The Grand Gizli [REALISTIC FICTION]

LittleRayRay · 05-30-2009, 04:03 PM

So, this story is about A girl named Rene' and her little pack of Best Friends that get into major trouble.

I hope you like it :-)

BACKGROUND INFO:

The main chacacter and her bestest buds have been friends about 4 months. Rene' in the story has been put through her parents separation, her sisters constant beating, friends separating for the fun of it, moving right before middle school, being the "geek", hanging out with the POP-U-lar kids for about 3 weeks then getting uselessly humilited...

The list goes on. Rene' has had a weird life. She is a little pervert to her friends, and that is rubbing off on them. Emily is a little..big. Thorn is anorexic and she is moveing in the summer. Tabatha is the prettiest blacksican you have ever seen, but has had 4 parents most of her life and she hates 2 of them. Saleena is on the verge of being a professinal hairstylest, and did I forget to mention that Bree is a smart blonde teachers little helper and that Nick acts gay just so that he could go to sleepovers with girls...

LittleRayRay · 05-30-2009, 04:05 PM

Monday, 8:10AM 1rst period- Science Class

Emily is acting weird. But do I know why? Do I know why the teacher is soo nice? No, and another big fat...wait... Saleena is acting weird too! And Thorn, and Tabatha!
"What's going on? Am I missing something here?" I asked Tabatha, we are lab partners. We sit at the same table. Well, the same science table.
"What do you mean?"
Definitely hiding something.
"You are acting strange. What do you mean you don't know what I mean! You know perfectly well what I-" Tabatha was about to say something, I knew it.
"I'm assuming you know, but I'll request you join Gizli- for now," She looked around, Emily, Thorn, and Saleena were staring at us. "Keep our behavior on the down-low. They are everything. Even the walls." Where have I heard that before?
Then it hit me. GIZLI! They joined Secret!! I've only heard that name once in a newsletter before.

Quote:

"The POP-u-LAR cult is now sweeping the nation of, yes readers, children. Check your kids emails. We don't know much about this cult, but what we do know is that it is required to send back a form with their Name, Age, and hair color. Gizli has been seen in only one country, but the leader is now planning to make it worldwide. Sources found that-"

"Ha! ME join Gizli?" I say, got everyones attention now. "I know who the leader is! In fact, I'll even sho-" Tabatha was shaking my arm, silently telling me to stop.
"How dare YOU speak of the Grand Gizli!" Tabatha whispered, I just rolled my eyes. Like she could hurt me... Ha! I smiled, and class begun.

Monday, 9:50AM 2nd period- Math Class

Emily, Thorn and Saleena left for their separate classes. This means...
"Hi Tabatha! Mind telling me what this GIZLI thing is you were talking about earlier? Sounds interesting. How MUCH you know about it!" I love making people nervous, lol
"Oh, uh, hi Rene'!" She went real quiet, then leaned forward to whisper in my ear, "I told you, later, ok Rene'? Don't get loud about Gizli. It's serious." Ha ha, ok, how serious? "There are guards..and leaders and everything that could protect someone as important as G.G." she went on, So this "grand secret" has a nickname now? Lol. "G.G. can't get harmed. We, meaning, Me, Thorn, Emily and Saleena, would have nothing to do after that... It'd be horrible." I can't believe she thinks she'd have nothing to do! HA! what the junior member she is.. But I won't give my position up that easy.
"Hey, did you do that Math homework?" I ask Tabatha. She starts to look worried and flips mnemonically through her math book.
"WHAT PAGE?!" She asks, I reply with "92" the LONG page with 56 questions. "Do you have paper?"
"No, sorry Tabatizle. You're on your own." Lol, we didn't even have homework "We didn't even have homework. Now, tell me more about this Grand Secret."
"You nearly gave me a heart attack! But, *sigh* I'll tell...Ok, G.G. found the cult in 2003 and reached the whole U.S. just recently. Like within a month or so, and, and.. Hmm.. I don't remember." YOUR TELLING IT WRONG! Stupid.
"Um, lets just, yeah, get, um, on with class?" I hear from behind. Shit I forgot Bree was in this class! SHIT! "Yeah, lets, just, um, sit down now? Come on guys. Talk about it at lunch. We have work to do." That weirdo, lol, doesn't it make sense just to talk now?
"All right Ms. Smarty pants, want to play Truth or Dare?" We always play a game of it in math, well, on a slow day in math class. "It'll be fun!".
"OoOo..sounds fun!" I hear Nick say, wow, that guy is really weird. But, we got on with the game.
Nick asks Miranda if she would like to kiss Justin, Miranda dares Tabatha to lick the floor, (we always have to do that one, its like our signature). Tabatha asks Bree if she ever watched porn...
"Truth or dare Rene'?" my turn. I picked dare, wow am I stupid? They all know that I'm a little psycho. A trip to the doctors is only going to confirm it. "I dare you to, take off your...sweater and use that to shield you to take off your underwear."
I slowly unzip my Blue sweater, and lay it on the table so some of it hangs down. I look over to where Nick is sitting, hes leaning back trying to get a better view. I knew it was right to wear a skirt today I quickly bend over a little, grab the elastic band from th sweeping the nation of, yes readers, children e Panties, and pull. everyones going to see..
"Class? Lets begin." Mrs. Verica yells atop of all the voices. Damnit! I hear Nick *sigh* and Justin
let out a big breath. I keep taking off my Underwear, and then they are finally off and I hand them to Bree. She looks bewildered, but takes the pair anyway. Class begins.

More soon, I changed the post quota by the way :-) 1/4 of a day at a time
:-( sorry though

erick92 · 05-30-2009, 04:12 PM

Good story, can't wait for the next installment. Keep it up. Will be interesting to see what is going to happen in the near future.

yomoma15 · 06-03-2009, 03:06 PM

great story. keep it going. hekka juiced for the next part

overlord · 06-04-2009, 07:10 AM

good has heaps of potential

Powerstrip · 06-04-2009, 11:57 AM

I'm finding it quite hard to follow I have to say. If you can break up speech a little so that I know who is saying what etc it'll really help

erick92 · 06-05-2009, 03:40 PM

From now and until LittleRayRay gets back I will be posting her story for her. Fresh off the presses.

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Monday, 10:30 3rd period- Language Class

Just perfect... I go out, and to my locker. Bree is already gone. good luck Bree. Your gonna need it. I grab the language notebook, book, workbook, vocab books, interactive reader, skill builder, and a book to read.
I shut my locker, just as if planed, Saleena opens her locker. What? I think as I walk down the hall way...left, left, turn, right, left, right... the hallways are all mixed up and zig zag. Its so weird.
I Finlay end up in Language. Mrs. Lock is by the door, telling people what to bring. I always bring everything.
"Only Workbook and something to read Rene'." She says. [i]not going back now. I've walked about 1/4 of a mile just so I can turn back? No I don't think so.
I sit down in my seat facing Mrs. Locks desk, far right in the cornered front, also right in front of the open door.
Olivia is late. thank god it wasn't me I see someone approaching...
"Heyyy Reneeee'...Can I sit here?" Bree... I nod, I was to busy thinking about not getting the seat wet then talking right now.
"Why are you sad?"
"What? I'm not sad. Just thinking. Can't you tell the difference?" I smiled. Miranda's words echoed in my head..friends are for abuse..
"Class? Settle down. The practice writing topic for today is...What would you do if everyone was bald?"*
"We had this one Mrs. Lock."
"yeah, I remember"
"Me too!"
"Me three...."
"SETTLE DOWN CLASS. I can't understand that everyday I'm in a good mood you go and spoil it Eli and Robert!"
"IT WASN'T US! Leslie was the one talking!"
"I don't want to hear it!"
"Bu-"
"Shut it."

Monday, 11:15 4th period- Literature Class

Silent reading... Greeeaaattt. Just peachy.
"Class. The bell just rang, if anyone wants to play a game from the shelf you can now." Mrs. Lock yells above Nicks voice. hes such a tard I get out of my seat, really slowly as to not make anymore noise. I silently start to go down to the shelf.
"Look!" Eli whispers. dam it, they can see! I bend own further, getting the game before I stand up. Lovely. I grabbed checkers "Hey, Rene' want to go to my place later?" I heard Rob ask.
"No, now move you pig." I calmly say smiling. Ha ha. I walk over to Bree's desk and check the time, 34 more minutes.. "Bree, want to play checkers?" She nods good
We play checkers, 3 minutes go by.
"I'm bored. Lets spice it up a bit." I look at Bree weird, why would she say that?
"Hum...OK, what do you have in mind?" I ask. She looks a little to..evil.
"You still are commando right? Here, take my underwear too." YOU have pants on idiot Then it hit. I had health today, Bree had gym and had to change in the locker room. "If I win, I keep both our undies until the end of the day. If you win, you keep them both. You ready?"
"Heck yeah I am." I start setting up the board.
WhitePAWN4 up two spaces..
BlackPAWN4 up one space...
WhitePAWN5 up two spaces..
BlackKnite over and up one
ect.......................
"I win. Hand them over." Bree flatly states. Oh clubber nuggets I hand them over, secretly, opening up my legs for her to check that I didn't have anything on. "Oh wow. Um..yeah..lets..just...OK...bells, yeah..."*
"Nervous Nelly!" I laugh, and bring the board game back to the shelf. I sit down, and gather my things. "WHERES MY PEN?!" I look around my seat. "Oh." It was in my hand.
The bell rings. Students tear out of the classroom, as usual, me and Bree are last ones out.

Monday, 12:00 5th period- Lunch

At the lockers, the guy that is the bottom locker by my locker, is just finishing getting his lunch. I stand and wait,*
"Hey Nina, did you hear about Justin S. and Kayla P.? I hear they are going out. I hope that isn't to harsh on Man-die."
"I know right? *laugh* I hope she doesn't figure out the M.I.N. Kind of likes Justin. Hey, did you see his new hair do? Its really cool and spiky."
"*laugh* I hope Justin doesn't know Man-die kinda likes him. That would be awkward. They have been good friends for a while now."
"Since 3rd grade."
"Woah." I open my locker, thinking about what my mom had packed. I grab the paper sack, oh no. I look inside, NOTHING! Oh wait... My mom had packed a five dollar bill and a note that said-
"I didn't feel like making a lunch today. Sorry."*
Sheeshe mom.
At my lunch table, its always to crowded. You need to lift your legs really high and step over the seat in order to be able to sit. I couldn't do that today. I had to get there first, and luckily, I did. Well, the 7th person but I still didn't have to pick up my legs.
"Heeyyy Dase. Whats up?" I ask, Daisy was sitting to the left of me.
"Didn't pack a lunch today?"
"I'm saving the money my mom packed to buy some ice cream after school. To bad the ice cream man doesn't take Visas. *laugh* I could buy one Popsicle everyday if he did."
"Want some of my lunch then?"
"No thanks, *giggle* I'm going to read." I started reading "Blue Bloods". I got to chapter 16 by the time we had to go outside for the other half of lunch.
Outside, me and Emily went by the jungle gym. I stopped. I can't go on that. "Emily? Can we swing instead?" In reply, she just ran towards the swing set.
We swung for about a minute, then we got really bored. I noticed Nick by the tree, and Nina and Tabatha...and Thorn! "Lets go by the tree" Emily says, I reply with a simple follow the leader type walk.
The bell rang.*
"Just when we were about to go over there! *laugh* Race ya!" I yell towards Emily. She can't race.
"Wait up!"

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yomoma15 · 06-09-2009, 12:30 AM

keeep it going i love this story!

LittleRayRay · 06-12-2009, 03:08 PM

Im glad you like it, and the 6th and 7th are short today because we dont get to do anything fun with Mrs. Hellsom and if I typed about the stuff we learn....well, it would be boring ass.-------------------------------------------

Monday, 1:10 6th period- Study Skills

I hate this teacher. Not even the deepest depth of hell would fit her living quarters. I do not like her, not at all. She is Mrs. Hellsom.

"Settle DOWN over there" The witch screamed. Class began.

Monday, 1:53 7th period- Health Class

Same damned teacher. No rest between classes. I hate this teacher. I hate her.

"Get out your Homework. Stand up if its done in Purple pen," She looks in my direction. "-or if its not complete or isn't done." I didn't stand. She snicked. Class began.

Monday, 2:30 8th period- Social Studies Class

I walk out of hell, and into the hall way. YES! FREEDOM! FRESH AIR! I scream in my head.

"Hello Mr. Scho!" I walk into the classroom.

"Just walk away Rene'." He says, jokingly. Heaven I sit in my seat, behind Tabatha and in front of Thorn. I really wish they would stop looking at me weird. Its not my fault I was feeling bitchy this morning. meh.

"Rene'? Are you OK?" Emily whispers when she walks past my seat. I nod. I'm feeling OK, and its really nothing more then bitchiness. I sigh. This is going to be a short class. Did I mention that time is supper-sonic when I'm having fun? No? Well now you know.

"Hey! Time for Daily Geography!" Mr. Scho yells. "Do you want to watch a movie?" Everyone is quiet now. We never watch a movie on Monday, always Friday. OK...I'm not sitting up there if we do watch a movie. We sit in the front of the class...where Mr. Scho always stands and talks and teaches. Well...he doesn't teach he tells stories and tells us answers to the worksheets we are supposed to do. I mentioned Heaven right?

"Can I sit up there Mr. Scho?" Taylor asks. God nods. Richy asks the same thing. God shoots him with a laser. I ask, jokingly, and he says yes.

"But Mr. Scho I was joking!" I whine.

"I don't care! You asked and I said yes. He winks. I laugh nervously and walk up there. Eli notices me going up there and asks Mr. Scho if he can, too. Mr. Scho lets him and Eli goes up and sits next to me on the floor. By that time about 18 people were on the floor. Eli's friends sat next to him, and my friends sat next to me. Eli passes me a note:

"I know about the dare." I look at him, wide eyed. He smiles. I pass the note back with-

"Are you going to tell anyone?" added. He gives it back to me.

"Go out with me and no one knows."

"What? I don't really care if anyone knows. If you want pictures that's one thing. You can go to jail while I have a lawsuit. Works for me."

"I am not kidding. I know a lot of people who would do favors for me. A lot of them know how to spread word like wild fire. Your bookworm reputation will be burned and everyone will know your secret."

"All right. For a week."

"Here's my number-**********"

"I'll call you later."

"OK" Then we watched the movie in silence.

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and if you want more story faster, I post it on my webbie first for a day or 2.

05-30-2009, 04:03 PM	#1
LittleRayRay getDare Sweetheart Join Date: May 2009 Posts: 429 Blog Entries: 14	The Grand Gizli [REALISTIC FICTION] So, this story is about A girl named Rene' and her little pack of Best Friends that get into major trouble. I hope you like it :-) BACKGROUND INFO: The main chacacter and her bestest buds have been friends about 4 months. Rene' in the story has been put through her parents separation, her sisters constant beating, friends separating for the fun of it, moving right before middle school, being the "geek", hanging out with the POP-U-lar kids for about 3 weeks then getting uselessly humilited... The list goes on. Rene' has had a weird life. She is a little pervert to her friends, and that is rubbing off on them. Emily is a little..big. Thorn is anorexic and she is moveing in the summer. Tabatha is the prettiest blacksican you have ever seen, but has had 4 parents most of her life and she hates 2 of them. Saleena is on the verge of being a professinal hairstylest, and did I forget to mention that Bree is a smart blonde teachers little helper and that Nick acts gay just so that he could go to sleepovers with girls... Last edited by LittleRayRay; 05-31-2009 at 02:01 PM.

05-30-2009, 04:12 PM	#3
erick92 Distinguished Member Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: USA Posts: 765 Blog Entries: 9	Good story, can't wait for the next installment. Keep it up. Will be interesting to see what is going to happen in the near future. __________________ 23/M/USA

06-04-2009, 11:57 AM	#6
Powerstrip Distinguished Member Join Date: Jan 2007 Posts: 716 Blog Entries: 1	I'm finding it quite hard to follow I have to say. If you can break up speech a little so that I know who is saying what etc it'll really help __________________ I am looking for a mistress. Please PM me if interested

06-05-2009, 03:40 PM	#7
erick92 Distinguished Member Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: USA Posts: 765 Blog Entries: 9	From now and until LittleRayRay gets back I will be posting her story for her. Fresh off the presses. --------------------------------- Monday, 10:30 3rd period- Language Class Just perfect... I go out, and to my locker. Bree is already gone. good luck Bree. Your gonna need it. I grab the language notebook, book, workbook, vocab books, interactive reader, skill builder, and a book to read. I shut my locker, just as if planed, Saleena opens her locker. What? I think as I walk down the hall way...left, left, turn, right, left, right... the hallways are all mixed up and zig zag. Its so weird. I Finlay end up in Language. Mrs. Lock is by the door, telling people what to bring. I always bring everything. "Only Workbook and something to read Rene'." She says. [i]not going back now. I've walked about 1/4 of a mile just so I can turn back? No I don't think so. I sit down in my seat facing Mrs. Locks desk, far right in the cornered front, also right in front of the open door. Olivia is late. thank god it wasn't me I see someone approaching... "Heyyy Reneeee'...Can I sit here?" Bree... I nod, I was to busy thinking about not getting the seat wet then talking right now. "Why are you sad?" "What? I'm not sad. Just thinking. Can't you tell the difference?" I smiled. Miranda's words echoed in my head..friends are for abuse.. "Class? Settle down. The practice writing topic for today is...What would you do if everyone was bald?"* "We had this one Mrs. Lock." "yeah, I remember" "Me too!" "Me three...." "SETTLE DOWN CLASS. I can't understand that everyday I'm in a good mood you go and spoil it Eli and Robert!" "IT WASN'T US! Leslie was the one talking!" "I don't want to hear it!" "Bu-" "Shut it." Monday, 11:15 4th period- Literature Class Silent reading... Greeeaaattt. Just peachy. "Class. The bell just rang, if anyone wants to play a game from the shelf you can now." Mrs. Lock yells above Nicks voice. hes such a tard I get out of my seat, really slowly as to not make anymore noise. I silently start to go down to the shelf. "Look!" Eli whispers. dam it, they can see! I bend own further, getting the game before I stand up. Lovely. I grabbed checkers "Hey, Rene' want to go to my place later?" I heard Rob ask. "No, now move you pig." I calmly say smiling. Ha ha. I walk over to Bree's desk and check the time, 34 more minutes.. "Bree, want to play checkers?" She nods good We play checkers, 3 minutes go by. "I'm bored. Lets spice it up a bit." I look at Bree weird, why would she say that? "Hum...OK, what do you have in mind?" I ask. She looks a little to..evil. "You still are commando right? Here, take my underwear too." YOU have pants on idiot Then it hit. I had health today, Bree had gym and had to change in the locker room. "If I win, I keep both our undies until the end of the day. If you win, you keep them both. You ready?" "Heck yeah I am." I start setting up the board. WhitePAWN4 up two spaces.. BlackPAWN4 up one space... WhitePAWN5 up two spaces.. BlackKnite over and up one ect....................... "I win. Hand them over." Bree flatly states. Oh clubber nuggets I hand them over, secretly, opening up my legs for her to check that I didn't have anything on. "Oh wow. Um..yeah..lets..just...OK...bells, yeah..."* "Nervous Nelly!" I laugh, and bring the board game back to the shelf. I sit down, and gather my things. "WHERES MY PEN?!" I look around my seat. "Oh." It was in my hand. The bell rings. Students tear out of the classroom, as usual, me and Bree are last ones out. Monday, 12:00 5th period- Lunch At the lockers, the guy that is the bottom locker by my locker, is just finishing getting his lunch. I stand and wait,* "Hey Nina, did you hear about Justin S. and Kayla P.? I hear they are going out. I hope that isn't to harsh on Man-die." "I know right? laugh I hope she doesn't figure out the M.I.N. Kind of likes Justin. Hey, did you see his new hair do? Its really cool and spiky." "laugh I hope Justin doesn't know Man-die kinda likes him. That would be awkward. They have been good friends for a while now." "Since 3rd grade." "Woah." I open my locker, thinking about what my mom had packed. I grab the paper sack, oh no. I look inside, NOTHING! Oh wait... My mom had packed a five dollar bill and a note that said- "I didn't feel like making a lunch today. Sorry."* Sheeshe mom. At my lunch table, its always to crowded. You need to lift your legs really high and step over the seat in order to be able to sit. I couldn't do that today. I had to get there first, and luckily, I did. Well, the 7th person but I still didn't have to pick up my legs. "Heeyyy Dase. Whats up?" I ask, Daisy was sitting to the left of me. "Didn't pack a lunch today?" "I'm saving the money my mom packed to buy some ice cream after school. To bad the ice cream man doesn't take Visas. laugh I could buy one Popsicle everyday if he did." "Want some of my lunch then?" "No thanks, giggle I'm going to read." I started reading "Blue Bloods". I got to chapter 16 by the time we had to go outside for the other half of lunch. Outside, me and Emily went by the jungle gym. I stopped. I can't go on that. "Emily? Can we swing instead?" In reply, she just ran towards the swing set. We swung for about a minute, then we got really bored. I noticed Nick by the tree, and Nina and Tabatha...and Thorn! "Lets go by the tree" Emily says, I reply with a simple follow the leader type walk. The bell rang.* "Just when we were about to go over there! laugh Race ya!" I yell towards Emily. She can't race. "Wait up!" -------------- All comments will be directed to LittleRayRay. __________________ 23/M/USA Last edited by erick92; 06-05-2009 at 07:56 PM. Reason: Typo's, errors, and the like.

06-03-2009, 03:06 PM	#4
yomoma15 Junior Member Join Date: Feb 2009 Posts: 14	great story. keep it going. hekka juiced for the next part

06-04-2009, 07:10 AM	#5
overlord Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2009 Posts: 233	good has heaps of potential

06-09-2009, 12:30 AM	#8
yomoma15 Junior Member Join Date: Feb 2009 Posts: 14	keeep it going i love this story!

06-12-2009, 03:08 PM	#9
LittleRayRay getDare Sweetheart Join Date: May 2009 Posts: 429 Blog Entries: 14	Im glad you like it, and the 6th and 7th are short today because we dont get to do anything fun with Mrs. Hellsom and if I typed about the stuff we learn....well, it would be boring ass.------------------------------------------- Monday, 1:10 6th period- Study Skills I hate this teacher. Not even the deepest depth of hell would fit her living quarters. I do not like her, not at all. She is Mrs. Hellsom. "Settle DOWN over there" The witch screamed. Class began. Monday, 1:53 7th period- Health Class Same damned teacher. No rest between classes. I hate this teacher. I hate her. "Get out your Homework. Stand up if its done in Purple pen," She looks in my direction. "-or if its not complete or isn't done." I didn't stand. She snicked. Class began. Monday, 2:30 8th period- Social Studies Class I walk out of hell, and into the hall way. YES! FREEDOM! FRESH AIR! I scream in my head. "Hello Mr. Scho!" I walk into the classroom. "Just walk away Rene'." He says, jokingly. Heaven I sit in my seat, behind Tabatha and in front of Thorn. I really wish they would stop looking at me weird. Its not my fault I was feeling bitchy this morning. meh. "Rene'? Are you OK?" Emily whispers when she walks past my seat. I nod. I'm feeling OK, and its really nothing more then bitchiness. I sigh. This is going to be a short class. Did I mention that time is supper-sonic when I'm having fun? No? Well now you know. "Hey! Time for Daily Geography!" Mr. Scho yells. "Do you want to watch a movie?" Everyone is quiet now. We never watch a movie on Monday, always Friday. OK...I'm not sitting up there if we do watch a movie. We sit in the front of the class...where Mr. Scho always stands and talks and teaches. Well...he doesn't teach he tells stories and tells us answers to the worksheets we are supposed to do. I mentioned Heaven right? "Can I sit up there Mr. Scho?" Taylor asks. God nods. Richy asks the same thing. God shoots him with a laser. I ask, jokingly, and he says yes. "But Mr. Scho I was joking!" I whine. "I don't care! You asked and I said yes. He winks. I laugh nervously and walk up there. Eli notices me going up there and asks Mr. Scho if he can, too. Mr. Scho lets him and Eli goes up and sits next to me on the floor. By that time about 18 people were on the floor. Eli's friends sat next to him, and my friends sat next to me. Eli passes me a note: "I know about the dare." I look at him, wide eyed. He smiles. I pass the note back with- "Are you going to tell anyone?" added. He gives it back to me. "Go out with me and no one knows." "What? I don't really care if anyone knows. If you want pictures that's one thing. You can go to jail while I have a lawsuit. Works for me." "I am not kidding. I know a lot of people who would do favors for me. A lot of them know how to spread word like wild fire. Your bookworm reputation will be burned and everyone will know your secret." "All right. For a week." "Here's my number-**********" "I'll call you later." "OK" Then we watched the movie in silence. -------------------------------- and if you want more story faster, I post it on my webbie first for a day or 2.