[Fiction] Erin's Hell

[ImYoursForever]

This Story is really good, i cant wait for more

[danrob88]

Dude this is really getting awesome

[Hunterman36]

This is really talented keep up the amazing work

[cbtslave4u2]

SK!!! I've been desperatly waiting to read more!!!!

[erick92]

Yeah an update to the story would be greatly appreciated!

[skjelner]

Chapter Six

Erin’s stomach had expanded from the heavy, wet loads inside her, making her look a little fat, and Chris, Mark, and Jason all pulled out of their sexual vassal at precisely the same time, producing three distinct, sucking squelches. Jason had to put forth the most effort, as Erin’s sphincter had closed ferociously around his cock and did not want to release it, and it gave Erin another tremendous shudder upon withdrawal.

Erin lay there twitching for a moment after Jason rolled her off his chest and got up. Mark laid down instead, and Jason and Chris, before Erin could even think, each seized one of her arms and lifted her over their comrade’s face.

“One last thing for tonight, Erin,” Jason instructed. “Sit over Mark and just let out all the cum you can, right in his mouth. Can you do that?”

In an overpowering daze from her first orgasm, Erin could not respond. It felt as though her mind was detached from her body, unable to control her own actions. She nodded slowly, compelled to listen to the voice that commanded her, and crouched over Mark, her knees pointed outward.

“No no, turn this way,” Jason commanded, drawing Erin around so that her ass pointed toward Mark’s black hair and she stared at his bare feet. “That’s right, sweet cheeks, now spread your lips and let it all out.”

Slowly coming back to reality, Erin spread her labia wide, as per Jason’s request, and squinted at the floor just beyond Mark’s toes, trying desperately to squeeze her vaginal muscles and purge the semen within. After several seconds of quiet concentration, her uterus finally opened and thick streams of cum poured into Mark’s open mouth, some of it missing and instead painting his lips white. Erin had to push a few more times to get the rest out, and Mark took it all into his mouth, not swallowing.

“Get it outta your ass, too,” Jason implored, “like you’re taking a shit, just like earlier.”

Now beginning to recall who and where she was, Erin wanted to lash out against the men around her for violating her that night. But it was not the right time: surely if she tried anything now, she’d be hurting for the rest of the night. Instead, feeling slightly awkward, she strained as if trying to use the bathroom, much like after taking the enema.

After a much longer time than it had taken her vagina to empty, Erin finally farted loudly and a shot of cum spurted onto Mark’s face, splashing his nose and left eye. Chris guided her ass more directly over his friend’s mouth, and immediately she farted again, although less loudly, and more of the gooey liquid splattered out. After a few more sloppy farts, a huge deluge of semen rushed from her anus and past Mark’s lips; he had to struggle not to swallow as he closed his filled mouth and sat up.

“Lay down one more time,” Chris ordered, and Erin did, though by now she had regained her right mind and was increasingly uneasy. Still, she did what she was told and lay beside where Mark had been, though slowly. Mark rubbed her clitoris a few times, as if to ease her mind, then put his face directly over hers, pried open her mouth, and spat the entire load inside. Before Erin could react, Mark shifted position and shoved the entirety of his newly erect penis into her semen-filled mouth, then pinched her nose firmly.

Erin struggled to breathe, sputtering on her mouth full of manliness, but Mark only inched his cock further down her slippery gullet. Her stomach heaved as she gagged on his shaft and the disgusting-tasting semen, which inundated her throat, steadily cutting off her oxygen supply. Soon the color began to drain from her face, and Erin began struggling to break free, but Jason and Chris quickly swooped in to restrain her.

“Aww, what’s the matter? Can’t breathe?” Mark asked as if speaking to a child. “Don’t worry, I’ll let you—all you gotta do is swallow that cum. Every last bit of it.”

With these words, Mark spat in Erin’s eye, but she hardly noticed as she felt darkness sweep over her. She began to wobble back and forth, suffocating in its strength.

“Come on slut, it’s completely up to you. Swallow, and you get to breathe. Don’t swallow, and, well … I guess we’ll find out how long you can go without oxygen.”

Erin knew she was clearly in no position to resist any longer, no matter how disgusting the mixture in her mouth tasted. Groggily, she grasped the backs of Mark’s thighs to steady herself and quickly attempted to swallow the gooey liquid. However, Mark’s penis was so deeply lodged in her throat that she could only manage to slurp down a little at a time, her esophagus constricting around Mark’s shaft tightly with each gulp.

“Ohhh, holy fuck does that feel good! I hope you’re not going to pass out, Erin, because this is the best fucking blow job I’ve had in my life.”

In fact, Erin was very near passing out, but eventually managed to swallow the last of the thick semen. Barely conscious, she feebly opened her mouth wider and relaxed her grip on Mark’s thighs to signal she was finished.

“Nothing like getting a BJ from a suffocating little whore, right guys?” Mark winked at his friends. “And she swallows too, like any good slut should.” With that, he released Erin’s nose and shoved her away, his dick popping fiercely from her throat with a loud squelch. Erin tumbled to the hard floor, yelping as she landed directly on her elbows. She lay there for several moments, writhing in pain and gasping loudly, eager to taste as much precious oxygen as she possibly could.

“I think we’re done for today”, Mark said, his cock slowly going limp. He gave Erin a hard kick to the gut, knocking the wind out of her yet again, then turned around toward his comrades. Chris headed toward the large keypad-secured door, while Mark and Jason turned to face Erin. A thin stream of blood dripped from Erin’s mouth as she lay in agony before them, barely able to breathe.

[timetoshine]

Other then all the scat stuff i think it is an amazing story. Great Job

[cbtslave4u2]

that reminded me of when I almost died of an asthma attack.

[erick92]

Is this still the very, very mild part of the story? So far the only blood damage she has had was with her anal. Nothing permanent thus far. Not complaining, just curious as to where this story could potentially go.

One thing I really like is that we're just barely done with the first night in the first how many posts. I can tell that even if her kidnapping lasts a mere week that this story will be gigantic with amazing detail.

[katebabe21]

oh wow just spent the night reading this... way to go... as bad as i feel for erin this story is amazing!

[Silvercola]

I like it keep going

[skjelner]

Originally Posted by erickj92

Is this still the very, very mild part of the story

You'll just have to keep reading and find out!

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“Alright, skank, catch your precious breath and listen up.” Jason said sternly while Erin attempted to recover. “Through that door there is a bathroom,” he indicated the wooden door to his left, “which you can use to clean yourself up for tomorrow. But first we’ve gotta lay down some ground rules.”

Erin, clutching her stomach in pain, managed to croak out a few words. “You … You already raped me … why won’t you just let me go?”

“Oh no, Erin, we certainly can’t do that,” Mark informed her. “We’ve got a plan for you, you see. You’re going to stay right here and do exactly as we say for as long as it takes.”

“For … as long as what takes? What— what the fuck are you talking about?” Erin shrank back into the carpet, desperate to hide herself now.

“Like I said, we’ve got a plan for you, Erin, something we’ve got to do. Of course I’m not going to say anything more about it now, but let’s just say you’ll find out soon enough. Now, shut up and listen to the rules.”

More confused than ever, Erin decided to remain silent, eager to get this over with as soon as possible and just go to sleep.

“First, you sleep when we tell you, where we tell you. Tonight it’s going to be in that bathroom.” Jason indicated the wooden door once more. “Yes, don’t fucking look at me like that you skanky bitch, you’re lucky we’re even letting you sleep at all. You weren’t exactly cooperative today. Anyway, before you go to sleep, you’re to take a shower. Be sure to look nice and smell pretty for us by the morning, or we’re going to make tomorrow utter hell for you.”

Erin stared silently at the floor.

“Next, you’re not to eat or drink anything unless we tell you to. But this leaves us with a problem—how are we supposed to let you take a shower but expect you not to drink the water?”

Erin’s hopes fell as she realized her captors had already thought far ahead of her.

“Haha, I see you can tell you’re never going to out-think us, slut. I’ll tell you how: the shower will turn on for exactly 15 minutes. As soon as you hear it, you’d better get your tight little ass in there and wash up as fast as you can. Be sure to pay extra attention to your pussy—no one wants to fuck a stinky cunt. Now, as for making sure you don’t drink any of the water, well … we’ll be watching. Believe me, you do not fucking want to test us. If you break any of the rules or try anything sneaky, we will know. Someone is going to be watching you at all times, even when you think they’re not.”

Erin gulped in despair, hanging her head lower. “Please … tell me why you’re doing this to me,” she said softly. “You don’t seem like the typical rapists you hear about on TV.”

“Haha, that’s a good question, sweetie. You’re smarter than most girls we’ve had. We don’t do this because we want to—”

“—Although that’s certainly one of the reasons,” Mark interrupted.

“Well, yeah, that’s one of the reasons,” Jason winked again, this time to his friends, “but like I said, we’ve got a job to do and we’re going to do it. Anyway, back to what I was saying. Take a look around this room, Erin.” Jason pointed toward the shelves along the concrete block walls, far above Erin’s head. “There’s cameras in some of that shit up there. Just think of them as our way of always keeping an eye on you.”

“And just so you know,” Mark added, “if you even try to fuck with any of them, we will be in here so fast you won’t know what hit you. But trust me, we’ll do much worse than just hit you.” Mark chuckled at his joke just as Chris returned through the steel door holding a glass of water.

[erick92]

Short buy very good addition. Looking forward to more.

[katebabe21]

really good update... made me a little sad though :/ i don't suppose things will brighten a little for poor erin? why doesn't she just do what they say wouldn't that make it a whole lot easier on her?

[Silvercola]

Very good short but great addition