Third Time's the Charm [FICTION] - Page 2

Sum · 11-27-2007, 04:23 PM

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Originally Posted by ManicD

Sorry to say, I pushed on a bit but lost interest about here

Fair enough, guess i'm not getting to the action quickly enough. Was thinking my style wasn't really right for here, why i've never posted a story here before and have only done so now once i was asked.

molten man · 11-28-2007, 09:56 PM

I liked the writing. He is writing flashback!! So he skips to the present and then back!!

11-28-2007, 09:56 PM	#17
molten man Distinguished Member Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Mumbai, India Posts: 946	I liked the writing. He is writing flashback!! So he skips to the present and then back!! __________________ MMan 26/m/straight Skype: molten_man007 Kik: molten_man