[Non-Fiction] A Tale of Many Bets

[Saphir]

hey wanted to comment so often on this but it was always very late and I decided to go to bed because I'm always kinda super tired when I'm on here

anyway, very good new chapter, really looking forward to the outcome of this, keep writing!

love

[exsuberman]

Are you going to continue this one?

[Demon Thief]

Yeah, I am, I've just been sick with the flu for the past week or so.

I'll have an update by tomorrow night.

[Demon Thief]

Chapter Forty-Five

It was now Brandon's turn to deal. Everyone knew that the stakes were really high now. Zack, Brandon, and Damien were all in danger of losing. I was the only one who had a shot at winning this game.

This time I received another mediocre hand. I decided to show it first, knowing full well that I couldn't win with a pair of twos, an ace, a ten, and a six.

"I guess I'm not winning this one," I said. "Anyone have a worse hand than me?"

"I don't," Damien said. He showed his hand, which had a pair of tens, a king, a nine, and a five.

Zack showed his hand next. He had a king, a ten, an eight, a five, and a three.

"I guess I won," Brandon said, as he revealed two queens, two fours, and an ace.

"Can I do another dare?" Zack asked, since he had lost once again.

I didn't really whether he did anything or not; after all, it wasn't my decision to make. It was up to Brandon this time.

"Yeah, sure," Brandon said. "Your dare is to run outside naked for five minutes."

"Fine, I'll do it," Zack said. He took off his underwear and started to walk outside. This was the first time I'd seen him naked. His penis was smaller than Brandon's, who had him beat by at least half an inch in length.

"Damien, would you go with Zack and make sure he does the dare?" Brandon asked.

"Sure," Damien replied, not sure what was going on. I had no idea either, but I was going to find out.

Once Zack had gone in the backyard with Damien watching him from the back door, I asked Brandon, "What the hell is going on here?"

"Ooh, you swore!" Brandon exclaimed.

"I know I swore. Just tell me what's going on here."

"I think it's easier if I show you. Follow me," Brandon said. He started walking away.

Now, I was completely curious about the whole situation, but I didn't want to run into some kind of trap. I knew how cunning Brandon could be. But on the other hand, maybe he wasn't trying to trick me into doing more stuff for him. In the end, I decided to go with my gut, and went with him.

I followed him into Zack's room, where I sat on the bed and watched Brandon open one of the drawers in Zack's dresser and rummage through the clothes inside of it. After about twenty seconds of searching, he pulled out two objects - a camera and a small wooden box, about two inches wide, five inches long, and three inches high. He set the camera aside and handed the box to me.

"What is it?" I asked, sensing something strange going on.

"Just open it," Brandon said.

I had come too far to turn back now. Almost two minutes had passed since Zack had gone outside to do his dare. I opened the lid of the box and looked inside. What was in there literally made my jaw drop.

The box was full of pictures. Pictures of myself, Damien, and a few boys I didn't recognize. Pictures of us all naked or doing embarrassing things.

"Interesting," I said, "But why are you showing me all of this?"

He didn't answer, but pulled out the pictures on top and showed me the ones on the bottom.

"But, I don't understand," I said.

The pictures on the bottom were all of Brandon naked. The earlier ones showed him when he was around ten, which was when he started making strange bets.

"He took these pictures of me, and blackmailed me into taking pictures of other people I knew," Brandon said. He seemed on the verge of tears, probably from the shame of all that happened. "He would give me some kind of deadline and if I didn't make it, or told someone what was going on, he said he would show everyone the pictures."

"Why didn't you try getting pictures of him? Get some blackmail on him?" I asked.

"I couldn't risk it. He said he gave copies of the pictures to someone else, and that person would show everyone if I ever did anything to him."

"When did this start?" I asked.

"At one of our sleepovers when we lived in Maine. When we moved here, I thought I'd be free, but his family moved here a few weeks after we did."

At first I couldn't believe that he'd been made to do all of this all along, but then I started looking closer at some of the photos, especially the ones of me and Damien, I noticed something. The photos of the two of us were from the sleepover we had in the woods that one night, some of the dares Damien and I did in the woods when we thought no one was around, even a few photos of the one time Damien and I showered together.

Now I could see Brandon's problem. Zack could be around and no one would know. It was like he spied on us or something. I wish I hit him harder earlier, I thought to myself.

Fortunately, I knew what I could do. I grabbed my camera from under Zack's bed (the object I hid a few chapters back), and snapped a few pictures of the photos in Zack's box as well as his camera. "There, now let's see how he feels about being at the other end of some blackmail," I said.

"I've got a better idea," Brandon said. He took my camera and snapped a few pictures of the drawer that the box and camera were hidden in. Brandon gave me back my camera, which I put in my pocket, and we got the heck out of Zack's room.

It's lucky for us we got out of there when we did, because Zack was just coming back from his dare. Damien was behind him, and he confirmed that Zack had done his dare properly.

"Listen Zack," Brandon said, "While you were outside, my mom called. She wants both me and Damien to come home. She sounded mad."

"Fine, you can go," Zack said, clearly believing Brandon's lie. "I'll just finish the game with Kyle, then."

"Actually, I have to go too," I said. "I have some chores that I need to do."

"Okay, whatever, we'll finish this another day," Zack said. And with the game finished, everyone got dressed and Damien, Brandon, and I walked back to my house together. I made sure to bring back my other set of clothes that Brandon had taken earlier.

"So what happened while I was watching him?" Damien asked, knowing full well Brandon and I knew something and wanting to be in the loop.

Brandon and I took turns telling him the story, which took quite a while to tell. At first Damien was skeptical, but as I chimed in with my discoveries, he believed us completely.

The rest of the walk back was discussing ways to get Zack back for all that he'd done. After a few days of constant schemeing, we came up with the perfect plan.

About a week after the poker game and everything else, Zack's mother received a vey interesting item in the mail. It contained a letter informing her of what her son had done, as well as the pictures of his little blackmail stash. She apparently discovered his pictures for herself, and sent him to some reform school in the Midwest. Zack's mother than moved away some time afterward. We haven't seen any sign of them since.

Sorry this seemed kind of rushed, but I'm really anxious to get the next segment written. I'll post it in a few days time.

[Saphir]

w... what?

c'mon xD

couldn't it get hawt and stuff before it ends like this? xD (meeeh fine, I'll look for another story to finish tonight :/ )
anyway, it's good, I don't need to say that anymore xD

[Tylerr]

I did not see this coming. At all o: wait its not over right?

[nonstopdisco]

As unpredictable as always love it

[dareman 1]

Great story please post the next chapter

[Abmp]

Please keeping writing - this is one of th elonest and most well written stories I have read.
You could even turn it into a series - like Dylan and Connor ( you can make the rest fiction even)
There are so many things you can do, and I would be so excited to read them. But first I want to finish reading this story. It's so good!

[Demon Thief]

Originally Posted by Saphir

w... what?

c'mon xD

couldn't it get hawt and stuff before it ends like this? xD (meeeh fine, I'll look for another story to finish tonight :/ )
anyway, it's good, I don't need to say that anymore xD

That was just a little closure on the chaper itself. I still have one to go before the segment's over.

Originally Posted by Tylerr

I did not see this coming. At all o: wait its not over right?

Nope!

Originally Posted by nonstopdisco

As unpredictable as always love it

Thanks. I hope you continue your story though.

Anyway, sorry for the massive delay, but I really haven't felt like writing, mostly due to things happening in my life. However, I may have resolved some of my issues, so hopefully I can update more often.

Chapter Forty-Six

That night I ended up spending the night at Damien's house. It was 7:30, his parents were out to dinner and a movie, and Brandon was over at another friend's house. So we would be alone for a few hours.

"What do you want to do?" Damien asked. We were in his room just hanging out.

"I don't know," I answered.

"Well, if you want to, we can do some of those dares," he said with a grin.

"How can we? Neither of us took the cards," I replied. "And besides, haven't we been through enough today? I don't want to do more of that stuff."

Which was a lie, that last part. A part of me, the part around the semi that I could feel in my pants, wanted to do more of those dares. Damien spotted the bulge in my pants and said, "You don't want to do anything, huh."

"Well, okay, I kind of do," I said. "But we still haven't answered the problem of knowing what the rest of the dares were."

"That's okay," he said. "I'm sure we can think of some around those lines."

"Like what?" I asked.

"Well for starters, I dare you to strip naked."

I had a feeling that was coming, but I made no complaint as I took off my clothes. "I dare you to do the same," I said as I laid my clothes aside.

"How original," Damien commented as he stripped. "Now I dare you to give me a handjob, and you can't stop until I cum."

"Okay," I said. He sat on the bed and I knelt down next to him. He must've been excited, because his penis was rock hard. I had barely started stroking him when he came. Unfortunately, most of his cum landed on my chest.

"Oops, sorry dude," Damien said while laughing, "I would've warned you but it came too quickly."

"That's okay," I said, "Because I dare you to lick it up."

"What the hell, man?!" he shouted.

"It's only fair," I said, "I gave you a blowjob earlier and I had to swallow."

"Fine then, but I'll get you back."

We both stood up and Damien stood very close to me. He leaned forward until he was close to the splatters of cum on my chest. Then he stuck out his tongue and started licking the drops of his cum up. The touch of his tongue on my chest felt really weird though, and I was glad when he finished.

But I still wanted to continue with what we were doing, so...

''Okay, so what's my dare?" I asked.

"Actually, it's not really a dare, it's more of a challenge," Damien said.

"What is it?" I asked.

"I'm going to write five dares on a piece of paper," he said. "Each dare represents a number on a die. Whatever number you roll is the dare you have to do. If you roll a six, I roll the die and I do whatever dare I roll."

"Okay, I'll do it," I said.

Damien looked through his desk until he found a piece of paper, a pen, and a die. He wrote his dares on the paper, but refused to let me see what he had written there. I guess he wanted it to be a surprise. He handed me the die and I shook it in my hands and rolled it.

The die rolled across the floor and bounced off one of Damien's shoes. Whe it stopped moving, the number on top was the six.

"Damn!" Damien said.

"Ha ha, I guess it's your turn now!" I said, laughing as I handed Damien the die. I took his list of dares from him as he rolled the die.

The die rolled over to the wall and stopped. This time the number was a two.

"You got a two? Okay the paper says you have to give me a blowjob." I said.

"Damn! I was hoping you would get that one," Damien said.

He knelt in front of me and took my dick in his mouth. He started sucking and it felt amazing. I had came moments before and yet I was already getting hard. He moved his head back and forth very gentlly while at the same time moving his tongue along my shaft. I tell you, if I could cum again, I would, but unfortunately, I couldn't.

Finally, after what seemed like forever (in reality it was five minutes), I told Damien to stop. As he stood up, without any warning at all, I threw my arms around him and hugged him. I guess he wasn't expecting that, because he tensed a little, but then he hugged me back. We stood like that for a few minutes, and I knew we were no longer just friends. I felt that way and I'm pretty sure he did too.

[undertaker]

good story matey

[Saphir]

How did I miss this one? Oo

I generally like your writing, and this part was not too bad (I liked the content) but I think you really can do a lot better. ;P

Let me point out:
Generally this chapter lacks a lot of details

"Okay," I said. He sat on the bed and I knelt down next to him. He must've been excited, because his penis was rock hard. I had barely started stroking him when he came. Unfortunately, most of his cum landed on my chest.

Make it like 300-500 words ;P

He sat on the bed and I knelt down next to him. Unfortunately, most of his cum landed on my chest.

could describe way more how he sits down, looks at him, looks back... feelings, thoughts?

I had barely started stroking him when he came.

...how his hand felt his dick pulsating, the look in his eyes, when he comes, could also go way more into detail about the cuming (how he comes, his body language (movement) maybe also sounds he makes, also the 2nd sentence is kinda funny but doesn't really fit the sexy situation... also how does the cum feel? weird you use later on... warm? sticky maybe? idk...what does he think? feel?

"That's okay," he said. "I'm sure we can think of some around those lines."
"Like what?" I asked.
"Well for starters, I dare you to strip naked."
I had a feeling that was coming, but I made no complaint as I took off my clothes. "I dare you to do the same," I said as I laid my clothes aside.
"How original," Damien commented as he stripped. "Now I dare you to give me a handjob, and you can't stop until I cum."

WAY too rushed
even if that quick, because they know already or whatever, you need more details to make the rush up. Otherwise it loses much of it's sexiness... it's more of a porno than of an erotic story...
don't need to change the content, just add little information/annotation, just some random pointless stuff that makes the whole thing vivid. :3

Finally, after what seemed like forever (in reality it was five minutes), I told Damien to stop. As he stood up, without any warning at all, I threw my arms around him and hugged him. I guess he wasn't expecting that, because he tensed a little, but then he hugged me back. We stood like that for a few minutes, and I knew we were no longer just friends. I felt that way and I'm pretty sure he did too.

pretty good actually, however, I really miss one sentence that is about heart beat or something similar like that... hot body, warm feelings, not neccessarily but possibly a kiss.... yea just something like that :3 would round it up ^.^

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Anyway, you know I really like your writing, just felt like this chapter really has way more potential than many other ones (it's actually something like either a final or a key chapter) and therefore I really should point out what I am missing here :3

Lots of Love

[nonstopdisco]

Sweet story man Thanks a lot, I'll have to get mine posted. Are you going to write anymore?

[LadyDiamond2012]

Ha! Glad Brandon's little friend got caught. Is it over? If so, it was a great ending and an enjoyable read. Looking forward to more stories XD

[Tylerr]

bout time! favorite storys back! i wanna see something happen between brandon and him without damien o: i love this storyY!