The Noble Nine

[vafancoulo13]

Hi everyone, my names maddy and this is my first story! Give me advice, feedback, criticism, you name it!
Introduction:

Summer at the Cape is always a great time. When you’re young, there is the ocean to play in, the sand to build sandcastles in, and the wind to sail your boat in. When you’re an old lady, there are the cocktail parties to attend, the friends to visit, and the grandchildren to look after. And when you are a teenager, around seventeen or eighteen years of age, the Cape is a place where anything can happen. Parties every weekend, and during the day unlimited rays to soak up.

Laurie was the typical Cape girl. She lived in New England and went to a private boarding school during the school year. In the summer, her family retreated to their massive mansion on the Cape to relax and get away from everything. She was thin but well toned, with bronze skin from all the sun. She had dark brown hair that in the summer developed just a few streaks of light blonde, dyed that way by the sun. Her breasts were not that big, just a B – cup, but her ass made it up for it. Laurie had spent many hours in the gym toning it, and now it was the perfect size and shape, a bubbly, round, curvaceous thing was the object of many boy’s fantasies. She owned multiple bikinis and it seemed like she wore a different one every day. She was also a proud owner of several cocktail dresses, which she broke out on the weekends. She, like many Cape teenagers, enjoyed a few alcoholic beverages at the weekend parties, but unlike many of them she how to drink responsible and never got completely wasted at these parties.

It was only early June however, and not many of her friends were yet out of school. As a result, on a Friday night she was not any extravagant parties, but was rather just hanging out at her friend Scott’s house. Scott was an eighteen year old who went to the same school as Laurie, and they were also family friends. As a result they knew each other well, and had even hooked up once of twice, but nothing serious. Scott was tall, about six foot three, with bleach blonde hair and a square handsome face. His eyes, a deep blue, always twinkled with flickers or humor. His house was located right near the water, which made it an ideal place to hang out. His parents had not come down to the cape yet, and his stepsister was coming down later that night. Unlike some stepsiblings, Scott got along with both his stepsister, who was basically his age, and also his stepbrother, who was thirteen. Also at Scotts house was Jesse. Jesse was not quite as tall as Scott, but he was leaner and thinner, which almost gave him the appearance of being taller. He had dark hair and dark eyes, and was not quite as handsome as Scott but had a very sarcastic, biting sense of humor which many people, Laurie included, found hilarious. Finally there was Alec. Alec was the shortest but also the most athletic, with a lithe, muscular body. He played soccer, basketball, and baseball, and was going to be the captain of at least two, if not three, of those teams his senior year. He was something of a playboy, hooking up with nearly any and all girls, perfecting the art of the one nightstand, and was even rumored to have had a threesome with two college coeds.

Right now they were sitting around Scott’s large plasma TV that was in Scott’s basement. His basement was not a normal basement, but rather a tricked out one with sofas, a TV, and a pool table. The Euro ’12 was on and Alec, a diehard Spain fan, had demanded that they watch it. They all had beers in their hands, with the boys drinking their second but Laurie still nursing her first. Just then Cesc Fabragasc, a Spanish attacker, was fouled inside the penalty box drawing a foul. Alec immediately stood up and proclaimed in a confident voice that Fabragasc would score this. He seemed immensely happy, since this goal would put Spain up by a goal, with only fifteen minutes. In the middle of his gloating Laurie got fed up. Alec was always so confident and cocky, which was one of the reasons why many girls found him attractive but now it was just annoying. So Laurie spoke up and in a loud voice proclaimed that she didn’t think he would score this penalty.

TO BE CONTINUED

[God_Of_Masters]

First advice, even before reading the story, change the color of your intro font. Yellow upon this background = invisible. i had to highlight the entire thing to read

now reading the story

[vafancoulo13]

Thanks God_Of_Masters, I fixed that. Now for the next part!


A dead calm fell over the room. Alec turned to face her. “Are. You. Serious. You don’t think one of the best players in the world in going to make an easy penalty shot?” Laurie confidently replied that no, she did not think he would. “Are you willing to place a bet on that?” asked Alec.

Now Laurie hesitated. Alec knew way more about soccer than she did, and she was just disagreeing with her for the sake of disagreeing, she honestly had no idea of what Fabregasc would do. “What kind of bet?”

“If he scores…” said Alec, stalling as he tried to think of a good bet, “Then I get to give you a dare. If he doesn’t then you get to give me a dare.”

Normally Laurie would never do that, but this was different. Maybe it was the alcohol speaking, or maybe it was just that he was so cocky, but for whatever she agreed to the bet. Fabregasc stepped up the line, and calmly slotted home a shot in the lower right hand corner.

The room exploded, as the boys let out raucous drunken shouts and Laurie let out a defeated but drunken groan. After celebrating like he scored the goal for a minute or two, Alec sat back down and faced Laurie. “For your dare… I dare you to strip to your underwear!”

“No way!” blurted out Laurie.

“A dare is a dare!” yelled Alec, and a chorus of two other male voices agreed with him. Laurie protested vehemently for a bit, but then she caved. The alcohol was taking its toll and she reasoned that her underwear was just like a bikini. So she stood up. She was wearing white khaki shorts that hugged her ass and a loose blue blouse. She slowly, writhing her body in a mock striptease, removed her blouse, showing off her black bra and the white flesh of her breasts. She then pulled down her shorts, and watched as all eyes fell to her ass. She was wearing lacy black panties that maximized the curves of her ass. She struck a pose for a second and relished how all the boys were looking greedily at her, and then squealed and sat down again. All the boys clamored for her to strike another pose, and after a minute of playful arguing she agreed to do so. She stood up and turned away from them and then stood up tall and jutted her ass out, maximizing its roundness and appeal. The boys yelled their delight, and Laurie saw Jesse, who was easily the most innocence and least sexually experience boy, adjust himself quickly.

Laurie sat back down and they continued to watch the game. When the announcer said that there was only ten minutes left, Alec turned towards Laurie again. “You want to make another bet for a dare?”

TO BE CONTINUED

Note: I may not post for a few weeks, but by no means is this story dead!