Fiction: my cousin story

damon fredman · 08-18-2016, 12:04 AM

hey im starting a new story...
main characters: narrator: bryson,his couson autumn
now i know this is written in first person ,it makes the story more real
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monday at my aunt's...

Hi my name is bryson and im gonna tell you my story, it all started when i went to my aunt christy's and im 15 and my couson is 14. So when i was helping my uncle robert fix his 1966 ford mustang. couson autumn told me when i was done to meet ur in the barn. she said it quiet to make sure robert didnt hear. so about 30 minutes later robert says, ”Ok we are done for today”. And i said, "Ok at least we got the car to work for about 5 seconds", we both laughed. Then i remembered what autumn said, so i went to the small hey barn and opened the door. I couldnt believe my eyes, autumn standing there naked right in front of me!

08-18-2016, 12:04 AM	#1
damon fredman Member Join Date: Aug 2016 Posts: 62	my cousin story hey im starting a new story... main characters: narrator: bryson,his couson autumn now i know this is written in first person ,it makes the story more real ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ monday at my aunt's... Hi my name is bryson and im gonna tell you my story, it all started when i went to my aunt christy's and im 15 and my couson is 14. So when i was helping my uncle robert fix his 1966 ford mustang. couson autumn told me when i was done to meet ur in the barn. she said it quiet to make sure robert didnt hear. so about 30 minutes later robert says, ”Ok we are done for today”. And i said, "Ok at least we got the car to work for about 5 seconds", we both laughed. Then i remembered what autumn said, so i went to the small hey barn and opened the door. I couldnt believe my eyes, autumn standing there naked right in front of me!