Lucky Horshoe Love

[darebunny22]

Right whoever reads this it's my first story so here goes give me feedback please
Chapter 1
I bounded up to Snowy's stable, pulled open the door and saw the young mare lay gracefully on the hay. I ran over and stroked her pure white head; she flickered one brown eye lazily. "Come on Snowy, let's go for a ride" I whispered soothingly in her white ear. I bustled round getting the pink diamond tack (saddle reins etc), my mind bursting with what had just happened. My heart fluttered and my deep blue eyes saw the events playing over again and again.

As we cantered through the forest I inhaled the beautiful smells, delicate bluebells, fragrant oak. I patted Snowy's soft chocolate mane... I was distracted usually I paid as much attention to riding as I could but today I wanted to finish as quick as possible!

What had happened before?
Why did she want riding to stop?
Can we find out more about this person?
Find out in the next installment of Secret Love

[darebunny22]

Chapter 2
"Nathalie...Nathalie!" "Yes Mum" I mumbled wearily the door opened and bright light was shining into the room as my Mum bustled in with piles of clothes. "Get up! You'll be late for collage." I squinted through the light to see my Mum, her shoulder legnth mousy hair was tied in a neat ponytail and she was wearing an immaculate white dressing gown. I mumbled angrily as she pulled back the warm sheets. Rolling out of bed I saw the alarm, " Oh F@&#" I exclaimed, I had only fifteen minutes to get to collage. I pulled on a white tank-top with a grey waistcoat, I fastened it nimbly over my C cups, and pulled on a smart black pencil skirt and ran down stairs to get to collage.

I tugged a comb through my blonde and caramel streaked hair. I popped into the corner shop to buy an apple and a cereal bar. I was on my late routine but I'd done it enough times that I knew EXACTLY what to do! On the way past the toilets I went to the vending machine and brought a chewable toothbrush and some gum. After eating hurridly I sprinted round the last few corners, I skidded infront of the large white collage 'Lightsbury Collage' was imprinted in deep blood red letters. I stopped for breath then hurried to my English class.

"Sorry Miss" I mumbled, I pulled the chair back and flopped at the desk; fumbling in my bag for my books and timetable. And then my attention turned to the front of the class and my eyes widened as I saw...

Why was she late?
What did she see?
Find out in the next installment of Secret Love

[Vinnie]

Your a great writer, sure hope you get published one day.

[darebunny22]

finally someones replied to my story maybe i should carry it on after my next one and thankyou a lot your comments are really friendly and kind

[Vinnie]

No problem, it's all the honest truth, your the best writer on here. I feel like I'm actually reading a book when I read your stories, hope you do become published and wish you the best of luck

[kmacroxs]

this.is.awesome.please.continue

[darebunny22]

Come onn stop hiding in the shadows reply pleeaaaseee xxxx <3

[zac]

HI XD xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

[darebunny22]

We got disturbed by some old men, "Hey cutie can I get on your horse" said one with bright green hair a large flame tattoo on is forehead and several piercings, I frowned, "Oho bit of a temper there babes!" said another. "Hehe look at her bouncing up and down" squawked the last staring at my chest. I was so shocked and embarrassed I just rode away leaving them shouting. God they were so rude I thought. It reminded me of the person who fancied me in primary school. Eventually I got so tired of him and said "LOOK, If you want to go out with me... STOP INSULTING ME!". He was a little shocked and he went off me after that ! I looked around for a sign of Alex, but I didn't know why because as soon as I saw him I knew I would freeze and my legs would go like jelly. I formulated a plan to hide in the woods if I saw him coming!
To be continued
What happens next?
Did she see Alex
Find out in the next instalment of Lucky Horseshoe Love xx

Comment pleasseeeee !!

[Vinnie]

You're making me wait, I'm getting anxious

[daremaster 1]

Awsome! Love it sooooooooo much! Please keep this story going!

[darebunny22]

Hi thanks again for being supportive if you like this chapter please comment just got moved down in my my english study group so i hope my writings still up to scratch!
to find someone in my place, I glared at them at first then realised that his hair was blonde and ruffled my annoyance turned into a heart frenzy, he was chatting to a kid called Mikey, a "baby boy cute" person with large blue eyes and a blonde Bieber cut (thats what turned me off him, a BIEBER CUT... SERIOULSY?!.) My friend Chantelle was gazing at Mikey dreamily, every now and then she'd flutter her hazel eyes, swish her long-ish brown hair and giggle at everything he said. Ahhhh, so its not Justme crushing on someone! I thought. Then Charli came up, "Hey Charli" me, Chantelle and Mikey said... Charli is just about the sweetest person in the school. "Is there room for one more?" she asked politely, "Sure sit here" I said motioning at the gap between me and the edge of the table, which gave me a chance to be closer too Alex. All the time Charli was sitting down Mikey was gazing at her Emma Watson like features Oh-oh slight problem there I thought looking between Chantelle, Mikey and Charli. I scooted up "Hey Alex" I said as calmly as possible "Hey, it was nice seeing you the other day" he said. Chantelle and Vinnie raised their eyebrows at each other across the table. "NO,no,no!" I giggled, "We just...
To be continued
What did they do?
Did the friends belive it?
Find out in the next instalment of Lucky Horseshoe Love

[darebunny22]

If you like Justin Bieber I wasn't trying to offend him OR you so please dont go crazy on me, the character just doesn't like him (and neither do I to be fair) thanks

[daredevil2]

love the story u r very talented keep going

[darebunny22]

THANKYOU FOR THE COMMENTS CARRY ON COMMENTING PLEASEE
"We just met for homework and a coffee!" I said still giggling.
"Ahhh Homework?!" Chantelle said unbelievingly,
"We did, didnt we Alex?"
"Huh..." Alex said, I sighed
"The weekend..."
"Oh yeah that was hot" Alex said turning back to Mikey. Chantelle and Charli giggled,
"Nooooo, the temperature was hot, not what we were doing!" I said exasperatedly, I realised I was fighting a losing battle, so I just had to shut up and get on with my work.
[B]WHAT HAPPENED NEXT???
Apology's for the short chapter the next chapter will be soon and it will be the "Hottest" one yet B]