05-21-2017, 01:10 PM | #1 |
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28/male/slave seeks any age/any sex/master in any location
28/male/slave seeks any age/any sex/master in any location Dear Masters and Mistresses, my name is Sebastian and I am looking for someone to help me achieve my goals in a bigger scale. I already made a lot progress and lost about 20kg in the last month but as I want to lose more I need someone helping me to gain more productivity. Goals:
How I would love to have this game?
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Soft Limits
Hard Limits Even though this list seems to not be complete you should guess the direction this list is going in...
Questions? Feel free to ask me everything either here in the thread or via PM! Last edited by sculptormortis; 05-24-2017 at 11:37 PM. |
05-21-2017, 03:00 PM | #2 |
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This is an... in the middle ad. Maybe include soft and hard limits, as well as likes and dislikes. Also, maybe have it checked over for English mistakes before posting it.
Hope you find someone suitable!
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05-22-2017, 11:09 AM | #3 |
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Thank you very much for your feedback!
I have already searched a few times with really long and good postings but never found someone. Not only on this plattform so I got tired from writing long postings and not receiving the response I looked for... |
05-24-2017, 04:15 AM | #4 |
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I tried to update some points and will read through my text later to fix my english .
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05-24-2017, 04:38 AM | #5 |
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In order:
archive->achieve 'made a huge' -> 'made a lot' or 'made huge' ' have more' is technically okay, but you may want to consider 'lose more'. 'in sharp' -> 'in shape' archiving->achieving seams -> seems 'not to be' -> 'to not be' (although 'the direction this is going to' -> 'the direction this is going' or 'the direction this list is going in'. If I was in your position, I might put in a disclaimer about the list not necessarily being complete. Your limit involving 'foreign' people might be better stated with a different word - I would suggest 'unknown' or 'people I don't feel comfortable with exposing this to', if I have guessed your intent correctly. For future reference, spell check is not a cure-all. There are very similarly-spelled words with wildly different meanings, and spell check only checks if what you typed is in the dictionary. That said, I wish you luck! |
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05-25-2017, 02:25 AM | #6 |
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Thank you very much NonexistentFish for helping me out =).
I speak english a lot, but many with people who don't have english as first language either, but I only write technical english and not "letter" english. Thanks for your wishes and good look also! |
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