Little Sister Becomes a Slave

[KittyCat91]

I'm now in my room,searching for my two piece swimdress. I finde the bottoms and put them on.I then here the doorbell ring.

Jeremy:CAT!!!!! James is here!!!

Cathryn: K,I'm almost ready!!!

I quickly find my top and put it on. I then search for my flipflopes and a towel.

Jeremy: (Answers the door to let James in) Hey James.

James: Hey, wheres Cathryn?

Jeremy: Shes in her room getting ready,shes almost done.
(They walk in the living room,an Jeremy sits back down next to Kaiden.)

James: Oh okay. Hey Kaiden.

Kaiden: Hey, whats up?

James: Nuthin much. Whatch you guys watchin?

Jeremy: American Pie Betta House Club

Kaiden: The X-rated version.

James: Oh, cool. Hey Jeremy,is it okay if I wait for Cate by the pool?

Jeremy: Yeah,sure.
(James leaves the living room and enters the indoor pool. I finally find my flipflops,put them on,grab my towel,and walk into the living room.)

Cathryn: Wheres James?

Jeremy: Already at the pool,waiting for you.

Cathryn: Oh okay. Well I'm going swimming now.

Jeremy: Okay

I leave the living room and enter my indoor pool,but I don't see James.
Our Pool is very nice. Its about 8ft deep and has alot of room. We even have 2 diving boards,and a tunnle. The top of the tunnel is made into a waer fall, also has a water slide ontop,and as a hot tub under the tunnle.
I stand on the edge of the pool,between the diving boards, wondering where James could be.

Cathryn: James?!

Not knowing that James was behinde me,he sneaks up on me and pushes me into the pool,jumping in after me. He catches me,holding my waist,and swims me back up to the surface.

James: Hey baby,are you okay?

Cathryn: (I'm coughing up water that I accidently swallowed.) You jerk(jokingly).

James: Awww,I'm sorry baby. I didn't mean to scare you. (He kisses me on the lips)

Cathryn: I've missed you. (I put my arms around hhis shoulders.)

James: I've missed you too.

Just as we were about to kiss again, out of no where Jeremy and Kaiden jumps in the pool doing cannonballs. The cannonballs made huge waves. Th scared James,causing him to let go of my waste, and making me go underwater. The waves they made were going over my head,causing me to chocke on water. I feel some one grabb my waist and swim me over to the shallow end,to where I would be able to stand.

Kaiden: (lets go of my waist) Are you okay?

Cathryn: Yeah,I'am now. Thanks.

James: (swims over too me and puts my arm around me) Are you okay?

Cathryn: Yeah,I'm fine.

James: Maybe swimming was a bad idea.

Cathryn: (mocking James) Or maybe you shouldn't have pushed me in the deep end.

Jeremy: (gets mad at James for what he just heard) Dude, you pushed her in the deep end?!?

Cathryn: Jeremy its okay. We were just playing around.

James: Yeah man,chill. I jumped in after her. I would never do anything to put her in danger. I love her.

Jeremy: Yeah?!? Well you did put her in danger. We all know that she can't swim well. Yet,you pushed her in the deep end.

Cathryn: (being sarcastic to Jeremy) Why don't you just publish that in the news paper. (I'm embarrassed that I'm 17 years old and sill can't swim well yet.)

James: Really?!? Well you seemed not to act like it,when you jumped in the pool,knowing that we were in the deep end.

Cathryn: Okay,thats enough! Stop arguing!

Kaiden: ( backs Jeremy away from James) Babe,relax. Calm down. (He kisses Jeremy to help calm him down)

Jeremy: Thanks, I feel alot better now. James, I'm sorry.

James: Its okay. I get that shes your little sister,and your just trying to protect her. But I want you to know that I love her very much, and would never mean to put her life in danger.

Jeremy: Yeah, I know. I guess I just get a bit over protective sometimes.

Cathryn: A bit? I think more than a bit. I love both of you guys.

Kaiden: Hey,what about me?

Cathryn: I love you too Kaiden. (Changing the subject) So what do you guys want to do?

James: (picks me up,carrying my like a baby) Wanna go to the hot tub and make out?

Cathryn: (James starts kissing me) Okay.

James carrys me under the tunnle,to the hot tub. We both get in the hot tub, and start making out. James trys to slide my strap off my shoulder,but I feel someone else pull it back up.

Jeremy: James, her top stays on.

Jeremy scared us a bit, so we stopped kissing. Jeremy sat down next to me,and Kaiden sat next between Jeremy and James.

Cathryn: (I was upset at Jeremy for interupting me and James.) Jeremy,can you and Kaiden please go somewhere else.?

Jeremy: No.

Kaiden: Jeremy & I were talking,and wanted to see if you two would like to play a little game with us.

James: What kind of game?

Jeremy: Truth or dare.

James: (talking to me) Do you want to play?

Cathryn: I don't know...I guess.

James: What are the rule.

Jeremy: Obviously,whatever the truth is you have to tell it. Or whatever the dare is,you have to do it.

Kaiden: If anyone backouts, they will be punished.And will be the person's slave for a year.

Cathryn: Punishment,slave? What do you mean?

Jeremy: If you back out,then you will find out.

Cathryn: Okay.

James: K,so who goes first?

Kaiden: Well since ladies always go first,Cathryn can. So Cat,what will it be, truth or dare?

Cathryn: (I'm kind of nervouse and don't know which one to choose) Uh, I guess truth.

Kaiden: Okay. Are you still a virgin?

Cathryn: Yes.

Jeremy: You better be.

Cathryn: Kaiden, truth or dare?

Kaiden: Truth.

Cathryn: Have you seen a girl or guy naked?

Kaiden: Yes.I've seen Jeremy.

Jeremy: (starts laughing) And don't forget the time you walked in on Cathryn.

Kaiden: (laughing) Oh yeah. I also saw baby picture of her too.

Cathryn: (I stop laughing,and start blushing.I'm shocked at what I just heard) What?!?! Jeremy, I could kill you.

Jeremy: Cat,I swear I didn't show those to him. That was mom's department.

Kaiden: Yep, your mom even showed me a home video of you and Jeremy taking a bath togeather when yall were little.

(I'm blushing bright red,and Jeremy stops laughing)

Jeremy: Say What? Cat,we must destroy those pictures and videos.

Cathryn: I say we burn them.

Jeremy: (laughing) Okay back to the game.

[trust-no-1]

Love it love it love it, please continue ASAP

[Bangin]

Looking forward to reading more of this one!

[dienathi10]

please continue fast

[KittyCat91]

Kaiden. James,its your turn.

James: Oh okay. Jeremy,truth or dare?

Jeremy: Dare.

James: I dare you to kiss Cathryn for at least 30 seconds.

Cathryn: (I'm upset and shocked at James dared Jeremy to do) JAMES.(I slap his shoulder)

Jeremy: (he grabbs my wrist and pulls me towards him) Sorry, Cat. I have to do the dare.

Cathryn: Ewww,NO. Your my brother. I'm not kissing you, I'd rather kiss a toliet seat.

Kaiden: Cat,just close your eyes, and pretend your kissing James.

Cathryn: (I give up trying to get out of the dare) Okay.

Jeremy: Don't worry, I'll get James back for this. Are you ready?

Cathryn: I guess. Lets just get this done and over with.

Jeremy: Okay.

Jeremy leans over and kisses me. I know that its kind of weird that I'm kissing my brother,but he was actually a good kisser,and he kind of made me get turned on a bit.

James: Okay,you can stop now. (Jeremy and I stop kissing.)

Jeremy: James,truth or dare?

James: Truth

[KittyCat91]

Hey readers,sorry for the short chapter. Theres a thunderstorm where I live,and I need to get off the computer,because it coming closer. I'm really sorry for the long wait,I hopfully will be posting the rest of the chapter soon.

[Sweet270]

Thanks 4 letting us know n be sure to put more in later..

[Bangin]

Really enjoying this story, can't wait for more!

[12356416514a]

its different to read about gays, keep going

[KittyCat91]

Jeremy: (dissapointed that James didn't pick dare) Is it true that you use to be gay,if so why did that change?

James: Yes. I use to be,but that was before I met Cathryn,and that changed because when I first saw her it was definitley love at first sight. Shes the only girl who I ever seen to be with forever.

Cathryn: Awww,I love you. (I kiss james on the lips)

Jeremy: (splashes water at our face to make us stop kissing) Okay Romeo and Juliet back to the game.

Kaiden: Cathryn,truth or dare?

Cathryn: Truth.

Kaiden: What happened between you and your ex Justin?

Cathryn: I don't like talking about that.

James: Either you ask her a deferent question,or we leave.

Kaiden: If she dosen't answer the truth and you both leave,then you both will be punished,and you'll become my slaves.

Jeremy: Dude,thats not cool. You know she doesn't like to talk about that. Besides you know what happened,why do you need her to explain it again?.

Cathryn: Jeremy its okay. I guess since everyone in here know,then it shouldn't hurt to tell. I broke up with justin because he almost blackmailed me,and I could never trust him ever again. I found out that he never really loved me,he just wanted to use me.

Kaiden: Oh,well I didn't know that part. I'm sorry he did that to you.

Cathryn: Its okay, I'm over it. That was the past, I have a much better boyfriend now.

James: (puts his arm around me) Jeremy,truth or dare?

Jeremy: Truth.

James: Have you and Kaiden had sex yet?

Jeremy: Yep.

Cathryn: So you can have sex with Kaiden,but I can't have sex with James?.

Jeremy: Yeah, he can't get me pregnate like James can with you.

Kaiden: (changing the subject) Okay from now on we all have to do dares,no more truths.

[liltdoggy]

I L-O-V-E this!!! SO MUCH!!!!

[equilibrium]

I'm sorry, but I can't read this story, when it hasn't be formatted properly.

the proper way is:

"This is a example." said John Smith.
Jane Doe looked surprised "Oh!" She exclaimed, " Look, proper English!"
"Look," John smith says, " I can even write action as well."
And with that statement, John smith leant in and pressed his lips to Jane's.

If you want, I could be your beta reader/mentor?
A beta reader reads through work and fixes problems.

[444]

I actually like it the way she writes it. It's different. You don't have to change it 8)

[equilibrium]

Changing it would mean a vast improvement in readability.
In certain instances changing your writing from proper English is fine, for example, when you're role playing, or in the style of the narrator, (for example, if the narrator was a little kid, then you might purposely mess up big words, like owl does in winnie the pooh, ) but this is not one of those times

[Bangin]

Originally Posted by equilibrium

I'm sorry, but I can't read this story, when it hasn't be formatted properly.

the proper way is:

"This is a example." said John Smith.
Jane Doe looked surprised "Oh!" She exclaimed, " Look, proper English!"
"Look," John smith says, " I can even write action as well."
And with that statement, John smith leant in and pressed his lips to Jane's.

If you want, I could be your beta reader/mentor?
A beta reader reads through work and fixes problems.

"This is an example." said John Smith.
Jane Doe looked surprised. "Oh!" She exclaimed, " Look, proper English!"
"Look," John Smith said, " I can even write action as well."
And with that statement, John Smith leant in and pressed his lips to Jane's.


Everyone has a different style of writing and although this is less conventional and standard, it still works. I'm enjoying this story and am looking forward to more!