John's Slavery

[coolio5]

Originally Posted by ty_la

He's just giving his personal opinion guys, chill. And if anyone has been reading this whole thing day by day like me and officelover has, you'll know that you can't just stop now! :P

haha sorry, ive been reading it everyday to, and im not trying to offend anyone

i just think that its his story, so if he wants drugs in it, then so be it. as long as its within the rules so be it.

that being said, still an amazing story, loving every post

[daredaredare]

I don't cope well with rules. They usually just make me want to rebel.


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Marie pushed John forward and tripped his legs as he started to move, making him fall face first into the couch. She straightened out his body so that his ass was as far out as possible. John kept this position because he knew better than to disobey now. She started to spank him, as hard as she could. During the spanking, she insulted him. "You.. Litle SLUT... You don't.... DESERVE ME... yet you think..... YOU DERSEVE... someone else!"

and so that went on for a few minutes, until John figured the anger was outta Marie's system. Or so he hoped. She stopped. John could feel that his ass was bright red.

Marie stopped. She took off her uniform shirt, because she was starting to get sweaty from the workout of training her slave. It revealed a black and brown stripped bra,that was very revealing and kinky.

Marie bended over and looked John in the face, which was turned to the side on the seat of the couch."well sweetie, are you sorry?"

John couldn't believe he was getting off this easy.

"yes master! yes master I am very sorry! I am yours! I do whatever you say!"

...
There was a long pause.

Then, she screamed "THAT ISN'T GOOD ENOUGH YOU FUCKING SLUT."

Fuck. Fuck. Fuck. the word raced around John's head. For a second, he managed to push it away, only to realize that Jamie was in this room, blindfolded, and hearing him be abused. This made him burn with intense embarrassment. He needed to act more manly to impress her. Yet, he decided to just continue thinking that one word, over and over again. At least that was safe to think.

Marie picked up John and threw him on the ground, facing up, with his hands under him. He knew better than to make any noises of pain, although he felt like he was dying.

Then, marie stripped off her uniform skirt, revealing panties that matched her bra. She stripped those off as well, and put on the micro skirt that Jamie had brought down. It was the wrong time to think it, but John started to think how nice her pussy looked, and how much he needed to fuck it at that second. Since she wasn't wearing a thong or leggings, he was going to get a nice view of it for the rest of the beating.

Marie walked up to Jamie, and said to her "erica gives me permission to do whatever I desire to you, as long as I don't kill you. And believe me, you will be punished for trying to steal my slave's heart away."

Jamie let out a little wimper. With that, she was thrown down onto the couch in the same position John was. John had an amazing view of her ass from the floor, but for once in his life, he was not happy about this.

Marie started to spank Jamie. Jamie was not as good at holding back pain as John, and was screaming for Marie to stop instantly. Marie laughed and just said "No bitch, you deserve all of this." John wanted it to stop too. He didn't want anything bad to happen to Jamie. ever.

After twice the time that John was spanked, Marie stopped spanking Jamie. "thank godd thank god, thank god YOU STOPPED! I'm so sorry!" Jamie was practically in tears.

"stopped?" Marie laughed "I just wanted to get something else to use on you, my hand is getting tired."

Fuck. John could not stop thinking that word.

Marie pulled out a nice whip, one John had not seen before. Marie raised her hand up. She laughed a bit, and said "look at your love now john." She whipped Jamie's bare and already red ass. After Jamie's ass had been whipped once, she burst out into tears. John tried to look away. "DON'T LOOK AWAY YOU FUCKING WHORE, SHE IS GETTING WHIPPED FAR MORE TIMES NOW!"

John turned right back around and looked directly at Jamie's ass, which was on the verge of bleeding. Marie let the whip go two more times. John couldn't take it anymore.

He screamed "NO! STOP!"

And marie did. She turned to John. She straddled him, squatted down so that their faces were almost meeting, and said quite calmly "I'm sorry John, I didn't understand you. What did you say?"

John didn't know what to do. "Um... nothing master"

"John, did you, a mere slave, order their master to stop a treatment another slave justly deserves?" Marie's voice sounded too calm for comfort.

"Yes master..."

"and then, did you try to lie about it?"

"Yes master..."

"I see... and what should I do to punish you for this?"

This was clearly a trick question. He was already getting punished. But he just earned himself, and Jamie too, far more punishment and he knew it. He tried to play Marie's game "Whatever you want master."

Marie smiled, and put John's dick inside her pussy, which was only inches away to begin with anyway. it confused the hell outta john, but it made John notice that she was absolutely soaked.

"John do you feel how wet I am? I am practically dripping right now."

"Yes master, I can tell"

"I enjoy what I'm doing right now. I enjoy causing pain when its due. And believe me, pain is due." with that, the calm voice, and calm demeanor disappeared. Her anger was back, she got off John, picked him up, and threw him down in the same position was before, with his head on the couch facing Jamie. Both their asses were in the air and free for his master to do whatever to.

This was a bad situation to be in.

She whipped John. Then whipped Jamie. Then Whipped John. Then whipped Jamie.

Both their asses started to bleed. After every whip, john bit his lip, but after every whip on jamie's ass she screamed out for it to stop. The pain on her face was too much for John to bear. But Marie didn't let the torture stop there.

"do you like Jamie at all john?"

John knew he couldn't tell the truth. He needed to say what his master wanted. "No master"

"In fact, I would go as far as to say you hate her."

"yes master."

"please, tell me everything you hate about her."

John didn't know what to say. He heard the rhythmic beat of the whip, hitting his ass, then Jamie's. He did not know how many beats passed while he tried to think of just one bad thing on someone was great as Jamie. But apparently, too much time passed.

"I can't hear you john." Marie said

"I hate how much of... a slut she is." it was killing John to say it, but he knew he had to continue with these lies, while looking her deep in the face."

"Excuse me one second slave, I want you to be looking each other in the eyes while you say these things." marie temporarily took of Jamie's blindfold. Jamie's eyes were full of tears, and she looked like a wreck. John couldn't blame her. and the worst was yet to come. Marie went back to whipping. "continue slave."

"I hate how she has fucked so many guys before me. I think she is ugly as shit, and fat too. She is nothing like my wonderful master. Her voice annoys me." Jamie was looking more hurt than the whipping could ever do. "I hate the way she fucks. She gives the worst blowjobs ever. She is nothing compared to my wonderful master, just a worthless piece of shit I stupidly fucked when my master was away. I deserve my punishment. And she deserves whatever my master wants to give her."


That last line threw Jamie over the edge. She broke down entirely.

[Officelover]

Excellent installment!

I really enjoy the mind-games. In my opinion, Jamie is not bad at all. I know that's not how the character was designed; but if a girl is enslaved in one of these stories, I tend to feel sorry for them.

That's what is happening now.

[coolio5]

aww, i feel really bad for jamie now

but haha still a good story

[ty_la]

Hmm, very very nice. I did pick up one thing
"She whipped John. Then whipped Marie. Then Whipped John. Then whipped Marie. "
I think you meant to say jamie :P haha.
But very very nice, I like the connection that's being formed (and broken) Between the two slaves. I have a funny feeling this story might be nearing an end. But i could be wrong =P.

[Smile]

Originally Posted by ty_la

I have a funny feeling this story might be nearing an end. But i could be wrong =P.

im hoping it isnt, im loving it. sadly i have that feeling too

but even still loving the story and loving that last part

[daredaredare]

Originally Posted by ty_la

Hmm, very very nice. I did pick up one thing
"She whipped John. Then whipped Marie. Then Whipped John. Then whipped Marie. "
I think you meant to say jamie :P haha.
But very very nice, I like the connection that's being formed (and broken) Between the two slaves. I have a funny feeling this story might be nearing an end. But i could be wrong =P.

Oh thanks.

I still have a general direction for the rest of the weekend. As for the months after that, I think I know what I'll do but I'm not sure.

I know how it'll end now. And it'll be open for sequels written by other people, should they want to carry it on.

[ty_la]

Interesting, thanks for the insight looking forward to the next passage.

[Rocknj06]

I am really enjoying this. at fisrt i was paying attention the page number, but when i got to the final page i went down to click to the next one, and there wasn't. it made me sad not to keep on reading. Keep up the good work. I cant wait for the next installment

[Rocknj06]

I apologize for the ad on to my recent post, but my computer wouldnt let me edit it to add in this thought for those who are offended by the drug refrence.


Heres my thought.


Marie knows Jamie gets horny when she smokes. If she knows that John does, i dont know, but that doesnt really matter.

Marie knows that Jamie won't be able to control her self with the closeness she has with John, especially since they would have experienced sex(ual) encounters with each other already, when she is high.

Marie plants the weed to test Johns ability to control his desire to cum.

Because John is high, it tests his ability futher more, because when your high, you don't (normaly) think striaght. If he passes the test good for him, but he doesn't.

To plant the test, Marie gives them the weed as a pre finished job reward, allowing them to enjoy it after they finish their job. Job finished, test started.





Readers and critics, plese keep in mind that an author puts a detail in on purpose. That purpose is not to offend anyone, so please try to think of why tripdare put in the drug use. I gave you my reasoning for it. If it's wrong it's wrong, oh well.


Note the the author.
I see this story unfolding before me. I am seeing John, or Jamie, or both being locked in the "dog house" that they just built. I don't know if that is your intention, but just a thought because it would be turture to have the person you "love" and porn all around you with a chasity belt. It may also give Jamie and John a chance to talk, although I realise the camera's in there will show it, but you left out mics, so the conversation would not be heard by Marie. Just a thought if you were going that way.

[nightmare09]

go on please i want to hear more

[FUNTIMES]

Been following your story from the beginning man, just havent got round to commenting (untill now). its a great story and im always looking for the next part. To those who complained about the weed .. if reading about drugs offends you enough that you feel you must voice your opinion and complain, you must spend an awful lot of time and money writing to and phoning up newspapers. Where you raised in a bubble ??

[coolio5]

Originally Posted by FUNTIMES

To those who complained about the weed .. if reading about drugs offends you enough that you feel you must voice your opinion and complain, you must spend an awful lot of time and money writing to and phoning up newspapers. Where you raised in a bubble ??

haha very good point
honestly, i dont get why everyone is making such a big deal about the weed

bt as ive said, awsome story

[interesting]

If I may add my own words here...

This story, albeit being very involved and providing a lot of enjoyment to everyone, myself included once in a while, is far too agressive at this point for me to simply let it slide. I have a hard time with any story where the slaves are treated literally as such, and this seems to be the case.

Marie is being mean, selfish and abusive; I've said this about other characters in other stories too. She is into her power play, defining herself from the pain she willingly inflicts on people. She's been misusing the power and the trust John is supposed to have in her. I have difficulty believing that either John or Jamie would put up with this kind of abuse for very long - if so, they need professional help. Of course, this is not the point of this story, so I'll stop my digression for now.

If you enjoy seeing this kind of behaviour portrayed in stories, then please, continue to enjoy it. For my part, I've had enough, and I wanted to share my thoughts on it before I stopped following it.

I also think this story should be moved into the Mature Stories section. That might prevent DareDareDare's continuation of it, as he may not be 18, but it is just my personal opnion.

Again, great work on the narrative and the structure; the presentation itself is also acceptable. You just lost me on the thematics and character portrayals. But please, keep writing for the benefit of others, who still enjoy this story.

[ty_la]

And then there were.... pleanty of others.