3 boys and a game of tord! [fiction] - Page 2

angusnbrian1 · 02-15-2010, 02:49 PM

Thanks for the comments everyone, my grammar and spelling isn't great cause I'm using my iPod touch to write this (pc is down) so everything is harder to spell check n stuff. Chapter 8 will be coming today or tomorrow. Any ideas for dares the boys could do?

angusnbrian1 · 02-15-2010, 03:45 PM

Hi guys thanks for all the comments here is part eight! Enjoy!!!!!
Chapter 8:
"ok ryan your dare is to lick my ass hole for 3 mins!" said jack.
"that's disgusting! But I guess I have too" with that jack got into a doggy position and started licking while craig timed us. It was an unpleasant experiance. Now it was my turn and Jack chose dare. "I dare you to knock on craig's neighbour's door, wait for them to answer then run off! Whilst naked!" I said. The look on Jack's face said it all "no way! They might phone the police or something!" jack exclaimed. I had won! I was free, no longer craig's slave! Jack and Craig both looked annoyed " I better go now I going out later" said jack as picked up his things and redressed. Craig saw him to the door then came back upstairs. We stood facing each still naked, I put my hand on Craig's ass and smiled "that was alot more fun than I thought it would be" I said. Craig also smiled. We both started kissing. I don't know why I just did it without thinking but it felt good and it felt right. Craig pushed me onto his bed and started sucking me off. The rest of this weekend was going to be great...

THE END
the sequel will be released soon and will be titled 'what happened next' not great but it'll do! Lol!

angusnbrian1 · 02-15-2010, 04:38 PM

The sequel to this story will probbaly be in the mature section

will9022 · 02-15-2010, 07:32 PM

good story, but grammar and spelling need work. I notice that a lot of times it seems that you leave out a word, so its hard to understand the sentence fully

Mr Very Daring · 02-16-2010, 10:27 AM

good story- although it didn't last long lol

glasssbottle174 · 02-16-2010, 12:58 PM

Good story. Try and make the sequel a bit longer though.

02-15-2010, 02:49 PM	#16
angusnbrian1 Junior Member Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: England Posts: 22	thanks everyone Thanks for the comments everyone, my grammar and spelling isn't great cause I'm using my iPod touch to write this (pc is down) so everything is harder to spell check n stuff. Chapter 8 will be coming today or tomorrow. Any ideas for dares the boys could do? __________________ It's just a waffer thin mint! Pythonists add me!

02-15-2010, 03:45 PM	#17
angusnbrian1 Junior Member Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: England Posts: 22	Chapter 8! Hi guys thanks for all the comments here is part eight! Enjoy!!!!! Chapter 8: "ok ryan your dare is to lick my ass hole for 3 mins!" said jack. "that's disgusting! But I guess I have too" with that jack got into a doggy position and started licking while craig timed us. It was an unpleasant experiance. Now it was my turn and Jack chose dare. "I dare you to knock on craig's neighbour's door, wait for them to answer then run off! Whilst naked!" I said. The look on Jack's face said it all "no way! They might phone the police or something!" jack exclaimed. I had won! I was free, no longer craig's slave! Jack and Craig both looked annoyed " I better go now I going out later" said jack as picked up his things and redressed. Craig saw him to the door then came back upstairs. We stood facing each still naked, I put my hand on Craig's ass and smiled "that was alot more fun than I thought it would be" I said. Craig also smiled. We both started kissing. I don't know why I just did it without thinking but it felt good and it felt right. Craig pushed me onto his bed and started sucking me off. The rest of this weekend was going to be great... THE END the sequel will be released soon and will be titled 'what happened next' not great but it'll do! Lol! __________________ It's just a waffer thin mint! Pythonists add me!

02-15-2010, 04:38 PM	#18
angusnbrian1 Junior Member Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: England Posts: 22	Sequel The sequel to this story will probbaly be in the mature section __________________ It's just a waffer thin mint! Pythonists add me!

02-15-2010, 07:32 PM	#19
will9022 Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: New York, USA Posts: 156	good story, but grammar and spelling need work. I notice that a lot of times it seems that you leave out a word, so its hard to understand the sentence fully

02-16-2010, 10:27 AM	#20
Mr Very Daring getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Mar 2009 Posts: 255	good story- although it didn't last long lol

02-16-2010, 12:58 PM	#21
glasssbottle174 getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Jul 2008 Posts: 263	Good story. Try and make the sequel a bit longer though.