[Fiction] Adoption

[emoiist]

love the story ! please continue !

[shhhh]

this is surreal but fascinating. like it so far. keep it up!

[DancingBear]

Sorry guys, was away from my computer for about a week. I have a bit more written but I want to add to it before posting.

[shhhh]

wah i keep checking back anxiously. 3 installments and i'm hooked.
please post soon! (apologies for impatience)

[DancingBear]

Here's part four! Hope you enjoy.

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My eyes follow the thin leather down to a simple black collar around my new girl's neck. She's wearing a pair of panties and bra now, I'm assuming to be brought out in public. I think about tearing them off of her when we arrive home.

I rise from my seat and stride over, trying to hold in my jittering and play it cool. My hands are shaking a bit as I reach for the leash. "Have you finished the forms? Could you bring them up to the desk, please?" Jacob asks with a smile, crossing his arms, still holding MY girl's leash in his grubby fingers. I swallow and blink. I completely forgot about the forms.

Name? Social? Birthdate? I'm sick of this, just give her to me! I scribble the information down as fast as I can, finishing with a chicken scratch signature, barely legible, but I don't care. She is almost mine. I get up from my seat once more, feeling the sweat on my brow now. I hand the clipboard to Jacob and impatiently pat my thighs while he looks it over. Still trying to play it all "dommy", I try to avoid staring down at my new pet and drooling.

Finally, Jacob hands over the leash. He and the receptionist look at me with big smiles on their faces. "Have a nice day, and pleasure doing business with you. I hope you two are very happy together." I say farewell and look down at #044. She looks up at me, but doesn't take even one glance back. She doesn't appear like she wants to either. I pay this no mind and turn for the door, my new girl crawling willingly by my side.

When we get out into the sunlight, I look down at her. She is looking around a bit nervously, probably hoping nobody will see her. I wonder when she had last been outside. We approach my car, and I unlock the doors with a short, sharp "beep". This startles her, and I can tell she is a bit on edge. To calm her down, I open the door for her. I tell her, "Up," and hold her hand, helping her into the passenger seat. Then, I close the door and move around to the drivers side. She watches me the whole time and I can see a bit of a blush. Entering the car, I turn to her and give my first command: "You are to sit on your hands the whole way." And with that, I buckle her seatbelt. She obeys immediately and this makes me giddy. I cannot wait to get home.

As we drive along, I notice it's very quiet. I'm not sure what to say to her so I start easy. "What was your name?" I ask. She looks down at her knees, "I am number forty-four, Sir."

"No, what was it before?" I insist.

"I'm not supposed to talk about that," she replies softly, fidgeting in her seat. I start to get frustrated. "Well you're not in the pound anymore, you're with me, and I want to know what it was." Afterward, I am afraid it was a bit harsh.

"Joanna, Sir. My name was Joanna," she says with a quiver in her voice, "It's been so long since I've heard that name. I am Joanna!" Now she seems happy. She has an identity again. Something inside me tells me I can't let this take full effect. She may have an identity, but she is also mine.

"No," I interrupt, "you're Jo, but you will respond to whatever I want to call you." She doesn't respond. I glance over, and she is looking out of her window, but I can see a slight dimple in her cheek and I know she is smiling. Looks like we are off to a good start.

"Do you find me attractive?" I ask, smirking, looking to boost my own ego. I hear a soft "Yes, Sir." and my pants are tight again.

"When was the last time you came?"

[Ozpossum]

really good keep posting

[pymani96]

I love it. Please continue
Pymani

[danrob88]

Another good chapter. I so wish I was writing this, I'm really enjoying it lol

[sara.zibapasand]

Originally Posted by danrob88

Another good chapter. I so wish I was writing this, I'm really enjoying it lol

wonderful story pleas continue

[17Slave4Girls]

Good story Rant.. Bravo.

[Rachie]

Originally Posted by Rant

"When was the last time you came?"

cant wait to find out

Well the answer for me is not to long ago lol

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Dont worry about part lengths - 550 words is plenty,

excellently written and like the way you have kept the consistency of the way you have done the cards for each cage - very easy to read with good grammer and paragraphs

Waiting for more information about Jo

Thank You for the read so far

Love Rachie
x x x x

[SeaShellSushi]

Continue please. I like it a lot.

[shhhh]

getting a bit giddy

[shhhh]

and impatient. rawr.

[DancingBear]

So I've been busy, and not known what to write.. but I will continue with this eventually. It's saved on my desktop. :P