Sophie's Sweet 16th [FICTION]

The Doctor · 08-05-2008, 04:31 PM

Firstly I feel I must tell everyone that this is my first story, I have read many others and decided to have I go myself, so please tell me if it is any good.

Part 1

Sophie is an extremely stunning 15 year old; with shoulder length black hair and a face designed to perfection she is often mistaken for being much older than she actually is. And soon she will be, as tonight one of the most popular girls in school is throwing a huge party to celebrate her 16th, everyone who is anyone is invited and they have the whole house to themselves as her parents have booked themselves into a hotel for a couple of days, for the party and then to give them some time to clean up. Right at this moment Sophie felt like the happiest girl in the world, her parents were being so chilled about the entire thing and had given her enough money to make sure the party was a huge success.

As soon as the bell went to mark the end of school for the weekend Sophie was off like rocket, getting straight home to make any final preparations and to wave her parents off. At about 6:30 the guests started to trickle through the doors, even though the party didn't start till 7. Anyway cutting the whole thing short there was a lot of people, dancing and alcohol until about 3 in the morning when people started to trickle away, until at 4:30 when only Sophie, her best friends Katy and Stacy and two lads whom she was also friends with called Sam and Jack. They all decided to have another drink to the fact that they were all now 16 and much more free to do what they wanted.

“Hey you know what we should do?” Said Katy suddenly “We should play truth or dare!”

“Great idea, I haven't played that for ages!” Exclaimed Jack.

So Sophie grabbed a bottle and they got roughly into a circle. “Right its my party so I'll spin it first” she said. She quickly spun the bottle and it landed on Sam.

“Truth” he said. Sophie thought for a moment before saying;

“Are you a virgin?”

“Yep” he replied without even pausing “that sucked for a question, let me show you how it is done” He grabbed the bottle and gave it a mighty spin that eventually landed on Stacy.

She thought for a moment before saying “Dare”

“Hmm” Said Sam “Kiss Jack”

Stacy smiled at Sam before lightly pecking Jack on the cheek. “Thanks mate” said Jack to Sam “Keep em coming” Everyone laughed and Stacy picked up the bottle before gently spinning it so that it landed on Sam.

Nobody could be bothered to protest as Sam quickly said “Dare”

“Right then” Said Stacy with an evil grin “How about you kiss Jack”

The girls laughed, but Sam who wasn't one to be put off quickly pecked Jack on the opposite cheek to what Stacy had kissed, smirked at Stacy and spun the bottle. It landed on Sophie. She realized the game had gone beyond truths so she asked for a “Dare”

Sam seemed to think for a second before slowly saying “I dare you to kiss Katy, passionately.”

Sophie looked at Katy, who nodded. She shuffled herself around until she was able to reach Katy before slowly leaning forward.

08-05-2008, 04:31 PM	#1
The Doctor Junior Member Join Date: Aug 2008 Posts: 13	Sophie's Sweet 16th [FICTION] Firstly I feel I must tell everyone that this is my first story, I have read many others and decided to have I go myself, so please tell me if it is any good. Part 1 Sophie is an extremely stunning 15 year old; with shoulder length black hair and a face designed to perfection she is often mistaken for being much older than she actually is. And soon she will be, as tonight one of the most popular girls in school is throwing a huge party to celebrate her 16th, everyone who is anyone is invited and they have the whole house to themselves as her parents have booked themselves into a hotel for a couple of days, for the party and then to give them some time to clean up. Right at this moment Sophie felt like the happiest girl in the world, her parents were being so chilled about the entire thing and had given her enough money to make sure the party was a huge success. As soon as the bell went to mark the end of school for the weekend Sophie was off like rocket, getting straight home to make any final preparations and to wave her parents off. At about 6:30 the guests started to trickle through the doors, even though the party didn't start till 7. Anyway cutting the whole thing short there was a lot of people, dancing and alcohol until about 3 in the morning when people started to trickle away, until at 4:30 when only Sophie, her best friends Katy and Stacy and two lads whom she was also friends with called Sam and Jack. They all decided to have another drink to the fact that they were all now 16 and much more free to do what they wanted. “Hey you know what we should do?” Said Katy suddenly “We should play truth or dare!” “Great idea, I haven't played that for ages!” Exclaimed Jack. So Sophie grabbed a bottle and they got roughly into a circle. “Right its my party so I'll spin it first” she said. She quickly spun the bottle and it landed on Sam. “Truth” he said. Sophie thought for a moment before saying; “Are you a virgin?” “Yep” he replied without even pausing “that sucked for a question, let me show you how it is done” He grabbed the bottle and gave it a mighty spin that eventually landed on Stacy. She thought for a moment before saying “Dare” “Hmm” Said Sam “Kiss Jack” Stacy smiled at Sam before lightly pecking Jack on the cheek. “Thanks mate” said Jack to Sam “Keep em coming” Everyone laughed and Stacy picked up the bottle before gently spinning it so that it landed on Sam. Nobody could be bothered to protest as Sam quickly said “Dare” “Right then” Said Stacy with an evil grin “How about you kiss Jack” The girls laughed, but Sam who wasn't one to be put off quickly pecked Jack on the opposite cheek to what Stacy had kissed, smirked at Stacy and spun the bottle. It landed on Sophie. She realized the game had gone beyond truths so she asked for a “Dare” Sam seemed to think for a second before slowly saying “I dare you to kiss Katy, passionately.” Sophie looked at Katy, who nodded. She shuffled herself around until she was able to reach Katy before slowly leaning forward. __________________ If sarcasm is the lowest form of wit, why do you feel so smart when you use it?