Me and the sleepover [fiction]

iAmiMe · 05-29-2008, 07:45 PM

It was 8:30pm and I had just arrived at my new friend Jenny's house. Jenny was the new girl and seemed pretty nice- I thought. She had invited me over for a sleepover in the first 3 days I had met her. Of course, being 17, I agreed.

She lived a couple blocks away, so all I had to do was walk to her house. Stepping onto the driveway, Jenny greeted me. Without saying a word, she pulled me into the back yard, where I noticed her brother, standing their.

iAmiMe · 05-29-2008, 07:51 PM

Sorry to make this short, but here ya go:

Jenny started to talk.
"Hey Casey, this is my brother Jack. He will be with us tonight."
"Huh?" I said.
"You see, tonight, you are going to be his slave."
"WHAT??"
"You heard me!" Jack replied. "Now, strip, or have these revealed to the world!"
He took out of his pocket a cell phone with me, stripping in the girls locker room.

"Fine."

Comments are appreciated.

pimpdaddy · 05-29-2008, 10:39 PM

not bad at all

please go on

glue · 05-30-2008, 09:11 AM

good i really like this

longer next time?

10/10

iAmiMe · 06-01-2008, 05:46 PM

I began to strip, like he said.
"Now, lets go over some rules." Jimmy said.
"No:
Talking back
Questioning punishments. You must do everything I say, or you will be punished. Now, bend over."

I bent over to realize he had put his dick in my pussy and was fucking me. I moaned, but he just kept doing it harder, and harder. Finally he stopped.

"How did that feel?" He asked.
"It was-um.. okay.." I relpied.

"Jenny, lets go inside." He said. He grabbed my boobs and pussy and starting squeezing. He then picked me up and brought me to his room. Jenny followed. He placed me on his bed.

"We are going to have some fun, eh?" He said.
"No!" I screamed.
"Talking back are we? That deserves a punishment! Jenny, get the clothes pins."
She opened a drawer and took out 2 clothes pins and handed them to Jimmy. He clipped them onto my nipples. I screamed in pain. He laughed and took them off. Now, you must be a bit hungry. He put his huge dick in my mouth.
"Give me a blowjob. NOW!!" He demanded. I began to suck his dick. Finally, he took it out.

smilesmishy · 06-13-2008, 03:50 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by glue

good i really like this

longer next time?

10/10

how could u give that tiny amount of writing 10/10 when uve given huge storys that were brilliant 5/10? this is good so far but not 10/10 more of a 6/10

SpikyToad · 10-02-2008, 08:38 PM

Its Okay to start ive read better but its good 6/10

ddking · 02-24-2010, 03:13 PM

9/10 but got worse to around 5/10

Sonia5 · 04-08-2010, 04:35 PM

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Having fun you got a good experience am i right.....

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Platypus · 04-08-2010, 07:23 PM

WAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY too fast. slow it down, write some more, add some characterization and background info, dialogue, etc., and focus on making it more interesting. he literally went to forcing her to give him a blowjob in twenty lines.

and yeah glue being the "simon cowell" of getdare giving this a 10/10? hes obviously not a simon cowell. i would say 5/10 max

05-29-2008, 07:45 PM	#1
iAmiMe Junior Member Join Date: May 2008 Posts: 5	Me and the sleepover [fiction] It was 8:30pm and I had just arrived at my new friend Jenny's house. Jenny was the new girl and seemed pretty nice- I thought. She had invited me over for a sleepover in the first 3 days I had met her. Of course, being 17, I agreed. She lived a couple blocks away, so all I had to do was walk to her house. Stepping onto the driveway, Jenny greeted me. Without saying a word, she pulled me into the back yard, where I noticed her brother, standing their.

05-29-2008, 10:39 PM	#3
pimpdaddy Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: america Posts: 157	not bad at all please go on __________________ 100 post i am so proud my next goal 1000 limits familly public

05-30-2008, 09:11 AM	#4
glue Distinguished Member Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Oxford, UK Posts: 735 Blog Entries: 6	good i really like this longer next time? 10/10 __________________ WATCH OUT FOR A GLUE RATING OUT OF TEN glue would like to tell everyone reading this to stay sticky as life is to short to become unstuck I'm the Simon Cowell of GetDare Please add me at: Skype: Glue101 8 Years On Getdare!!!!!!

02-24-2010, 03:13 PM	#8
ddking Junior Member Join Date: May 2009 Posts: 8	9/10 but got worse to around 5/10 __________________ Limits:Family,Friends, Public,Messy Likes:Wedgies,Embarassing,Naked,Masturbation.

04-08-2010, 07:23 PM	#10
Platypus getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: In your attic Posts: 286	WAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY too fast. slow it down, write some more, add some characterization and background info, dialogue, etc., and focus on making it more interesting. he literally went to forcing her to give him a blowjob in twenty lines. and yeah glue being the "simon cowell" of getdare giving this a 10/10? hes obviously not a simon cowell. i would say 5/10 max __________________ 18/m likes: masturbation, low-risk, slight crossdressing, video game dares, will do: most things not in limits limits/dislikes: urine/feces, family, public, pain, pics, messy http://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthrea...926#post272926 Ask me anything! I have limits but I'm willing to push them for the sake of a thrill. If you have a dare that isn't in my limits but not in my likes, keep it mild and I will most likely do it. http://www.formspring.me/DarePlatypus

05-29-2008, 07:51 PM	#2
iAmiMe Junior Member Join Date: May 2008 Posts: 5	Sorry to make this short, but here ya go: Jenny started to talk. "Hey Casey, this is my brother Jack. He will be with us tonight." "Huh?" I said. "You see, tonight, you are going to be his slave." "WHAT??" "You heard me!" Jack replied. "Now, strip, or have these revealed to the world!" He took out of his pocket a cell phone with me, stripping in the girls locker room. "Fine." Comments are appreciated.

06-01-2008, 05:46 PM	#5
iAmiMe Junior Member Join Date: May 2008 Posts: 5	I began to strip, like he said. "Now, lets go over some rules." Jimmy said. "No: Talking back Questioning punishments. You must do everything I say, or you will be punished. Now, bend over." I bent over to realize he had put his dick in my pussy and was fucking me. I moaned, but he just kept doing it harder, and harder. Finally he stopped. "How did that feel?" He asked. "It was-um.. okay.." I relpied. "Jenny, lets go inside." He said. He grabbed my boobs and pussy and starting squeezing. He then picked me up and brought me to his room. Jenny followed. He placed me on his bed. "We are going to have some fun, eh?" He said. "No!" I screamed. "Talking back are we? That deserves a punishment! Jenny, get the clothes pins." She opened a drawer and took out 2 clothes pins and handed them to Jimmy. He clipped them onto my nipples. I screamed in pain. He laughed and took them off. Now, you must be a bit hungry. He put his huge dick in my mouth. "Give me a blowjob. NOW!!" He demanded. I began to suck his dick. Finally, he took it out.

10-02-2008, 08:38 PM	#7
SpikyToad Account Banned Join Date: Oct 2008 Posts: 27	Its Okay to start ive read better but its good 6/10

04-08-2010, 04:35 PM	#9
Sonia5 Account Banned Join Date: Apr 2010 Posts: 6	Hay, Having fun you got a good experience am i right..... _____________ Want a better libido? Compare the top 5 recommended female libido enhancement products at Female Libido Enhancement