10-21-2009, 09:21 AM | #16 |
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12-09-2009, 12:12 PM | #17 |
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Horribly unconscientiously presented grammar is my biggest pet peeve on here people think that they don’t need paragraphs, capital letters or apostrophes (People what have the little ‘’s done to offend thee so much???) or correct punctuation and it gets right on my wick as well as people using words that aren’t words or text speak when out of context. If I can’t understand it I won’t read it.
I agree with you 100% on this system OfficeLover and can see how long you must have spent writing this up for us. Thanks and congratulations to you and someone PLEASE PLEASE sticky this so that people can learn what makes a story people want to read. P.S and on the note of Alibidonous I personally couldn’t agree more however my friend keeps complaining that my story doesn’t have enough sex. Guess you can’t please everyone
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12-09-2009, 02:41 PM | #18 |
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any chance you could read one of my stories and see what you think, i think grammer wise it's fine but not so descriptive
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