Sophie's Sweet 16th [FICTION]

The Doctor · 08-05-2008, 04:31 PM

Firstly I feel I must tell everyone that this is my first story, I have read many others and decided to have I go myself, so please tell me if it is any good.

Part 1

Sophie is an extremely stunning 15 year old; with shoulder length black hair and a face designed to perfection she is often mistaken for being much older than she actually is. And soon she will be, as tonight one of the most popular girls in school is throwing a huge party to celebrate her 16th, everyone who is anyone is invited and they have the whole house to themselves as her parents have booked themselves into a hotel for a couple of days, for the party and then to give them some time to clean up. Right at this moment Sophie felt like the happiest girl in the world, her parents were being so chilled about the entire thing and had given her enough money to make sure the party was a huge success.

As soon as the bell went to mark the end of school for the weekend Sophie was off like rocket, getting straight home to make any final preparations and to wave her parents off. At about 6:30 the guests started to trickle through the doors, even though the party didn't start till 7. Anyway cutting the whole thing short there was a lot of people, dancing and alcohol until about 3 in the morning when people started to trickle away, until at 4:30 when only Sophie, her best friends Katy and Stacy and two lads whom she was also friends with called Sam and Jack. They all decided to have another drink to the fact that they were all now 16 and much more free to do what they wanted.

“Hey you know what we should do?” Said Katy suddenly “We should play truth or dare!”

“Great idea, I haven't played that for ages!” Exclaimed Jack.

So Sophie grabbed a bottle and they got roughly into a circle. “Right its my party so I'll spin it first” she said. She quickly spun the bottle and it landed on Sam.

“Truth” he said. Sophie thought for a moment before saying;

“Are you a virgin?”

“Yep” he replied without even pausing “that sucked for a question, let me show you how it is done” He grabbed the bottle and gave it a mighty spin that eventually landed on Stacy.

She thought for a moment before saying “Dare”

“Hmm” Said Sam “Kiss Jack”

Stacy smiled at Sam before lightly pecking Jack on the cheek. “Thanks mate” said Jack to Sam “Keep em coming” Everyone laughed and Stacy picked up the bottle before gently spinning it so that it landed on Sam.

Nobody could be bothered to protest as Sam quickly said “Dare”

“Right then” Said Stacy with an evil grin “How about you kiss Jack”

The girls laughed, but Sam who wasn't one to be put off quickly pecked Jack on the opposite cheek to what Stacy had kissed, smirked at Stacy and spun the bottle. It landed on Sophie. She realized the game had gone beyond truths so she asked for a “Dare”

Sam seemed to think for a second before slowly saying “I dare you to kiss Katy, passionately.”

Sophie looked at Katy, who nodded. She shuffled herself around until she was able to reach Katy before slowly leaning forward.

andom4444 · 08-05-2008, 04:35 PM

a great start! ......

Davros · 08-05-2008, 04:37 PM

Great start, can't wait to read more

And welcome

The Doctor · 08-05-2008, 05:00 PM

Whoops like an idiot i forgot to put [FICTION] could anyone change that as I can't seem to... Sorry!

Davros · 08-05-2008, 05:01 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by The Doctor

Whoops like an idiot i forgot to put [FICTION] could anyone change that as I can't seem to... Sorry!

There are a few stories without *fiction* or *non-fiction* tags, so I assume it doesn't really matter too much

The Doctor · 08-05-2008, 05:12 PM

As she moved she felt Katy's open mouth touch hers and she embraced it with her own very dry, but open mouth. Sam, Jack and Stacy sat open mouthed watching the girls passionately kiss. The lads felt their cocks spring to attention as they watched the amazing scene. After about a minute the girls separated. “Wow!” Sam croaked. Sophie smiled at her audience then glanced at Katy wondering whether she had enjoyed it as much as she had. After a moment everyone had snapped out of their trance and Sophie spun the bottle. It landed on Jack.

“Anything you like” He said very coolly

“Okay then I dare you to go into the coat cupboard, get naked and stay there for five minutes”

Jack grinned, then stood up and headed for the cupboard. The instant the door shut the girls gathered round the door trying to peer through the gaps, they saw nothing as he had left the light off. Sophie thought for a moment before saying “We will need to open the door to make sure your naked” The others smiled and Sam sighed, before getting up to get another beer. Suddenly the door was flung open and Jack coolly stepped out smiling. The girls looked at him and gasped. He was completely nude and pretty well hung. After a moment of the girls soaking him in he said

“Do I pass inspection?” The girls had lost the ability so just nodded franticly, Jack laughed and shut the door. After a few minutes the girls called him out and he emerged fully dressed, doing a twirl as they all stared at him. Sam returned a few seconds later with a fresh round of drinks. Everyone sat down and jack spun the bottle. It landed on Katy. “Dare” she said.

“Well okay then, I dare you to do a striptease for us” Katy blushed but nodded. Sophie jumped up and put on some very slow, rhythmic music. Katy slowly got to her feet and started to dance in time with the music. She grabbed the bottom of her t-shirt and slowly lifted her arms.

Naughtybaby · 08-05-2008, 08:24 PM

Keep it going...fyi i wish i could write like you my story sucks but yours,yours rocks

nolz95 · 08-05-2008, 10:13 PM

great story!! i like it

08-05-2008, 04:31 PM	#1
The Doctor Junior Member Join Date: Aug 2008 Posts: 13	Sophie's Sweet 16th [FICTION] Firstly I feel I must tell everyone that this is my first story, I have read many others and decided to have I go myself, so please tell me if it is any good. Part 1 Sophie is an extremely stunning 15 year old; with shoulder length black hair and a face designed to perfection she is often mistaken for being much older than she actually is. And soon she will be, as tonight one of the most popular girls in school is throwing a huge party to celebrate her 16th, everyone who is anyone is invited and they have the whole house to themselves as her parents have booked themselves into a hotel for a couple of days, for the party and then to give them some time to clean up. Right at this moment Sophie felt like the happiest girl in the world, her parents were being so chilled about the entire thing and had given her enough money to make sure the party was a huge success. As soon as the bell went to mark the end of school for the weekend Sophie was off like rocket, getting straight home to make any final preparations and to wave her parents off. At about 6:30 the guests started to trickle through the doors, even though the party didn't start till 7. Anyway cutting the whole thing short there was a lot of people, dancing and alcohol until about 3 in the morning when people started to trickle away, until at 4:30 when only Sophie, her best friends Katy and Stacy and two lads whom she was also friends with called Sam and Jack. They all decided to have another drink to the fact that they were all now 16 and much more free to do what they wanted. “Hey you know what we should do?” Said Katy suddenly “We should play truth or dare!” “Great idea, I haven't played that for ages!” Exclaimed Jack. So Sophie grabbed a bottle and they got roughly into a circle. “Right its my party so I'll spin it first” she said. She quickly spun the bottle and it landed on Sam. “Truth” he said. Sophie thought for a moment before saying; “Are you a virgin?” “Yep” he replied without even pausing “that sucked for a question, let me show you how it is done” He grabbed the bottle and gave it a mighty spin that eventually landed on Stacy. She thought for a moment before saying “Dare” “Hmm” Said Sam “Kiss Jack” Stacy smiled at Sam before lightly pecking Jack on the cheek. “Thanks mate” said Jack to Sam “Keep em coming” Everyone laughed and Stacy picked up the bottle before gently spinning it so that it landed on Sam. Nobody could be bothered to protest as Sam quickly said “Dare” “Right then” Said Stacy with an evil grin “How about you kiss Jack” The girls laughed, but Sam who wasn't one to be put off quickly pecked Jack on the opposite cheek to what Stacy had kissed, smirked at Stacy and spun the bottle. It landed on Sophie. She realized the game had gone beyond truths so she asked for a “Dare” Sam seemed to think for a second before slowly saying “I dare you to kiss Katy, passionately.” Sophie looked at Katy, who nodded. She shuffled herself around until she was able to reach Katy before slowly leaning forward. __________________ If sarcasm is the lowest form of wit, why do you feel so smart when you use it?

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08-05-2008, 05:00 PM	#4
The Doctor Junior Member Join Date: Aug 2008 Posts: 13	Whoops like an idiot i forgot to put [FICTION] could anyone change that as I can't seem to... Sorry! __________________ If sarcasm is the lowest form of wit, why do you feel so smart when you use it?

08-05-2008, 05:12 PM	#6
The Doctor Junior Member Join Date: Aug 2008 Posts: 13	Part 2 As she moved she felt Katy's open mouth touch hers and she embraced it with her own very dry, but open mouth. Sam, Jack and Stacy sat open mouthed watching the girls passionately kiss. The lads felt their cocks spring to attention as they watched the amazing scene. After about a minute the girls separated. “Wow!” Sam croaked. Sophie smiled at her audience then glanced at Katy wondering whether she had enjoyed it as much as she had. After a moment everyone had snapped out of their trance and Sophie spun the bottle. It landed on Jack. “Anything you like” He said very coolly “Okay then I dare you to go into the coat cupboard, get naked and stay there for five minutes” Jack grinned, then stood up and headed for the cupboard. The instant the door shut the girls gathered round the door trying to peer through the gaps, they saw nothing as he had left the light off. Sophie thought for a moment before saying “We will need to open the door to make sure your naked” The others smiled and Sam sighed, before getting up to get another beer. Suddenly the door was flung open and Jack coolly stepped out smiling. The girls looked at him and gasped. He was completely nude and pretty well hung. After a moment of the girls soaking him in he said “Do I pass inspection?” The girls had lost the ability so just nodded franticly, Jack laughed and shut the door. After a few minutes the girls called him out and he emerged fully dressed, doing a twirl as they all stared at him. Sam returned a few seconds later with a fresh round of drinks. Everyone sat down and jack spun the bottle. It landed on Katy. “Dare” she said. “Well okay then, I dare you to do a striptease for us” Katy blushed but nodded. Sophie jumped up and put on some very slow, rhythmic music. Katy slowly got to her feet and started to dance in time with the music. She grabbed the bottom of her t-shirt and slowly lifted her arms. __________________ If sarcasm is the lowest form of wit, why do you feel so smart when you use it?

08-05-2008, 08:24 PM	#7
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08-05-2008, 04:37 PM	#3
Davros Account Banned Join Date: Aug 2007 Posts: 2,943	Great start, can't wait to read more And welcome

08-05-2008, 10:13 PM	#8
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