Fiction: Alternative Big Brother goes Stateside!

pothuthic · 09-11-2011, 02:32 PM

Chapter One - What Ever happened with Kieran and Ollie?

*Ollie Enters room*

"Am I the First One In! I can't believe this!" As you can probably tell, Ollie was excited for ABB's Launch in America, He didnt know quite what to expect but at the same time was excited to get Paid for sitting around doing nothing whilst Flirting with some of the sexiest people on earth!

At That point The Door Opened, Ollie really didn't know what to expect.

"Heya Ollie" The Voice Heard, It was George.
"Oh... Hi George!" Ollie said in a wierd voice.

As you may remember from last time, Ollie and Kieran got back together and Got Engaged, But the engagement got called off due to George.

George has hacked one of Ollie's old mates and Started flirting with him, Ollie Flirted back and had a joke not Knowing it was George.

Ollie then found out it was George, George told Kieran about Ollies Joke and they were history.

"No Hard Feelings dude" George tried to make up with Ollie
"Erm Ok Buddy" Ollie said just trying to be nice.

The Door opened.

"As If its you two! You hate each other!" Luke exclaimed
"We Don't Really Hate each other do we Ollie?"
"Erm Sure George!"
"Oh Thats Cool Guys!"

The Door yet again Opened and in came Kieran!

More Soon

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Comments Appreciated

Dylan xX · 09-11-2011, 06:13 PM

Seeing as you dragged me onto that big brother thing, I'm kinda excited to read this.

Already seeming hard to follow, might have to work on that, but still could turn out well

.

Best of luck,

Dylsterr <3

09-11-2011, 02:32 PM	#1
pothuthic Member Join Date: Feb 2010 Posts: 72 Blog Entries: 6	Alternative Big Brother goes Stateside! Chapter One - What Ever happened with Kieran and Ollie? Ollie Enters room "Am I the First One In! I can't believe this!" As you can probably tell, Ollie was excited for ABB's Launch in America, He didnt know quite what to expect but at the same time was excited to get Paid for sitting around doing nothing whilst Flirting with some of the sexiest people on earth! At That point The Door Opened, Ollie really didn't know what to expect. "Heya Ollie" The Voice Heard, It was George. "Oh... Hi George!" Ollie said in a wierd voice. As you may remember from last time, Ollie and Kieran got back together and Got Engaged, But the engagement got called off due to George. George has hacked one of Ollie's old mates and Started flirting with him, Ollie Flirted back and had a joke not Knowing it was George. Ollie then found out it was George, George told Kieran about Ollies Joke and they were history. "No Hard Feelings dude" George tried to make up with Ollie "Erm Ok Buddy" Ollie said just trying to be nice. The Door opened. "As If its you two! You hate each other!" Luke exclaimed "We Don't Really Hate each other do we Ollie?" "Erm Sure George!" "Oh Thats Cool Guys!" The Door yet again Opened and in came Kieran! More Soon ------------------- Comments Appreciated

09-11-2011, 06:13 PM	#2
Dylan xX Distinguished Member Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: U.S.A Posts: 934 Blog Entries: 7	Seeing as you dragged me onto that big brother thing, I'm kinda excited to read this. Already seeming hard to follow, might have to work on that, but still could turn out well . Best of luck, Dylsterr <3 __________________ Gone