More Than I Could've Ever Guessed[FICTION]

Pretty_Girl19 · 08-20-2007, 05:40 PM

Intro:
I am a 16 year old girl who mistakenly got herself into more than she can handle. It all started back when I first stumbled upon this site. Like everyone here I played my fair games of truth or dare and done some dares here and there but what was to happen I could not have guessed.

Part I:
One normal day, after school, I was playing truth or dare on msn and was dared to send them a picture of myself naked. As I think about it today, I don’t know why I did actually sent the picture, I just probably wasn’t thinking of what may happen. See I was careless back then, excited about stepping out, willing to do anything. Right after I sent that picture the person I was chatting with, whose name is Leann, asked me for my email. What harm could happen if I gave that to her? So stupid I did.

A few days later I was on getdare chatting with some people when I got this message from Leann. It read as followed:
Dear Pretty,

Please meet me on msn to receive your rules and orders from me. And I want u to be naked every time we speak, including now. See u there in a few minuets.

Leann
At first I just ignored it. What was she thinking, was the only thought sent from this letter to my mind at the time. I just continued chatting and and a few hours later went to go check my email. I saw one from Leann and was curious what she wanted. I click once and then again completely normal and calm as usual. And the first thing that popped up on my screen was me, naked. I sat there stunned, thoughtless and scared. Right then and there I realize Leann had more power over me than I could ever imagine. Thoughts, unlike before were racing though my head. I couldn’t think or focus.

I really regretted not going on msn earlier. So I rushed on to msn still shaking from shock, not fully awoken. She was there. Before I even had a chance to begin to type, she started a conversation. It said “so I believe you got my email”
I quickly said “yes, but why”
“You are now my slave, I have all your email contents and a picture of you ready to send at one click from my finger”
Unwilling to believe I said ”Prove it”
She began to read of my email contacts and soon my emails.
“you will be punishment for questioning me later, now here are your rules.”

This is my first ever story, and i would like if it you post a comment. Be truthful please and tell me if it sucks. Oh and sorry it's so short will be longer next time

SubMissChievous · 08-20-2007, 06:19 PM

It's very nicely written and original too. You really have intrigued to read the next part. Great job there!

Leblonk · 08-20-2007, 06:42 PM

good job pretty_girl19 keep going

cyrano69 · 08-20-2007, 06:45 PM

intriguing... looking forward the next part.

Pretty_Girl19 · 08-20-2007, 07:08 PM

thanks, i'll post more tommorrow

Bored · 08-20-2007, 08:31 PM

great begining of the story looking forward to more.

Tinkerbell_Baby · 09-09-2007, 04:39 PM

It was around 10:30 at night and my family was gone. I slowly undressing, one piece of clothing slipping off, one after to other, dropping to the floor. I grabbed my clock to keep track of the time and stepped outside. I forgot that my balcony lights were automatic. The shinned so bright on the colorless night, which made me ever more noticeable to the public. Also it was located on the side of the house with a glass barrier. I felt my face get red and hot with embarrassment when I sat down and realized, not one minuet has even passed yet. This is going to one long night.

After what seemed like thirty minuets, I looked at the clock and it read 10:41. Only 11 min.! I couldn’t believe it. Just as I was to get back to my book I saw lights coming up the street. Yes Lights as in 3 cars it looked like. What was I to do? I just tried to hide as much as I could behind my book, which wasn’t very much at all. The first car pulled up and it’s headlights glared in my eyes. I had eye contact with the driver who was a male. His eyes followed the curves of my body as his car slowly crept up the street. One of the two other cars, luckily, turn away onto another street, but short burst of luck ran out. The other car looked familiar. It was the son of the family who lived across the street. Jason went to my school and was a year older than me. He knew that last year I had a crush on him. And now he is pulling up with me naked, no where to hide. He saw me and I saw him. I was so embarrassed I rolled over, hid my face and ran inside. When I thought about it was pretty dumb, cause now he saw front and back. I waited inside for around 5 minuets and went back out. It was just about 11 so that meant only 30 more min. What could happen I thought, well now I know a lot. For the rest of the night I barley read. I glanced up from my book every 30 seconds, fearing more people.

10 minuets passed and nothing happed. I was starting to fell better about this. Now that I was the calmest I have been, I decides I’d take the pictures now. There was one of me reading, two of me leaning on the balcony, one showing where I and the balcony was at and the last one me holding the clock. Finally it was 11:15. I was home free I thought, then in the silence I saw a dark short figure and that thing barked. It was only a dog that probably got loose. But as it got closer I saw it was on a leash. Oh crap, there must be a walker, right? Well there was and it one just somebody, it was Jason. My breathing got heavy and slow and sweat formed on my forehead. He must have left when I was hiding inside. When our eyes met I felt a gulp go down my throat. He bagan to turn my way. What was he going to do, or say? More important, what should I do? As he got closer I felt the like running away again, but I was trapped in a sense.

“Why in the world are you reading outside, naked?” Jason said with a harshness in his tone.
“It is relaxing, you should try it.” I know what a dumb thing to say but what else was there to do, I couldn’t say the truth. I wouldn’t admit it back then but I still liked him
“No thank you, I’ll stick to clothing”
“well it’s like 11:30 and your walking your dog? I have a feeling you maybe up to more.”
“I’m not a pervert!” he said with haste “Although it do enjoy the scenery.”
“ I’m sorry to disappoint you but I’m tired and I think I’ll be heading off the bed now.” I said. I was so happy my hour of horror has almost ended.
“Fine with me”
“Goodnight” I said as I was walking inside. I was trying so hard to my feelings of excitement from this but I probably wasn’t doing so good. “And I wouldn’t expect for this “scenery” to return.” I walk inside, fast and what I thought gracefull.

Once again sorry there is not much deatil but i tried. Please post your opinions! I hope to add more tommorrow

08-20-2007, 05:40 PM	#1
Pretty_Girl19 Account Banned Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: California, USA!! U rOcK mY sOcKs Posts: 26	More Than I Could've Ever Guessed[FICTION] Intro: I am a 16 year old girl who mistakenly got herself into more than she can handle. It all started back when I first stumbled upon this site. Like everyone here I played my fair games of truth or dare and done some dares here and there but what was to happen I could not have guessed. Part I: One normal day, after school, I was playing truth or dare on msn and was dared to send them a picture of myself naked. As I think about it today, I don’t know why I did actually sent the picture, I just probably wasn’t thinking of what may happen. See I was careless back then, excited about stepping out, willing to do anything. Right after I sent that picture the person I was chatting with, whose name is Leann, asked me for my email. What harm could happen if I gave that to her? So stupid I did. A few days later I was on getdare chatting with some people when I got this message from Leann. It read as followed: Dear Pretty, Please meet me on msn to receive your rules and orders from me. And I want u to be naked every time we speak, including now. See u there in a few minuets. Leann At first I just ignored it. What was she thinking, was the only thought sent from this letter to my mind at the time. I just continued chatting and and a few hours later went to go check my email. I saw one from Leann and was curious what she wanted. I click once and then again completely normal and calm as usual. And the first thing that popped up on my screen was me, naked. I sat there stunned, thoughtless and scared. Right then and there I realize Leann had more power over me than I could ever imagine. Thoughts, unlike before were racing though my head. I couldn’t think or focus. I really regretted not going on msn earlier. So I rushed on to msn still shaking from shock, not fully awoken. She was there. Before I even had a chance to begin to type, she started a conversation. It said “so I believe you got my email” I quickly said “yes, but why” “You are now my slave, I have all your email contents and a picture of you ready to send at one click from my finger” Unwilling to believe I said ”Prove it” She began to read of my email contacts and soon my emails. “you will be punishment for questioning me later, now here are your rules.” This is my first ever story, and i would like if it you post a comment. Be truthful please and tell me if it sucks. Oh and sorry it's so short will be longer next time __________________ [SIGPIC][/SIGPIC] Dare me! No limits and i will dare u back if u want

08-20-2007, 07:08 PM	#5
Pretty_Girl19 Account Banned Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: California, USA!! U rOcK mY sOcKs Posts: 26	thanks, i'll post more tommorrow __________________ [SIGPIC][/SIGPIC] Dare me! No limits and i will dare u back if u want

09-09-2007, 04:39 PM	#7
Tinkerbell_Baby Member Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: USA Posts: 82	Part III It was around 10:30 at night and my family was gone. I slowly undressing, one piece of clothing slipping off, one after to other, dropping to the floor. I grabbed my clock to keep track of the time and stepped outside. I forgot that my balcony lights were automatic. The shinned so bright on the colorless night, which made me ever more noticeable to the public. Also it was located on the side of the house with a glass barrier. I felt my face get red and hot with embarrassment when I sat down and realized, not one minuet has even passed yet. This is going to one long night. After what seemed like thirty minuets, I looked at the clock and it read 10:41. Only 11 min.! I couldn’t believe it. Just as I was to get back to my book I saw lights coming up the street. Yes Lights as in 3 cars it looked like. What was I to do? I just tried to hide as much as I could behind my book, which wasn’t very much at all. The first car pulled up and it’s headlights glared in my eyes. I had eye contact with the driver who was a male. His eyes followed the curves of my body as his car slowly crept up the street. One of the two other cars, luckily, turn away onto another street, but short burst of luck ran out. The other car looked familiar. It was the son of the family who lived across the street. Jason went to my school and was a year older than me. He knew that last year I had a crush on him. And now he is pulling up with me naked, no where to hide. He saw me and I saw him. I was so embarrassed I rolled over, hid my face and ran inside. When I thought about it was pretty dumb, cause now he saw front and back. I waited inside for around 5 minuets and went back out. It was just about 11 so that meant only 30 more min. What could happen I thought, well now I know a lot. For the rest of the night I barley read. I glanced up from my book every 30 seconds, fearing more people. 10 minuets passed and nothing happed. I was starting to fell better about this. Now that I was the calmest I have been, I decides I’d take the pictures now. There was one of me reading, two of me leaning on the balcony, one showing where I and the balcony was at and the last one me holding the clock. Finally it was 11:15. I was home free I thought, then in the silence I saw a dark short figure and that thing barked. It was only a dog that probably got loose. But as it got closer I saw it was on a leash. Oh crap, there must be a walker, right? Well there was and it one just somebody, it was Jason. My breathing got heavy and slow and sweat formed on my forehead. He must have left when I was hiding inside. When our eyes met I felt a gulp go down my throat. He bagan to turn my way. What was he going to do, or say? More important, what should I do? As he got closer I felt the like running away again, but I was trapped in a sense. “Why in the world are you reading outside, naked?” Jason said with a harshness in his tone. “It is relaxing, you should try it.” I know what a dumb thing to say but what else was there to do, I couldn’t say the truth. I wouldn’t admit it back then but I still liked him “No thank you, I’ll stick to clothing” “well it’s like 11:30 and your walking your dog? I have a feeling you maybe up to more.” “I’m not a pervert!” he said with haste “Although it do enjoy the scenery.” “ I’m sorry to disappoint you but I’m tired and I think I’ll be heading off the bed now.” I said. I was so happy my hour of horror has almost ended. “Fine with me” “Goodnight” I said as I was walking inside. I was trying so hard to my feelings of excitement from this but I probably wasn’t doing so good. “And I wouldn’t expect for this “scenery” to return.” I walk inside, fast and what I thought gracefull. Once again sorry there is not much deatil but i tried. Please post your opinions! I hope to add more tommorrow __________________ Ok News time. I live down in San Diego, California in the US and there has been a HUGE wildfire. There are 8 different fires all over the county. 250,000 people evacuated, 100,000 acres burned, around 15,000 homes gone. I am ok and so is my house but my aunt and uncle and their little 7 month baby are homeless and have nothing left. They are staying with us, but, they lost everything. This is the biggest fire ever seen in my state and is still happening. 10/25 0.oLove Ya..... Tink^.^

08-20-2007, 06:19 PM	#2
SubMissChievous Prodigy Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Canada Posts: 4,466	It's very nicely written and original too. You really have intrigued to read the next part. Great job there!

08-20-2007, 06:42 PM	#3
Leblonk Account Banned Join Date: Jul 2007 Posts: 74	good job pretty_girl19 keep going

08-20-2007, 06:45 PM	#4
cyrano69 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 171	intriguing... looking forward the next part.

08-20-2007, 08:31 PM	#6
Bored Distinguished Member Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: California Posts: 861	great begining of the story looking forward to more.