What she will do for love.. - Page 2

Sexy Megz · 02-11-2010, 12:26 PM

Cann uu doo 10 timees worsee

Star Shadows · 02-12-2010, 09:36 AM

I love this story so fat but I only have one pointer I think would help. Its a little hard to woek out whats going on when the only diferenciation between speach is the "'s I think it would help your story a lot if you used the enter key between speach.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Billy123

"Come in and get comfortable." "Thanks.." "So you ready?" "Yeah I guess...but tell me Troy, how many of these "dares" will there be?" Troy though for a second "That's a secret, if I told you it wouldn't be as fun and surprising, now would it?" "Well I guess not..." Jenny replied. "OK then, ready to get started?" "Yeah I guess..." "OK, let's go to the basement so we have privacy when the folks come home."

Like this

"Come in and get comfortable."
"Thanks.."
"So you ready?"
"Yeah I guess...but tell me Troy, how many of these "dares" will there be?"
Troy though for a second "That's a secret, if I told you it wouldn't be as fun and surprising, now would it?"
"Well I guess not..." Jenny replied.
"OK then, ready to get started?"
"Yeah I guess..."
"OK, let's go to the basement so we have privacy when the folks come home."

It isn't anything big but would make it more readable

xx Shadow

Sexy Megz · 02-12-2010, 11:39 AM

Camrass on there !!! x shows matess come onnn i am waiting

Billy123 · 02-12-2010, 09:54 PM

OK shadow, thanks for the suggestion, I'm more use to writing on paper instead of typing, forgive me. And to everyone else I have two ideas for the next part. One being pain and pleasure process, such as nipple clamps and then rubbing the clit, or something like that, or make it where Troy get's a few friends over to help, if you know what I mean.

It'd greatly help if you told me which one you'd like more, and when I get a few people, I'll work on the next part, or if I don't get anything by tomorrow night I'll just pick one and go with it.

Thanks all and sorry for the lack of writing, I thought everyone kind of gave up on it.

Sexy Megz · 02-14-2010, 01:47 AM

Noooooo this story is amazing you have to carry on writtinn more ofteen x

Billy123 · 02-14-2010, 06:12 PM

(OK here's the next installment, sorry it took so long.)

"Ready for the next part?"
"No..." Said Jenny still struggling in the bra connection wedgie.
"Well since I've been having so much fun, I think other people should enjoy it just as much as me!"
Jenny almost burst into tears at that remark, she knew what that meant, he was going to bring his friends over that loved to embarrass people.
"Please don't Troy..I'll leave right now and never come back if it means that!"
"I thought you'd do anything for my love."Well I didn't know it meant this!"
"Well too bad, because your not getting out until I say so, and I think I'm gonna call my friends now." With that Troy left the room to call his friends leaving Jenny there crying.

In about 20 minutes, Troy's friends happily arrived after Troy told them about the "slave" he got. He called three friends in total, there was Jim, a strong built 19 year old at just about 6 foot 5 inches. Then there was Chris, he was an average built 17 year old Troy met during football camp, he was about 5 foot 8 and a beastly running back. The last was an interesting girl, her name was Maddie and she was an open lesbian, and hearing about the "slave" they got she knew she'd have fun with this. Of course she was the first one there.

Troy, Jim, Chris, and Maddie were talking in the living room trying to decide what to do to there "slave."
"I think we should make her have multiple orgasms!" Screamed Maddie.
"No, we don't want here having too much fun..yet." Replied Troy
"I have an idea, follow me to meet our new slave."

Down in the basement Jenny heard them talking and heard what she thought a girl too!
"I've got to do something to get out of he-" Before she could finish her thought she heard the basement door open and footsteps down the steps.
"Here's my slave, friends!" Troy exclaimed showing off his "prize".
"Oh my god Troy, you got Jenny as a slave?! How?!" replied Maddie in awe of her new playtoy, the guys were about just as happy!
"Oh, it was easy, I played the charm on her and did the basic "test" of love, she fell for it hook line and sinker!" replied Troy.
"So wait, you've done this before?" Cried Jenny
"Yes Jenny, many times, your the...5th person we've done this too, and by the way, from now on, we'll be taking pictures of everything we do, so if you don't want these pictures getting distributed all around the school, and the internet, you'll do everything we say exactly how we say it, and if you tell anyone about this when we let you go, we'll show these pictures, plus we'll kidnap you, and it'll be twenty times worse than it's going to be now."
Jenny bursted in tears at this and could do nothing but shake her head "yes" to indicate she'd do everything they said.
"Well, let's start shall we?" Laughed Troy.
"Yes let's!" The whole group almost screamed.

To be continued...

Sorry for the wait people and that there wasn't much action in this part, the next part will have a lot more action in it, I promise! I'll start on the next part tonight or tommorow, hope you enjoyed!

Sexy Megz · 02-15-2010, 06:31 AM

Good luck x!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Star Shadows · 02-15-2010, 07:11 AM

Great next installment.

I am off to do mine now me thinks.
will keep an eye out for this story

Sexy Megz · 02-16-2010, 11:40 AM

Have a look at mine http://www.getdare.com/bbs/blog.php?b=2211

02-12-2010, 09:54 PM	#19
Billy123 Member Join Date: Oct 2009 Location: USA Posts: 94	OK shadow, thanks for the suggestion, I'm more use to writing on paper instead of typing, forgive me. And to everyone else I have two ideas for the next part. One being pain and pleasure process, such as nipple clamps and then rubbing the clit, or something like that, or make it where Troy get's a few friends over to help, if you know what I mean. It'd greatly help if you told me which one you'd like more, and when I get a few people, I'll work on the next part, or if I don't get anything by tomorrow night I'll just pick one and go with it. Thanks all and sorry for the lack of writing, I thought everyone kind of gave up on it. __________________ Likes: Wedgies, ice, bathroom control, anything not in my limits Limits: Crossdressing, extreme pain, public, family,anal For every pm I get, I will give myself 30 squeaky cleans.

02-14-2010, 06:12 PM	#21
Billy123 Member Join Date: Oct 2009 Location: USA Posts: 94	(OK here's the next installment, sorry it took so long.) "Ready for the next part?" "No..." Said Jenny still struggling in the bra connection wedgie. "Well since I've been having so much fun, I think other people should enjoy it just as much as me!" Jenny almost burst into tears at that remark, she knew what that meant, he was going to bring his friends over that loved to embarrass people. "Please don't Troy..I'll leave right now and never come back if it means that!" "I thought you'd do anything for my love."Well I didn't know it meant this!" "Well too bad, because your not getting out until I say so, and I think I'm gonna call my friends now." With that Troy left the room to call his friends leaving Jenny there crying. In about 20 minutes, Troy's friends happily arrived after Troy told them about the "slave" he got. He called three friends in total, there was Jim, a strong built 19 year old at just about 6 foot 5 inches. Then there was Chris, he was an average built 17 year old Troy met during football camp, he was about 5 foot 8 and a beastly running back. The last was an interesting girl, her name was Maddie and she was an open lesbian, and hearing about the "slave" they got she knew she'd have fun with this. Of course she was the first one there. Troy, Jim, Chris, and Maddie were talking in the living room trying to decide what to do to there "slave." "I think we should make her have multiple orgasms!" Screamed Maddie. "No, we don't want here having too much fun..yet." Replied Troy "I have an idea, follow me to meet our new slave." Down in the basement Jenny heard them talking and heard what she thought a girl too! "I've got to do something to get out of he-" Before she could finish her thought she heard the basement door open and footsteps down the steps. "Here's my slave, friends!" Troy exclaimed showing off his "prize". "Oh my god Troy, you got Jenny as a slave?! How?!" replied Maddie in awe of her new playtoy, the guys were about just as happy! "Oh, it was easy, I played the charm on her and did the basic "test" of love, she fell for it hook line and sinker!" replied Troy. "So wait, you've done this before?" Cried Jenny "Yes Jenny, many times, your the...5th person we've done this too, and by the way, from now on, we'll be taking pictures of everything we do, so if you don't want these pictures getting distributed all around the school, and the internet, you'll do everything we say exactly how we say it, and if you tell anyone about this when we let you go, we'll show these pictures, plus we'll kidnap you, and it'll be twenty times worse than it's going to be now." Jenny bursted in tears at this and could do nothing but shake her head "yes" to indicate she'd do everything they said. "Well, let's start shall we?" Laughed Troy. "Yes let's!" The whole group almost screamed. To be continued... Sorry for the wait people and that there wasn't much action in this part, the next part will have a lot more action in it, I promise! I'll start on the next part tonight or tommorow, hope you enjoyed! __________________ Likes: Wedgies, ice, bathroom control, anything not in my limits Limits: Crossdressing, extreme pain, public, family,anal For every pm I get, I will give myself 30 squeaky cleans.

02-15-2010, 06:31 AM	#22
Sexy Megz Junior Member Join Date: Feb 2010 Location: Wales Posts: 18	Good luck x!!!!!!!!!!!!! __________________ MeganChard Model Velodrome champion! Swimmer Spoiler: No cam yet.

02-15-2010, 07:11 AM	#23
Star Shadows Prodigy Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Uk Posts: 4,707 Blog Entries: 13	Great next installment. I am off to do mine now me thinks. will keep an eye out for this story __________________ Do not ask me for to be your slave, your mistress, or to give you truths or dares. You're wasting your time. Informative threads: Anonymous S/M advice service Threads of note PM MEGET S/M ADVICE WORSHIPS RACHIE**

02-16-2010, 11:40 AM	#24
Sexy Megz Junior Member Join Date: Feb 2010 Location: Wales Posts: 18	Have a look at mine http://www.getdare.com/bbs/blog.php?b=2211 __________________ MeganChard Model Velodrome champion! Swimmer Spoiler: No cam yet.

02-11-2010, 12:26 PM	#16
Sexy Megz Junior Member Join Date: Feb 2010 Location: Wales Posts: 18	Cann uu doo 10 timees worsee

02-12-2010, 11:39 AM	#18
Sexy Megz Junior Member Join Date: Feb 2010 Location: Wales Posts: 18	Camrass on there !!! x shows matess come onnn i am waiting

02-14-2010, 01:47 AM	#20
Sexy Megz Junior Member Join Date: Feb 2010 Location: Wales Posts: 18	Noooooo this story is amazing you have to carry on writtinn more ofteen x