♥ Strip Poker with a Twist ♥ - Page 27

Kisune Karnon · 10-29-2010, 04:14 PM

I think it was one of the sister's. Good chapter and I did guess right and over guess on some of it, lol.

Davestrippoker · 10-30-2010, 01:21 AM

Keep going rach. Your archieve of events is so thrilling and has many readers sitting on the edge of their seats. Like the way the order of events is jumbled so event myself is wondering what will happen next.

stats2001 · 10-30-2010, 01:38 AM

as usual, this story just goes from strength to strength.....Wish i was the one tasting the Golden Syrup ......keep up the great work Rachel !!!!!!

Love the StOrY !!!!!

Stormwalker22 · 10-30-2010, 05:33 AM

very nice Rach as usual I cant wait to see who is giggling I think its one of the teenagers

the doc · 10-30-2010, 10:53 AM

he forgot to put the other memory pen back in
xx

Rachie · 10-30-2010, 12:32 PM

There is something much bigger that David forgot. This will be revealed in part 60.

Thanks for all the support.

Who was the giggling coming from, find out in the following chapter/part of STRIP POKER WITH A TWIST

Part 53 (STRIP POKER WITH A TWIST)

There was suddenly a giggle coming from someone close to Adam.

A brown haired beautiful girl had approached Adam and was unbeknown sitting only inches away while Adam’s cock was on full display. It was also clear to see that Adam was not wearing any underwear.

The girl appeared to be of a similar age to Adam and she was drop dead gorgeous. She had pale skin and looked very fit in her skinny half starved state. The girl appeared to be alone on the bus.

Adam started to sweat, he didn’t know if this was because of the nervousness of possibly being caught doing something on the bus or from the red hot heaters pumping the temperatures to record highs as well as the gorgeous female.

“What you doing” she asked.

Adam froze for a few seconds not knowing what to say. What had this girl seen? What was she implying? In the end Adam decided to say “I’m going into town to get some lunch” he said while covering his cock carefully with his hands. The female gave another giggle while looking down at Adams cock.

Adam at once realised that she had seen his pecker (cock) and blushed. “What’s your name” asked Adam, trying to distract the beauty from his cock. “My name is Amber” the brown haired babe stated, still staring towards the private area which was only covered with Adams hands.

Adam zipped his trousers back up and rearranged his cock in his trousers. Amber now took her attention of his cock and moved nearer to Adam while saying “Now what’s your name, and why was your boner on display”.

Adam once again blushed “my names Adam” he ‘stated. “And …… “ was Amber’s quick reply. “I had a terrible itch” Adam lied, not wanting to tell Amber about the Strip Poker Game or his forfeit. Amber looked puzzled and Adam knew that she didnt believe him one bit.

Suddenly changing the subject Adam asked “Where are you off”. “I’ve just moved into this district from Manchester earlier this week, and I don’t know my way around that much, I was just wondering what interesting things there are to do in Lincoln.” Was Ambers reply.

“Owwww, where do you live” asked Adam interested in hearing as much information about this beautiful brown haired babe. “I live with my parents and sister about 1/2 miles away” Adam was very happy at hearing this and hoped that he would bump into Amber many more times in the future.

“Do you want to accompany me into town, I can show you around” Adam said hopefully. “Owww I would love that replied Amber” with a happy smile on her face. Amber continued “however first I want to………………..”

TO BE CONTINUED …………………….

Please keep all comments / feeback coming, it is always much appreciated

Kisune Karnon · 10-30-2010, 12:37 PM

I bet she'll ask to see his dick again, lol. Good chapter and nice introduction of a new person.

Sharp Nacelle · 10-30-2010, 12:38 PM

She sounds like fun. And an intriguing half a sentence to end on.

owlart · 10-30-2010, 12:55 PM

Ooh, you do like adding twists to the story, Rachel (hence the title, I guess!). Thanks for the new chapter (and new character too!).

dragonator · 10-30-2010, 12:57 PM

Nice addition of a new charcter lol! i thot i was going to be someone from earlier, like Sarah or Dani.

fitzy · 10-30-2010, 12:59 PM

very good just noticed the one mistake but love the way every ending is a cliffhanger

Kisune Karnon · 10-30-2010, 01:05 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by fitzy

very good just noticed the one mistake above. love the way every ending is a cliffhanger

Yes I saw it too, but if you knew why there are some mistakes in each chapter then you wouldn't complain.

fitzy · 10-30-2010, 01:06 PM

not complaing just mentiong so it can be fixed

Kisune Karnon · 10-30-2010, 01:09 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by fitzy

not complaing just mentiong so it can be fixed

She's not gonna go through every one of her chapters and fix it. Maybe if she were to compile everything in the end, someone would help her out, but I doubt any changes will be made anytime soon.

fitzy · 10-30-2010, 01:12 PM

it already has been changed

10-29-2010, 04:14 PM	#391
Kisune Karnon GetDare Ninja Join Date: May 2010 Location: Imagination Land Posts: 12,296 Blog Entries: 7	I think it was one of the sister's. Good chapter and I did guess right and over guess on some of it, lol. __________________ Male/Married/Straight/Switch/32/190 lbs Likes and Limits Toys (So Far) PM Dares Utilizing Keywords Version 3 Kik: Kisune22 My goal is to give good dares and receive them because that is how I enjoy the game. I will send reports when I choose to or if I am asked. If you give me a repeated dare or a "do your own dare," I will be very disappointed because I like to be surprised and challenged.

10-30-2010, 10:53 AM	#395
the doc Senior Member Join Date: May 2010 Location: The Netherlands Posts: 242	he forgot to put the other memory pen back in xx __________________ Entei ftw

10-30-2010, 12:32 PM	#396
Rachie I am the cutest butterfly ever Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: In my Bed, Posts: 6,606 Blog Entries: 2	Part 53 (STRIP POKER WITH A TWIST) There is something much bigger that David forgot. This will be revealed in part 60. Thanks for all the support. Who was the giggling coming from, find out in the following chapter/part of STRIP POKER WITH A TWIST Part 53 (STRIP POKER WITH A TWIST) There was suddenly a giggle coming from someone close to Adam. A brown haired beautiful girl had approached Adam and was unbeknown sitting only inches away while Adam’s cock was on full display. It was also clear to see that Adam was not wearing any underwear. The girl appeared to be of a similar age to Adam and she was drop dead gorgeous. She had pale skin and looked very fit in her skinny half starved state. The girl appeared to be alone on the bus. Adam started to sweat, he didn’t know if this was because of the nervousness of possibly being caught doing something on the bus or from the red hot heaters pumping the temperatures to record highs as well as the gorgeous female. “What you doing” she asked. Adam froze for a few seconds not knowing what to say. What had this girl seen? What was she implying? In the end Adam decided to say “I’m going into town to get some lunch” he said while covering his cock carefully with his hands. The female gave another giggle while looking down at Adams cock. Adam at once realised that she had seen his pecker (cock) and blushed. “What’s your name” asked Adam, trying to distract the beauty from his cock. “My name is Amber” the brown haired babe stated, still staring towards the private area which was only covered with Adams hands. Adam zipped his trousers back up and rearranged his cock in his trousers. Amber now took her attention of his cock and moved nearer to Adam while saying “Now what’s your name, and why was your boner on display”. Adam once again blushed “my names Adam” he ‘stated. “And …… “ was Amber’s quick reply. “I had a terrible itch” Adam lied, not wanting to tell Amber about the Strip Poker Game or his forfeit. Amber looked puzzled and Adam knew that she didnt believe him one bit. Suddenly changing the subject Adam asked “Where are you off”. “I’ve just moved into this district from Manchester earlier this week, and I don’t know my way around that much, I was just wondering what interesting things there are to do in Lincoln.” Was Ambers reply. “Owwww, where do you live” asked Adam interested in hearing as much information about this beautiful brown haired babe. “I live with my parents and sister about 1/2 miles away” Adam was very happy at hearing this and hoped that he would bump into Amber many more times in the future. “Do you want to accompany me into town, I can show you around” Adam said hopefully. “Owww I would love that replied Amber” with a happy smile on her face. Amber continued “however first I want to………………..” TO BE CONTINUED ……………………. Please keep all comments / feeback coming, it is always much appreciated __________________ RACHIE'S GETDARE USER GUIDE / MANUAL STRIP POKER WITH A TWIST (Story) BED HABITS LOLA.FOX WISHES SHE WAS MY FAVORITE USER <3 Last edited by Rachie; 10-30-2010 at 01:03 PM.

10-30-2010, 12:37 PM	#397
Kisune Karnon GetDare Ninja Join Date: May 2010 Location: Imagination Land Posts: 12,296 Blog Entries: 7	I bet she'll ask to see his dick again, lol. Good chapter and nice introduction of a new person. __________________ Male/Married/Straight/Switch/32/190 lbs Likes and Limits Toys (So Far) PM Dares Utilizing Keywords Version 3 Kik: Kisune22 My goal is to give good dares and receive them because that is how I enjoy the game. I will send reports when I choose to or if I am asked. If you give me a repeated dare or a "do your own dare," I will be very disappointed because I like to be surprised and challenged.

10-30-2010, 12:38 PM	#398
Sharp Nacelle Distinguished Member Join Date: Aug 2010 Location: UK Posts: 742	She sounds like fun. And an intriguing half a sentence to end on. __________________ 46/m/uk Don't take me too seriously Ask me anything... get an evasive answer Anonymous secrets My advert

10-30-2010, 01:21 AM	#392
Davestrippoker Distinguished Member Join Date: Sep 2010 Posts: 517	Keep going rach. Your archieve of events is so thrilling and has many readers sitting on the edge of their seats. Like the way the order of events is jumbled so event myself is wondering what will happen next.

10-30-2010, 01:38 AM	#393
stats2001 Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: Sydney Australia Posts: 172	as usual, this story just goes from strength to strength.....Wish i was the one tasting the Golden Syrup ......keep up the great work Rachel !!!!!! Love the StOrY !!!!!

10-30-2010, 05:33 AM	#394
Stormwalker22 Distinguished Member Join Date: May 2010 Location: CA Posts: 503	very nice Rach as usual I cant wait to see who is giggling I think its one of the teenagers

10-30-2010, 12:55 PM	#399
owlart getDare Devil Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: UK Posts: 1,288	Ooh, you do like adding twists to the story, Rachel (hence the title, I guess!). Thanks for the new chapter (and new character too!).

10-30-2010, 12:57 PM	#400
dragonator getDare Devil Join Date: Jun 2009 Posts: 1,477	Nice addition of a new charcter lol! i thot i was going to be someone from earlier, like Sarah or Dani. __________________ male likes: sexual public humiliation, sexual, public, and humiliation i also like anal as long as its safe. limits: family, and illegal to the point il get caught i must do any dare that i get as long as this is a part of my signiture I was dared to post my full erect length. my full erect penis length is 3 inches.

10-30-2010, 12:59 PM	#401
fitzy getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Oct 2009 Location: ireland Posts: 297	very good just noticed the one mistake but love the way every ending is a cliffhanger __________________ Likes: masturbation, humiliation, piss, light pain, light bondage limits:family , major pain, permenant, shaving, public,poo i have been a very naughty boy and deservie to be punished Last edited by Rachie; 09-01-2011 at 01:07 PM.

10-30-2010, 01:06 PM	#403
fitzy getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Oct 2009 Location: ireland Posts: 297	not complaing just mentiong so it can be fixed __________________ Likes: masturbation, humiliation, piss, light pain, light bondage limits:family , major pain, permenant, shaving, public,poo i have been a very naughty boy and deservie to be punished

10-30-2010, 01:12 PM	#405
fitzy getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Oct 2009 Location: ireland Posts: 297	it already has been changed __________________ Likes: masturbation, humiliation, piss, light pain, light bondage limits:family , major pain, permenant, shaving, public,poo i have been a very naughty boy and deservie to be punished