Fiction: One Interesting Sleepover

yobobo · 06-20-2009, 10:28 PM

It all started one night. Thomas invited Andrew and Justin over his house to sleepover. They were all about 15 and for a while they did what most 15 yr olds do, play video games, watch tv ect. Then, Justin suggested that they play truth or dare. It seemed harmless so they did. At first it was stupid stuff, until Andrew dared Justin to show his dick to Thomas. So they did(not really) and then it was Andrew's turn. So to get back at him, they dared him to show them his dick. "What!?!" He couldn't believe what he got himself into.

yobobo · 06-20-2009, 10:50 PM

So Andrew did the dare as requested. Thirsty for revenge he dared the same thing to Thomas. And so the night went on. They had done more dares simply requesting that they were naked doing something. It was Thomas's turn. Andrew and Justin dared him to jerk off and cum without watching porn. It took a while but sure enough he did the dare. Next Justin was up. Thomas and Andrew dared him to stick a drum stick up his ass. This really got to him because he had never done this or even thought about such a thing. But it was a dare so he did it. While he was doing the dare though, Thomas snuck up behind him and pushed the drumstick up even further than it would go. So now Justin was pissed. He was gonna get back at Thomas. With an evil grin on his face, he gave Thomas his next dare. I dare you to...

blueboy · 06-21-2009, 10:43 AM

Segments are kind of short. If the segments are longer, it helps the story flow better. Good spelling and grammar though. Could turn out to be a good story.

callofduty4 · 06-21-2009, 11:29 AM

please tell me ur going to write soon

yobobo · 06-21-2009, 04:00 PM

Part III

I dare you to remain naked for the rest of the game AND you have to do a punishment everytime you deny a dare. Thomas didn't think that was too bad considering what he had just done to Justin. So it was Andrew's turn. Now after the dare about inserting something into Justin's butt came up, Andrew had insisted that he was not, under any circumstances, sticking anything up his butt. So Justin and Thomas thought. What dare could they give him that would not involve insertion? Then they came up with it. "OK. You have to take all of your clothes off, then sit down at the computer, and then jack off and cum to videos of our choice. Again, this didn't sound like that bad a dare. So Andrew got naked, went over to the computer, and sat down. Everything was fine until Thomas and Justin pulled up a gay porn website. Immediately, Andrew started complaining, "How could i jack off to this, I'm not gay?" But a dare was a dare so Andrew did it. It took him a while but then it was time for the next dare.
"I dare you to go into the next room and get naked. Then you have to come over to the computer and jack off until you cum. You can pick whatever you want to jack off to." said Andrew. Well that was nearly the dare he just gave Andrew, except easier. So he went into the next room and got undressed. Then, he went into the main room again and sat down at the computer. He went upon doing the dare. As he got his clothes and was getting dressed, Andrew and Thomas revealed to him that they had just taken a video of him doing his last dare using Thomas' webcam. This really got to Justin. Two dares in a row, he was being ganged up on. He had to get them back, but how???
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By the way this is my first story, so tell me what you think, any suggestion on how to make the story better. Thanks!

callofduty4 · 06-21-2009, 08:17 PM

good story some today and make it long if you dont mind

06-20-2009, 10:28 PM	#1
yobobo Member Join Date: Jun 2009 Posts: 44	One Interesting Sleepover It all started one night. Thomas invited Andrew and Justin over his house to sleepover. They were all about 15 and for a while they did what most 15 yr olds do, play video games, watch tv ect. Then, Justin suggested that they play truth or dare. It seemed harmless so they did. At first it was stupid stuff, until Andrew dared Justin to show his dick to Thomas. So they did(not really) and then it was Andrew's turn. So to get back at him, they dared him to show them his dick. "What!?!" He couldn't believe what he got himself into.

06-20-2009, 10:50 PM	#2
yobobo Member Join Date: Jun 2009 Posts: 44	So Andrew did the dare as requested. Thirsty for revenge he dared the same thing to Thomas. And so the night went on. They had done more dares simply requesting that they were naked doing something. It was Thomas's turn. Andrew and Justin dared him to jerk off and cum without watching porn. It took a while but sure enough he did the dare. Next Justin was up. Thomas and Andrew dared him to stick a drum stick up his ass. This really got to him because he had never done this or even thought about such a thing. But it was a dare so he did it. While he was doing the dare though, Thomas snuck up behind him and pushed the drumstick up even further than it would go. So now Justin was pissed. He was gonna get back at Thomas. With an evil grin on his face, he gave Thomas his next dare. I dare you to...

06-21-2009, 10:43 AM	#3
blueboy Member Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: Edmonton, Alberta Posts: 55 Blog Entries: 2	Segments are kind of short. If the segments are longer, it helps the story flow better. Good spelling and grammar though. Could turn out to be a good story.

06-21-2009, 11:29 AM	#4
callofduty4 Member Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: dont worry Posts: 76	please tell me ur going to write soon

06-21-2009, 04:00 PM	#5
yobobo Member Join Date: Jun 2009 Posts: 44	Part III I dare you to remain naked for the rest of the game AND you have to do a punishment everytime you deny a dare. Thomas didn't think that was too bad considering what he had just done to Justin. So it was Andrew's turn. Now after the dare about inserting something into Justin's butt came up, Andrew had insisted that he was not, under any circumstances, sticking anything up his butt. So Justin and Thomas thought. What dare could they give him that would not involve insertion? Then they came up with it. "OK. You have to take all of your clothes off, then sit down at the computer, and then jack off and cum to videos of our choice. Again, this didn't sound like that bad a dare. So Andrew got naked, went over to the computer, and sat down. Everything was fine until Thomas and Justin pulled up a gay porn website. Immediately, Andrew started complaining, "How could i jack off to this, I'm not gay?" But a dare was a dare so Andrew did it. It took him a while but then it was time for the next dare. "I dare you to go into the next room and get naked. Then you have to come over to the computer and jack off until you cum. You can pick whatever you want to jack off to." said Andrew. Well that was nearly the dare he just gave Andrew, except easier. So he went into the next room and got undressed. Then, he went into the main room again and sat down at the computer. He went upon doing the dare. As he got his clothes and was getting dressed, Andrew and Thomas revealed to him that they had just taken a video of him doing his last dare using Thomas' webcam. This really got to Justin. Two dares in a row, he was being ganged up on. He had to get them back, but how??? ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- By the way this is my first story, so tell me what you think, any suggestion on how to make the story better. Thanks!

06-21-2009, 08:17 PM	#6
callofduty4 Member Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: dont worry Posts: 76	good story some today and make it long if you dont mind