24 Hour Submissive [FICTION] - Page 4

Shadowice · 08-12-2012, 08:34 AM

great story really loved the start of it awaiting more chapters

fullofsecrets · 08-12-2012, 11:10 PM

Great job Cherry. Please continue.

Rose_Angel · 08-14-2012, 06:11 AM

Madam cherrygirl, this girl would like to say that she was so enthralled reading this story up to this point, that she missed one of her allowed bathroom breaks for the day, this girl looks forward to reading more in the future!

Octopimp · 12-29-2012, 01:05 AM

I love this story. Its taken me 3 attempts to finish it (i came twice). You should write more of it.

08-12-2012, 08:34 AM	#46
Shadowice getDare Addict Join Date: Aug 2012 Location: USA Posts: 2,307 Blog Entries: 4	great story really loved the start of it awaiting more chapters Last edited by Shadowice; 08-12-2012 at 02:44 PM.

08-12-2012, 11:10 PM	#47
fullofsecrets Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2011 Location: USA Posts: 206	Great job Cherry. Please continue. __________________ I am the author of "A Hidden Voice" and "Immoral Teaching". Thank you for everyone's comments on my writing. And my stories do not continue without comments. That means no new parts till there are new comments

08-14-2012, 06:11 AM	#48
Rose_Angel Distinguished Member Join Date: Jun 2011 Location: US Posts: 872 Blog Entries: 54	Madam cherrygirl, this girl would like to say that she was so enthralled reading this story up to this point, that she missed one of her allowed bathroom breaks for the day, this girl looks forward to reading more in the future!

12-29-2012, 01:05 AM	#49
Octopimp Junior Member Join Date: Jun 2012 Posts: 10	I love this story. Its taken me 3 attempts to finish it (i came twice). You should write more of it.