hear him rummaging inside before everything goes quiet. I jump as I feel his hand on my back, I had not heard him approach. "Are you ready for your surprise, little one?" He growled. "Yes Master" I moan, as his hand moves lower down my ass. I feel his hand leave my body before, THWACK! I gasp as I feel the leather paddle hit my ass. "That feels so good Master" I moan, after recieving another welcomed smack of the paddle. The only response I was given was another, harder swat. Master continued his onslaught for quite some time and did not cease his actions until my ass was a glorious shade of red. His hands carressed my now flaming cheeks, then dipped lower, in between my legs. "mmmmm" I moan as Master strokes my soaking wet pussy. I whimper as he pulls away. I wait for him to return to his ministrrations, but look up to see Him just standing there, looking at me. He acts so calm, as though unaffected. However, I know better than this, as I can see the growing bulge in his pants. I look up at my Master and lick my lips, longing for the taste of his sweet cock in my mouth. Master chuckles "Does my pet want something?" I nod, whimpering, as He just stands there and smiles. "Beg for it" "Master please, this little one wishes for the taste of her Master's glorious cock, and wants to please Him, show Him that she adores Him. Please Master!" Master just nods and lower his zipper. AS he opens his pants and boxers, out pops the object of my desire. At 6.5 inches, Master's cock is more than enough for me. Its girth still amazes me me to this day. He steps forward and I feel his cock rest on my lips. I open my mouth to have it filled. I gag as it hits the back of my throat, but calm myself and start bobbing up and down His thick shaft. Faster and faster I go, wanting so bad to taste my Master's cum. Master moaned as my warm mouth engulfed his member. I sucked harder and bobbed faster and in no time Master growled as he filled my mouth with his seed. I am able to swallow all but a little bit of it, which dribbles down my chin. "You did well my pet, except you know that you must now be punished" Master looks at me, "Do you know why?" I look at the ground as I reply "Yes Master, I allowed my your precious cum to drop from my mouth" "Thats right my little slavegirl, my little slut, that is exaclty what you did" I wince as he says this. He knows that is hurts me to be called those names, and the fact that he has forsaken my chosen name of little one shows his displeasure. "Yes Master, I am sorry, I didnt mean to..." I say with tears in my eyes. Master's voice softens, "I know little one, but you must learn. With that, He takes my nipples between his thumb and pointer finger and rubs them until they are hard. The next moment, pain seared through my breasts as my nipples were clamped. Tears rolled down my face, as this new pain was beyond the point of pleasure for me. "They will remain in place until the end" Master says, standing up. "Yes sir" Once again, I hear Him searching our treasure chest. "sssssss" I hiss as I feel the leather flogger land on my back. Over and over, the flogger lands on my back, my shoulders, my ass, my legs. Over and over, He doesnt stop until my body is all red and my pussy absolutely throbbing. I hear Master undress and I moan, as I know that satisfaction is near.I feel the tip of my Master's cock rest on my pussy lips, pushing through the folds. "Please Master" I whimper. "Please what, pet" He asks, with a smile in his voice. "Please take me Master, please fill me, please fuck me!" I beg and plead. I was rewarded with a hard thrust from my Master, as his cock was forced into my wanton body. "Oh fuck!" I scream, as Master buries himself in me. Then, he starts fucking me, pulling almost all the way out just to thrust back into me. Faster and faster he fucks me. I can feel the sting on my skin everytime his hips touchmy flaming ass, it just adds to the pleasure. Master starts grunting and his thrusts become harder. I can feel my own release only moments away. "Please may I cum Master?!" I moan. "No, wait for me little one" Master grunts. After another couple of thrusts, Master grabs my hair and pulls back, hard. "Cum now little one, cum for me now" He growled. I feel his dick throb as his seed is pumped into me and my body explodes in pleasure. I lay there, trembling, satisfied at last. We just lay there, together, too exhausted to move. After some time, Master pulls his now soft cock from my pussy, and smiles. "Did you like your surprise, little one?" He asks. "Yes Master, thank you so much" I say in a tired voice. My eyes start to droop as I feel the ropes being untied, and I moan as the clamps are removed from my now aching nipples. I start drifting off to sleep as Master lifts me in his arms and carries me to bed. "Good night, little one" Master says, laying me down. "Good night Master" I murmur, as sleep takes over. The end, I hope you liked it. Any feed back is welcome, but please dont be mean. If you hate it, great, then dont read it again, but you dont have to tell me __________________ I do not have a Master, nor do I wish for one at the moment, so please dont ask. I am waiting for the next year or so to try another. I will talk to you if you want, but that is it. I will be talking to a variety of people to find a Master that is best for me. I prefer someone in the US because I prefer offline relationships. Again, dont want a Master at the moment, but more than willing to talk. If you want to talk or know more about me, just pm me.

07-19-2008, 10:12 AM	#3
sub_at_heart Junior Member Join Date: Jul 2008 Posts: 20	sorry fiendish, i always mix those two letters up in ant word i spell. __________________ I do not have a Master, nor do I wish for one at the moment, so please dont ask. I am waiting for the next year or so to try another. I will talk to you if you want, but that is it. I will be talking to a variety of people to find a Master that is best for me. I prefer someone in the US because I prefer offline relationships. Again, dont want a Master at the moment, but more than willing to talk. If you want to talk or know more about me, just pm me.

12-29-2009, 02:49 PM	#7
Star Shadows Prodigy Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Uk Posts: 4,707 Blog Entries: 13	My God that was amazing. Love it Love It Love it __________________ Do not ask me for to be your slave, your mistress, or to give you truths or dares. You're wasting your time. Informative threads: Anonymous S/M advice service Threads of note PM MEGET S/M ADVICE WORSHIPS RACHIE**

09-24-2008, 07:49 AM	#4
YourMistress Member Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: usa Posts: 82	nice story I enjoyed it a lot

12-28-2009, 01:41 AM	#5
babyboom Junior Member Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: England Posts: 14	Great story realy enjoyed it

12-29-2009, 02:38 PM	#6
Captain Harkness getDare Devil Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Area 51 Posts: 1,160	I thought that was truly amazing. Written similar to a script mixed with traditional writing so was easily read and i thought the story line was brilliant and incredibly kinky.

01-06-2010, 11:56 PM	#8
Shadow1537 Junior Member Join Date: Nov 2009 Location: I live in a place so totally awesome any mortal would die of shock Posts: 22	I really enjoyed this story I thought it was written well and just loved it