[Fiction] Erin's Hell

[luvNgrl]

Please write again soon. I really have liked reading this story...it's written very well.

[skjelner]

Thank you all for waiting so patiently and for the support! I know I don't update nearly as often as I want to, but I definitely have no plans of abandoning this story—it's kind of my baby. ;)

Here's what's hopefully a nice update for you all!

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When Chris took Mark’s place, Erin gulped: once again, they were saving the biggest for last. She quickly pushed this thought to the back of her mind, however, and instead started on the man in front of her, mimicking what she had done for Mark. Servicing Chris was a fair bit less pleasant, however, as, apart from being larger, his privates were much hairier and had a fouler odor. As her nose scraped against Chris’s scratchy pubic hair with each thrust, Erin couldn’t help but wonder why he didn’t shave like the others did.

Chris didn’t last as long as Mark, pulling back after only thirty seconds or so to add another sticky stream of semen to the collection in his victim’s mouth. Before Erin could react, Jason immediately took his cohort’s place and glided his massive penis expertly down the gaping throat before him. Erin struggled not to swallow any of the semen, clenching tightly around Jason’s cock each time he pushed. Moaning loudly and seemingly mockingly, Jason grabbed a fistful of Erin’s hair and pulled, much harder than Mark had. Erin winced in pain, nearly choking on the organ that filled her gullet. Several drops of cum oozed from between her lips, but Erin deftly lapped them up, stroking Jason’s shaft with her tongue in the process.

“Yeah, bitch, that’s right. I knew you could suck a good dick … you just needed some encouragement.” Erin looked up to see Jason wink at her just as he grabbed her head and forced himself balls-deep into her quivering throat. “But just because you can suck dick doesn’t mean you deserve to breathe.” Jason reached down and pinched Erin’s nose tightly, cutting off her air supply entirely. Shocked by this abruptness, Erin instinctively fought to get free, but Jason wouldn’t budge, instead only pinching her nose more firmly. “You see, any thirty dollar whore off the street can give head just as good as you’re giving right now. Are you a cheap whore, Erin?”

Erin managed to shake her head very slightly, for Jason was holding her firmly in place with his other hand.

“Haha, guys, she still thinks she’s not a filthy whore. I honestly think she believes it.” Mark and Chris chuckled, but to Erin it was just background noise, as she was having trouble focusing on anything but Jason’s voice. She had never been very good at holding her breath and could feel her lungs demanding the oxygen they required. “Okay, if you’re really not a cheap whore, then prove it. Lick my balls, slut,” Jason challenged more than ordered. “If you can make me cum by licking my balls, I’ll let you breathe.”

Erin wasted no time: she knew by now that Jason was more than willing to let her pass out. In fact, he and the other men would almost certainly ravage her body while she was out, and that was definitely not something Erin desired. Instead, she forced Jason’s penis deeper into her esophagus than it had ever reached before and managed to barely graze his scrotum with her outstretched tongue.

But it wasn’t good enough—there was no way she could make Jason cum like this. In what seemed like a stupor, Erin slid back from her captor’s body as much as she could manage, then slammed forward, enveloping more of Jason’s shaft than she had thought possible. It was as if she had been stuck at a plateau for the past few minutes, the plateau of deep-throating, never able to take more than a certain amount. But now this threshold had shattered: her gag reflex long gone, Erin now descended the other side of the plateau, realizing she could open every part of her throat freely, flexing muscles she didn’t know she could control. In a moment of pure bliss at such mastery of her body, Erin easily engulfed the entirety of Jason’s ten inches, sucking in his whole scrotum after it.

Jason screamed in delight at the new sensation, while Erin ferociously worked his testicles around inside her mouth with her tongue. It was easy for her now; she knew if she could conquer Jason’s gargantuan genitals, then she could handle anything.

“Jesus Christ, guys, are you seeing this?! Have you ever seen anything like this before?”

“Well, maybe in porn I guess,” Chris replied, “but the guy didn’t have nearly as big a dick as you.”

“Yeah, impressive,” Mark concurred. “I guess she’s not so cheap a whore after all.” He laughed.

“But definitely a whore nonetheless,” Jason said gleefully. “And, at least for now, she’s a whore that gets to breathe.” He shoved Erin’s head backward, popping his scrotum from her mouth with a squelch, but stopped before his penis had fully withdrawn. Erin greedily sucked air through her nose as Jason released a deluge of semen to join the reservoir already filling her mouth. When he finally removed his cock completely, Erin collapsed to the ground, dazed from the lack of oxygen.

Jason stood over her, letting his wet penis and scrotum hang free, swinging from side to side. “Because you did something I’ve never seen before, you can take your time catching your breath. But don’t you dare swallow any of that cum until I say so,” Jason warned.

Grateful for the break, Erin lay on her side on the cold tile, clutching her stomach as the air returned to her lungs. Apparently trusting her for the moment, the men quietly left the bathroom, closing the door behind them. Alone at last, Erin massaged her aching muscles while straining to hear what the men were discussing in the main room. But it was to no avail—the door’s thickness prevented her from hearing all but muffled murmurs and dull footsteps. Erin let her shallow breathing fill her ears instead and closed her eyes, resting in her painful thoughts.

[Stormwalker22]

nice chapter please continue

[skjelner]

Chapter Eight

After a few minutes, the door handle turned with a soft creak, and Chris stepped into the room, holding the same ball gag Erin had become so familiar with the previous day. “Come with me,” he ordered, and Erin quickly stood to her feet, taking care not to accidentally swallow. This was more difficult than she expected, as her mouth was filled to the brim with the thick liquid of her captors. In fact, she could barely keep her lips closed around it in the first place.

“That’s a good girl,” Jason commended as Erin crossed the door’s threshold. Pangs of fear raced through Erin at the sight of the room in which she had endured so much brutality. She stumbled slightly as she looked around but, with a sigh of relief, caught herself before anything disastrous occurred. The room looked nearly the same as she remembered: the metal chest which Erin now knew contained various devices for torturing women like her sat in one corner, its lid slightly ajar. The yet-unused wooden table was in the same place across from the bed, which had been recently made by one of the men, Erin presumed. As she scanned the bed more closely, however, Erin noticed one large difference from yesterday: there were now ropes affixed around the bed’s headboard and footboard. This could only mean one thing …

“I see you’ve noticed our newest addition to this lovely room,” Jason said teasingly. “You might actually like this one though, Erin. You see, we’re going to deviate a little from today’s schedule to explore something that made me quite curious yesterday.” He continued after a pause, as Erin couldn’t respond through all the semen. “You’re a squirter, Erin, and from what we could tell while fucking you yesterday, you’re a damn good one. That’s what we’re going to do this morning—see just how good at squirting you are.”

Erin’s eyes widened at this, though not entirely out of fear: pure vaginal stimulation certainly sounded better than the torturous things she had imagined her captors might have in store for her while lying shivering on the bathroom floor.

“Ooh, I can tell you’re already interested,” Mark exclaimed. “But let me show you how we’re going to tap your full potential.” He walked over to the metal chest and withdrew several contraptions, holding them out proudly for all to see. One Erin recognized as a vibrating egg—she had borrowed Isabel’s a few times—round and purple, complete with a speed switch attached via a long cord. The second looked more or less like a standard dildo, although it was hooked near the end and tapered off into an oddly-shaped, stubby cone. Erin didn’t recognize the third contraption: several translucent red balls connected by what looked like a thick plastic string.

“Whuuus thuuu whuh?” Erin murmured through the warm jizz and pointed to the mysterious object.

“What, anal beads?” Mark blurted. “You don’t know what anal beads are?” Erin shook her head.

“Seriously?” Chris interjected. “You don’t watch porn?”

Erin attempted to answer that yes, she did occasionally watch porn, but rarely anything too kinky that would involve such devices. It was futile, however, as she couldn’t be understood due to her full mouth.

“You really are a little tease,” Chris said. “A virgin who doesn’t even watch porn? I swear, you were just asking for this to happen to you, weren’t you?”

Erin shook her head furiously: it was absolutely not true. While she had never been opposed to having sex growing up, she simply hadn’t encountered what she considered the right opportunity. All guys, or at least the ones she had met, while not necessarily indecent people, never seemed to be her type. What exactly her type was, however, Erin had no idea.

“Well, whatever,” Jason joined in. “We’ll just let her keep on thinking she’s not a slut while she continues to perform slutty acts for us. Fucking cunt.”

The insults didn’t sting as much anymore, but Erin still wanted to scream at Jason that the only reason she was doing any of these degrading acts was because she had no choice. But at the same time, she realized Jason knew this and was only trying to get to her, so she remained calm, pretending to ignore him.

“Sounds good,” Mark agreed, “and as for these anal beads, well, you’ll just have to find out how they’ll be used. But I think from their name you can probably guess.”

He was of course right: Erin knew the beads were going to go in her ass, but she didn’t see how that would help her squirt, and she was not particularly keen on finding out: the rough anal sex from yesterday on top of the plug inserted during the night had left her anus feeling rather sore.

“Alright, enough chat,” Jason declared. “Chris, gag her.” Chris stepped forward, tilted Erin’s head back, and stuffed the ball gag into her mouth once more, taking care not to spill any of the semen within. Erin had to struggle to keep everything inside her mouth at once: the ball was much wider than any of the men’s penises and stretched her cheeks to the limit.

“Good girl. Now come on over and lie down.” Erin hesitated, but Mark pushed her forward, sending her trudging toward the bed. She cautiously sat on its soft comforter and swung her legs up. She glanced slowly at each of her three captors, then lay back, keeping her legs tightly together. Jason joined her on the bed, resting on her legs to keep them still. “Now, Erin, I’m going to tie your arms to the headboard to keep you still.” Noticing the flash of fear in Erin’s eyes, Jason continued, albeit mockingly. “Don’t worry, sweet pea, I’m not going to tie it very tight, just enough to keep you from jerking around. Trust me, it’s gonna be necessary.”

Jason pulled Erin’s arms backward one at a time, tying each with the rope, which to Erin’s relief turned out to be soft nylon. He continued as he tied, “now, besides seeing how far you can squirt, we’re also gonna try and get the most volume. We think they,” Jason indicated the shelves high on the walls which Erin knew contained cameras somewhere within their knick-knacks, “would really appreciate it even though we’re straying a little from the plan.”

Being reminded that she was constantly being recorded sent Erin into panic, but, as she couldn’t move, Jason continued without notice, tying Erin’s hands together in the middle of the headboard. “The best part about this, well, for you anyway, is that you don’t have to do anything at all—except, of course, keeping that cum inside your mouth. That gag is loose enough that if you swallow anything, it’ll pop right out, so believe me, we’ll know. And if you do swallow any … well, let’s just say there will be major consequences. Think of this as your reward for being so obedient this morning, Erin. You wouldn’t want to ruin it, would you?”

Erin shook her head, though she hardly considered this a “reward.” She wanted nothing more than to claw Jason’s eyes out, crush his testicles, and slice his penis in half with a serrated knife, but she reminded herself for what seemed like the hundredth time that, at least for now, this was an impossibility. There was no way she could manage in a fight on her own against one man as burly as Jason, let alone three at once. Instead, she once again suppressed her defensive instincts and looked Jason obediently in the eye.

“Seems like you’re gonna play nice again, like a good whore,” Jason said. “That’s what I like to see. Now, Mark and Chris, shall we get started?”

[shhhh]

Yay, another update! And it certainly sounds interesting.

[dmoney]

Let's get started!

[luvNgrl]

Thank you for posting so quickly this time. Please keep them coming. I always look forward to more of this story.

[skjelner]

Glad you all are liking it. There's always more coming. ;)

***

Mark set the anal beads and vibrating egg on the bed by Erin’s feet, then handed the dildo to Jason, who stood up, releasing Erin’s legs from his weight. Before she could move, however, Mark and Chris each took hold of a knee, spreading their victim’s toned thighs apart to reveal her victim’s only orifice which had not yet been defiled so far that day. Even though Erin was more than used to being exposed by now, a flush of red still shot across her face as Jason walked around his comrades to get a better view. Erin watched silently as he knelt on the bed between her open legs, then spat on the toy, rubbing it between his hands to cover it in slimy saliva.

“We’ll start with this one,” Jason declared. “This hook here is designed to hit the legendary G-spot,” he continued, pointing to the thin tapered end, “although from what I experienced yesterday, it might not be necessary at all. You’re a natural squirter, Erin.”

Erin could do nothing but watch, trying to take her mind off the taste of hot semen against her tongue. Although she wished she could, she didn’t dare close her eyes for fear of upsetting Jason. In comparison to the brutality of yesterday, today had been going relatively well so far: though she was still sore, at least she was no longer in constant pain from being beaten or having her innards filled with water. This fact allowed Erin to relax a little, for while every act these vile men were doing was absolutely sick, having her vagina on display to them at this moment was certainly much preferable to emptying her bowels while they watched.

A sudden sensation below the waist brought Erin out of her thoughts, her vagina tightening instinctively around its smooth blue intruder.

“Wow, she’s already soaking wet,” Jason exclaimed, rubbing Erin’s glistening pink labial folds as he slid the dildo in further with a faint sucking sound. “Are you sure you haven’t been eagerly anticipating this, Erin?”

Erin could do nothing but stare down at her chest. Jason, clearly delighting in her forced silence, began to pump the silicone toy in and out of her supple canal. The effect was immediate: ripples of pleasure washed through Erin’s body, and she twisted and turned against Chris and Mark’s firm grips with each of Jason’s thrusts. The only sensation she could focus on was the dildo’s hooked end, rubbing deep inside her, against spots she never knew existed. Jason was right: if there were ever a way to make a girl squirt, this would certainly be it.

Jason pushed the dildo in as deep as he could manage without releasing it, then held it in that position, shaking his hand to vibrate it rapidly against Erin’s deep vaginal walls. The sensation of the hook in this sweet spot ignited a vaguely familiar feeling in Erin, almost like an ocean wave slowly building up inside her. It was not an entirely physical sensation, instead it was as if a mysterious part of her was stirring, eager to fully awaken. And it was not unpleasant—as she writhed on the bed, Erin found herself silently pleading with her body to reveal the full extent of this sensation to her, to let her know what exactly this was that she was feeling.

“Are you going to cum?” Jason asked, and Erin, fully aware, knew that she was indeed, if only she could discover a little more about the mysterious feeling inside her. She gave a furious nod, practically begging for Jason to continue.

“Good.” Jason quickly slid the dildo from Erin’s soaking hole and dangled it in the air. Erin let out an angry, muffled scream through the ball gag which she had entirely forgotten about until now. “Oh, don’t get all upset, you greedy whore,” Jason reprimanded, drawing out his words in a mocking tone. As he spoke, he rubbed the wet dildo across Erin’s breasts and nipples, coating them in a thin layer of her own pussy juices. “I know you were about to cum, but that was just a primer to warm you up for what’s next. If I’m going to make you squirt, I want it to really be worth it. Guys, get her into full position.”

Jason dropped the slippery dildo onto Erin’s firm stomach, then turned and walked toward the metal chest in the corner, presumably to retrieve another enticing device, leaving Erin to her other two captors. Despite her muffled protests, Mark and Chris synchronously pushed the lissome twenty year-old’s legs backward over her perfectly tanned chest until her knees were nearly beside her ears. Erin silently thanked her parents for paying for those few years of gymnastics she had taken in junior high school: she had been strict on herself about stretching and exercising regularly ever since, keeping her body in what she—and everyone around her—considered flawless shape.

Jason returned to the bedside, carrying not a sex toy but another few lengths of nylon rope. He proceeded to tie Erin’s ankles to her wrists, which were now becoming a bit sore against the hard wood of the headboard. “This is among my favorite positions to put someone in,” Jason informed her as he crept back around to the base of the bed, climbing atop once more. “It’s so … open ….”—he picked up the anal beads and vibrating egg, one in each hand, and caressed Erin’s thighs lightly with them, sending shivers through her body, which was still trembling from the almost-orgasm—“… and revealing …” —Jason breathed in sharply, leaned closer to Erin, and dropped the two toys onto her bare stomach beside the dildo—“ … and helpless …”—he dragged his fingernails across Erin’s warm thighs, replacing the tickling sensation of the toys with an enjoyably harsh scratching—”… and inviting …”—Erin could feel Jason’s cool breath on her dripping labia, quivering each time he spoke—“… and not to mention, delicious.”

Jason unfurled his tongue and slid it between Erin’s moist folds, sucking deeply at every bit of delectable pinkness, then moved up and slowly swirled his tongue around her swollen clitoris, biting gently every few seconds. Erin moaned wildly at this: her body had once again overpowered her mind, pushing out the pain in her cheeks from the ball gag, the trauma of yesterday’s rapes, the knowledge that she was trapped with these men with no end in sight.

Finally, Jason relented, and Erin gasped as best she could through the gag as Jason rose to his knees on the bed. “Now that I’ve gotten you ready again, shall we continue?” Hopeless thoughts attempted to flood back to her, but Erin pushed them out again, nodding slowly to Jason in affirmation. “Excellent. You guys ready to see something special?”

[shhhh]

Argh. More, more!
Please post soon!

[dmoney]

Keep going! We're counting on it!

[BlueCookies]

I enjoy reading this story so much! Thanks for starting to update it again!

[Nitemare Sin]

Wow, this story is impressive.

[skjelner]

Thanks everyone! I always appreciate feedback.

***

Erin looked over at Chris and Mark, whom she realized had been masturbating to her tender moans the entire time. They nodded but remained silent, clearly still enjoying the sight of Erin’s naked breasts coated in her pre-cum. Suddenly, another blissful sensation shot through her, and Erin gazed down to find Jason rubbing the anal beads across her still-soaking labia, lubricating them in her juices.

“This is another of the secrets to honing the art of squirting,” Jason declared, holding the dripping beads up for Erin to see. “You might not believe it, but the sensation of these babies in your ass will make you wild. Vaginal stimulation just doesn’t cut it for the results I want to get.” Erin was unable to imagine attaining more pleasure than she already had that morning, although she was curious to see if she could discover more about the mysterious feeling from earlier.

A sudden prodding in her bottom caused Erin to flinch, but she remembered she needed to relax when taking something up the anus. The beads were much smaller than any of the three men’s penises, so Erin found it relatively easy to do so, letting the beads slide into her with relative ease. When they were in place, Jason picked up the dildo and inserted it again into Erin’s more accommodating hole. Erin moaned from the familiar sensation as Jason began to thrust like before, bringing waves of pleasure back to her.

After several seconds of this, Jason grinned widely, gripped the anal beads, and began thrusting them in and out as well. Unbelievably to Erin, the bumpy beads felt incredible sliding against her tight anal walls, and her eyes rolled back in her head as she panted through the gag, completely immune to the taste of the stale semen. Jason continued to thrust with both toys, fulfilling two different parts of Erin’s thirsty desire, the dildo’s hook raging against the most sensitive spot in her body, the beads eliciting entirely new pangs of pleasure.

It was back. The mysterious feeling from before was back inside her, stronger than before, although Erin now realized just what it was: some previously unknown sexual nature was awakening from its twenty year-old slumber, coming alive, truly alive, for the first time as the rapist below her ravaged her every orifice. It was true: Erin knew Jason was a rapist, a disgusting and vile creature, but it didn’t matter to her then, for she also knew that at that moment she was discovering a long-hidden part of her very being, and knowing herself was absolutely vital.

She closed her eyes and rocked along with Jason’s thrusting, which was soon joined by yet another gratifying sensation: Chris or Mark, she wasn’t sure which, had taken the vibrating egg and pressed it against her clitoris. Whether it was turned to low or high or even had a speed adjustment at all didn’t concern Erin—she was utterly lost in ecstasy, consumed by the asynchronous rhythms of the dildo’s frantic thrusting, the anal beads being pushed and pulled every which way, and the egg’s captivating vibrations rocking her entire body.

It all happened so fast: Erin realized she was about to climax, shattering all her perceptions of the limitations of pleasure, and furiously nodded her head at the men, shaking her hair wildly. Jason got the message and quickly rolled backward off the bed, while who Erin now saw was Mark pressed the egg even harder against her aching clit. At this, Erin gasped and released a bellowing scream, easily audible through her gag, as an utter torrent of clear liquid sprayed out from deep within her, jetting forcefully across the room in high-arcing stream easily several inches wide. All three men froze in awe as the stream came crashing down onto the table in the opposite corner, covering it completely in runny female ejaculate.

“Holy SHIT!” Jason exclaimed, clearly beyond pleased with the results of his efforts. But it did not stop. Erin screamed again and again, reinforcing the stream with each moan, and Jason leap to his feet, furiously masturbating as he lapped at the stream of warm liquid with his mouth, taking splash after splash to the face. Ejaculate ran down his hard body, covering his genitals as he jacked off with loud squelching sounds, and Jason quickly approached Erin as the stream of cum began to falter. He reached out and rubbed Erin’s pussy intensely, causing her to moan and twitch uncontrollably as she squirted several more smaller streams of ejaculate onto her captor.

After several more seconds, the squirting ceased, but Erin did not. Jason drew his hand away in disbelief as Erin convulsed in her bindings, completely unable to control her muscles, letting out low, guttural screams through the ball gag.

“Jesus Christ man, look what we did to her,” Mark proclaimed as he and Chris stroked their rock-hard penises at the sight before them.

“Shh,” Jason whispered, “just enjoy it.” He stepped forward and lapped at Erin’s aching labia a few more times, sending her into further uncontrolled fits, her thighs shaking violently with each lick.

“Shit, I can’t take this anymore,” Chris said, and moved toward Erin just as he released his own stream of ejaculate, shooting a thick rope of semen across Erin’s eyes. A second later, Mark did the same, painting the beautiful face beneath him a ghostly shade of translucent white. At this, Erin finally began to calm down and stop shaking, reducing her moans to heavy breathing. All three men backed away to gaze at the marvel before them, pleased with their work.

“Wait a second, guys …” Mark stepped toward Erin, who looked at him in a moment of fear. “That’s what I thought.” He reached out and grabbed the ball gag, pulling it forward and out of Erin’s aching mouth, turning her head for his comrades to see.

“She swallowed, guys. She swallowed. All of it.”

[Instinct]

....Ohhh god....hopefully they realize she couldn't really control it. but this should be fun to read..o.o

[xXScarlettezXx]

ohhhhhhhhh ....nuuuuuuuuuu....please....oh please...dont let them hurt her...she will be a good baby...i just know it...please let them go easy on her...after all she showed them how much she loved the extacy....OMG..this story is sooooooo hard to pull away from......scary yet exciting.....i feel pins and needles going up my spine worrying about what they will do....ahhhhhhhhhggggggggg.....