03-22-2007, 07:40 PM | #1 |
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It All Happened One Night [FICTION]
One day at school a very hot girl that you always had a crush on walks up to youand asks you to come over to her house today. you say yes and then she walks away.your thinking that finally your dream has came true.then its time to go over to her house.while your walking some kids come up to youin a van and put you in it.now your thinking that this is all a dream but the people just blindfoded you and you fell them takeing your clothes off.your trying to get up but you cant cause some of them are holding you down.finally they get done stripping you and you feel them tieing you up to a pole and all your thinking of is not being late to the girls house.
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03-22-2007, 07:50 PM | #2 |
getDare Sweetheart
Join Date: Mar 2007
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pretty good, keep it going i want to hear more
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03-25-2007, 01:09 PM | #3 |
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Good beginning, most of the time pretty much everyone wants to hear part II so.......Grammer could be better but still good.
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03-26-2007, 06:11 AM | #5 |
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Grammar not great so hard to understand. continue
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