Fiction: A New Society - Page 11

Doms_Little_Girl · 08-05-2010, 09:11 AM

I dunno office lover I've been following this story a lot one of my favorites and personally although sad the story ending is good...I mean isn't forty years as a dog never having a relationship love sex or anything just as sad?...Personally although the story ending is sad it fits and I think your should keep it

stick by your guns office!

jcogginsa · 08-05-2010, 04:33 PM

the ending wasn't sad, it was depressing. there is a difference

Doms_Little_Girl · 08-06-2010, 02:02 AM

Don't really wanna clog this board up with an argument but when you're depressed you're also sad...Check out a thesaurus

http://thesaurus.com/browse/depressed

sadden...So I missed the den off, sorry about that.

Just encase I wasn't 100% here it says sadness

http://thesaurus.com/browse/depression

Don't start an argument for the sake of one especially on a good story...Ok?

goodscoolls · 08-06-2010, 02:37 AM

like your writings

Noquestions · 08-06-2010, 12:55 PM

Finish the story how you want to. It is yours. Do not worry, I am sure many people have read books, or watched films they ended up disliking/feeling sad/despressed by the end, or by parts of it. I am equally sure they do not write to the author/makers and have them re-do it to their tastes.

Are you going to do a canis slave story now? I am interested to see how you would handle that, and what they do after their time is up on the island.

Doms_Little_Girl · 08-07-2010, 03:42 AM

Here here Noquestions!

also I've really been waiting for the canis story PLEASE don't end now...The world will be sad

Officelover · 08-07-2010, 08:07 AM

Don't worry, all, I won't end now. I think I will listen to Domslittlegirl and Noquestions. Thanks, guys, for supporting me. Expect the beginning of the Canis story soon.

Officelover · 08-22-2010, 10:14 PM

As you may have seen from my blog post, I'm leaving getDare for a long time. When I come back I may continue this story, or I may not. We'll see. If not, I'm sure you'll find other stories to amuse you.

packrat · 04-07-2013, 09:17 AM

Will you continue the story now that you're back?

Officelover · 04-07-2013, 08:22 PM

I actually hadn't given it much thought. I might. I always did want to write the Canis story. So maybe, just a brief sketch to finish this thing up. I'm always starting stories I can't finish.

I think I've definitely grown as a writer since the time I left this story to die. Please, please, please read my new story, "The Child". I personally think it's the best sex story I've ever written, and it's just about to get good. If you like fucked up societies like this one, you'd probably like the new story, except there's only one slave who everyone abuses.

08-05-2010, 09:11 AM	#151
Doms_Little_Girl Member Join Date: Nov 2009 Location: On my knees awaiting orders Posts: 50	I dunno office lover I've been following this story a lot one of my favorites and personally although sad the story ending is good...I mean isn't forty years as a dog never having a relationship love sex or anything just as sad?...Personally although the story ending is sad it fits and I think your should keep it stick by your guns office! __________________ Just three holes and a pair of tits for my Master, kearns.

08-06-2010, 02:02 AM	#153
Doms_Little_Girl Member Join Date: Nov 2009 Location: On my knees awaiting orders Posts: 50	Don't really wanna clog this board up with an argument but when you're depressed you're also sad...Check out a thesaurus http://thesaurus.com/browse/depressed sadden...So I missed the den off, sorry about that. Just encase I wasn't 100% here it says sadness http://thesaurus.com/browse/depression Don't start an argument for the sake of one especially on a good story...Ok? __________________ Just three holes and a pair of tits for my Master, kearns.

08-06-2010, 12:55 PM	#155
Noquestions Member Join Date: May 2009 Posts: 37	Finish the story how you want to. It is yours. Do not worry, I am sure many people have read books, or watched films they ended up disliking/feeling sad/despressed by the end, or by parts of it. I am equally sure they do not write to the author/makers and have them re-do it to their tastes. Are you going to do a canis slave story now? I am interested to see how you would handle that, and what they do after their time is up on the island. __________________ 27/F/Mistress Interested in... Sluts. Anal. CBT. Orgasm Control. Edging. Clit play. Spanking. Training. Toys. Masturbating. Bondage. Boobs. Not as interested in... Poo/Pee -play. Too much mess. Time wasters. Best with webcam or pics!

08-07-2010, 03:42 AM	#156
Doms_Little_Girl Member Join Date: Nov 2009 Location: On my knees awaiting orders Posts: 50	Here here Noquestions! also I've really been waiting for the canis story PLEASE don't end now...The world will be sad __________________ Just three holes and a pair of tits for my Master, kearns.

08-07-2010, 08:07 AM	#157
Officelover Truth or Dare Enthusiast Join Date: May 2008 Location: New England Posts: 2,602 Blog Entries: 107	Don't worry, all, I won't end now. I think I will listen to Domslittlegirl and Noquestions. Thanks, guys, for supporting me. Expect the beginning of the Canis story soon. __________________ 20 Trans Femme Nonbinary Ass Collector Writes Poetry On Aluminum Foil with Gold Gel Pens Fills Mason Jar with Vodka I'm Doing A Cleanse White Kid with Black Nails

08-05-2010, 04:33 PM	#152
jcogginsa Member Join Date: Jun 2009 Posts: 61	the ending wasn't sad, it was depressing. there is a difference

08-06-2010, 02:37 AM	#154
goodscoolls Member Join Date: Jul 2010 Posts: 42	like your writings

08-22-2010, 10:14 PM	#158
Officelover Truth or Dare Enthusiast Join Date: May 2008 Location: New England Posts: 2,602 Blog Entries: 107	As you may have seen from my blog post, I'm leaving getDare for a long time. When I come back I may continue this story, or I may not. We'll see. If not, I'm sure you'll find other stories to amuse you. __________________ 20 Trans Femme Nonbinary Ass Collector Writes Poetry On Aluminum Foil with Gold Gel Pens Fills Mason Jar with Vodka I'm Doing A Cleanse White Kid with Black Nails

04-07-2013, 09:17 AM	#159
packrat Junior Member Join Date: Apr 2009 Posts: 20	Will you continue the story now that you're back?

04-07-2013, 08:22 PM	#160
Officelover Truth or Dare Enthusiast Join Date: May 2008 Location: New England Posts: 2,602 Blog Entries: 107	I actually hadn't given it much thought. I might. I always did want to write the Canis story. So maybe, just a brief sketch to finish this thing up. I'm always starting stories I can't finish. I think I've definitely grown as a writer since the time I left this story to die. Please, please, please read my new story, "The Child". I personally think it's the best sex story I've ever written, and it's just about to get good. If you like fucked up societies like this one, you'd probably like the new story, except there's only one slave who everyone abuses.