a gay week in Florida (non-fiction into fiction) - Page 2

Playstation · 07-09-2008, 01:54 AM

Usually you don't make a new thread for every post..

smilesmishy · 07-09-2008, 06:47 AM

ye but make each bit longer because ur making them 2 short and otherwise ull be makinga lot of threads but still very good story

Trystaan · 07-09-2008, 09:30 AM

Its an alright story. Think about spelling. use a spell checker and don't make new posts for each new one.

glue · 07-09-2008, 09:33 AM

i agree here great story but eeds more per post

and only in one thread

but good 6.6/10

cj123 · 07-10-2008, 09:27 AM

Part 3

Next thing I knew I had a finger in my ass, and a dick in my mouth. I was positioned across the bed, my mouth hanging over the side, where Jon was standing.
"Alright, since you're my bitch, turn over." Frankie said. I was now on my back, Jon started sucking my nipple. Frankie positioned himself above my hard cock, and slowly moved down onto it. Suddenly, the door handle to our room started to turn, as the door lurched forward

Merlin · 07-10-2008, 09:49 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by playstation

Usually you don't make a new thread for every post..

Yeah no need to make 2 ... Mergelin strikes again... Threads merged

jjjj · 07-10-2008, 10:07 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Merlin

Yeah no need to make 2 ... Mergelin strikes again... Threads merged

merglin! who is this merglin?

the story sounds like it might work keep going lets see what happens

naked40 · 07-10-2008, 11:53 AM

Please write a bit more in each post, it gets so fragmented

cj123 · 07-11-2008, 10:53 AM

Part 4 of this four part series, conclusion

As the door swung open, everbody still sat there, Frankie riding my cock, and Jon with his mouth on my nipple, still licking. The door opened fully, to reveal what we all feared. It was our teacher, Mrs. Munitz.
She was young, around the age of 20, and very hot. Her tits wwere regulairly popping out of her shirt and she always wore a short skirt, and we would often drop something in front of her so that she bent over and well, you get the point.
She walked in fully and said "So you boys need some pleasuring, that bad? Well, let me help." We all sat in awe, as our teacher, our chaperone, was stripping, right in front of us!! She got down to her bra, when she told Frankie to get off of my dick, and sit on the bed. She started giving him a very sexy lap dance. He turned to Jon and , making a face that told us that he liked that way better, which was odd because everybody thought he was gay. I started hearing beeping, loud beeping. I opened my eyes to find Jon on the floor of our Florida hotel room, Frankie in one bed and me in the other bed, with a large load of cum sitting in bowers, and all over the bed. I turned the alarm off, just as Frankie was waking up. It seemed that he had alot of cum on his bed too, and I quickly looked down at Jon, to see that he had also exploded all over the floor. We all had a wet dream that night!!!! Frankie finally broke the silence, when he turned to me and said, "Our teacher gives good lap dances."

cj123 · 07-11-2008, 10:54 AM

lol twilight zone ending..................I hope everyone got the ending.

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07-09-2008, 09:33 AM	#19
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07-10-2008, 11:53 AM	#23
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07-11-2008, 10:53 AM	#24
cj123 Member Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: um.......the voice in my head says Iran, but the street sign says Canada Posts: 47	Part 4!!!!!!!!! Part 4 of this four part series, conclusion As the door swung open, everbody still sat there, Frankie riding my cock, and Jon with his mouth on my nipple, still licking. The door opened fully, to reveal what we all feared. It was our teacher, Mrs. Munitz. She was young, around the age of 20, and very hot. Her tits wwere regulairly popping out of her shirt and she always wore a short skirt, and we would often drop something in front of her so that she bent over and well, you get the point. She walked in fully and said "So you boys need some pleasuring, that bad? Well, let me help." We all sat in awe, as our teacher, our chaperone, was stripping, right in front of us!! She got down to her bra, when she told Frankie to get off of my dick, and sit on the bed. She started giving him a very sexy lap dance. He turned to Jon and , making a face that told us that he liked that way better, which was odd because everybody thought he was gay. I started hearing beeping, loud beeping. I opened my eyes to find Jon on the floor of our Florida hotel room, Frankie in one bed and me in the other bed, with a large load of cum sitting in bowers, and all over the bed. I turned the alarm off, just as Frankie was waking up. It seemed that he had alot of cum on his bed too, and I quickly looked down at Jon, to see that he had also exploded all over the floor. We all had a wet dream that night!!!! Frankie finally broke the silence, when he turned to me and said, "Our teacher gives good lap dances." Last edited by cj123; 07-11-2008 at 05:52 PM.

07-09-2008, 06:47 AM	#17
smilesmishy Senior Member Join Date: May 2008 Location: Australia Posts: 144	ye but make each bit longer because ur making them 2 short and otherwise ull be makinga lot of threads but still very good story

07-10-2008, 09:27 AM	#20
cj123 Member Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: um.......the voice in my head says Iran, but the street sign says Canada Posts: 47	Part 3 Next thing I knew I had a finger in my ass, and a dick in my mouth. I was positioned across the bed, my mouth hanging over the side, where Jon was standing. "Alright, since you're my bitch, turn over." Frankie said. I was now on my back, Jon started sucking my nipple. Frankie positioned himself above my hard cock, and slowly moved down onto it. Suddenly, the door handle to our room started to turn, as the door lurched forward

07-11-2008, 10:54 AM	#25
cj123 Member Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: um.......the voice in my head says Iran, but the street sign says Canada Posts: 47	lol twilight zone ending..................I hope everyone got the ending. Last edited by cj123; 07-11-2008 at 10:56 AM.