Fiction: Her ticket through college..

WedgieDareGirl · 11-03-2010, 02:25 PM

Hey Everybody

This is my first ever story on here, so feedback would be much appreciated

Also some suggestions to what you would like to hear in the story would be great

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Her name was Elizibeth Watkins, the girl that had remained innocent the whole way through her life, and at the age of 18 had done no more that make out with a boy. And here she was, standing in a bar of a hotel waiting to meet two random men, who she had probably never even met before, and she was about to have sex with both of them.

When her and her boyfriend had first came up with the idea to put an ad in the back of a newspaper for men to order her for sex, it was only going to be temporary, after all, she only needed enough money to pay her way through college, but after tonight she was going to realise that it would last alot longer..

She sat at the edge of the empty bar awaiting the arrival of the two men that she was so nervous about meeting. She'd been waiting for ten minutes now, and was wondering whether it would be a better idea to just leave, but just as she stood up to head back to the lobby, she heard the footsteps behind her, and then felt the hand on her backside. "Ahh hello Elizibeth, so nice to see you" said one voice.
"I think tonight might just be the best night of our lives, dont you?" Said the second voice as he slowly ran his hand up the side of her thigh.

She turned around to see the faces of her two clients, and her jaw literally dropped when she noticed that one was her old History teacher from her secondry school, and the other being her old Geography teacher from her secondry school. Both of whom shed crushed on her whole way through secondry school.

This night was about to get very interesting....

firenight · 11-03-2010, 04:17 PM

go on its a good start

WedgieDareGirl · 11-04-2010, 12:39 PM

Hey

Does any one have any ideas of what everyone would like in Chapter 2?

firenight · 11-04-2010, 02:17 PM

explain how she started her way to collage

WedgieDareGirl · 11-09-2010, 01:55 PM

Well the basic plot is that she hasnt started college yet :l
I really dont know where to go with this now.

adam1963p · 11-09-2010, 03:14 PM

Hi, its a nice start, Just go with the flow. The next chapter should just follow on naturally. So describe what happens with her two former teachers

Cookie Dough · 11-09-2010, 04:26 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by adam1963p

Hi, its a nice start, Just go with the flow. The next chapter should just follow on naturally. So describe what happens with her two former teachers

I agree with Adam1936p. The stoery is intriguing.

WedgieDareGirl · 11-13-2010, 01:35 PM

Thanks everyone for the feedback!
If you read this and would like anything inparticular putting into the story then just leave a comment telling me what it is and I will try my best to fit it in

Anyway heres chapter 2...
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"Elizibeth, this has been a moment both me and Andrew here have been waiting for from the moment we layed eyes on you.." Said her Former History teacher, Michael, as they slowly walked up the staires to the hotel room.
"Really?" Was Elizibeths reply.
"Oh, Indeed.."Smirked Andrew "When we where flicking through the newspaper in the staff room, and seen your name for a Sex advert, we just couldn't resist, you see, this isn't our usual thing. But we used to notice the way you looked at us, Elizibeth, we know how you felt, we felt the same.."

That was one thing that Elizibeth was not expecting to hear..

Opening the door to the hotel room, Elizibeth was shocked when she felt Michael put his arm around her from behind and start unbuttoning her blouse, "This really is going to be an amazing night" She thought to herself.

"Shall we go through the rules of tonight, Elizibeth?" Andrew said, pulling her down to sit on his lap.
"Sure.." Came Elizibeths reply.
"Well seeing as we have you untill nine tomorrow morning, we aren't going to be sleeping, and we'll also be cutting it up into sections, and it will be especially exiting as you have no limits.." Smirked Andrew as he began to pull a peice of paper out of his pocket, She could feel him becoming hard as it started to poke into her backside..

"This is our list of what will be going on through out the duration of your stay" Said Andrew waving the paper in the air "And for the first two hours your going to be blindfolded, gagged, and tied with your hands and feet tied above you to this bar" he motioned towards a bar sticking out from the wall, it wasnt too high so she wouldn't be completely suspended in the air, but it was probably going to be uncompfortable to say the least. "And in that time we can do what ever we want" Said Andrew as he started to grow even harder, Elizibeth thought he might want her to slip of his lap now but as she tried he pulled her back, took her skirt and thong of and positioned her so his member was sliding up her cheeks and begining to poke at her anal hole through his trousers. "Comfortable?" He said with a smirk. "Michael, lets show Elizibeth what we brought with us, Shall we?"
"I thought you were never going to ask" Replied Michael as he pulled a small-ish bag out of his own bag, and emptied the contents on to the floor. "Elixibeth scanned over the objects and seen, a large vibrator, a dildo, a thong with two dildos attatched for both holes, a blind fold a ball gag, and three large rolls of duct tape, the other things Elizibeth couldn't recodnise.

A Grin appeared on Michaels face as he watced her scan over the items, he picked up the rolls of duct tape, "lets get started then"

-------------------------------------------------------------------------- sorry about the poor quality of contents and spelling errors, but I didnt know what was going to be written, and I didnt want to abandon the story so I sat down and wrote from the top of my head, I hope you like it!
Remember to leave a comment with what you think and what you want to happen next time!

WedgieDareGirl · 11-14-2010, 04:53 AM

What do you guys think of the update?

zabuza · 11-14-2010, 06:30 AM

i like it cant wait for the next enstallment

WedgieDareGirl · 11-14-2010, 06:49 AM

Thankyou

Shouldnt be too long untill the next one

Is there anything you would like to see in the story?

zabuza · 11-14-2010, 07:00 AM

i dont care if you put this in or not but i think it would be funny and make for a good story if they forgot to lock the door and somone walked in one them

WedgieDareGirl · 11-14-2010, 07:24 AM

I was actually thinking of including something similar

Cookie Dough · 11-14-2010, 08:31 AM

This is great! Please continue.

firenight · 11-14-2010, 10:14 AM

go on please i can't wait to see whats next

11-03-2010, 02:25 PM	#1
WedgieDareGirl Member Join Date: Aug 2010 Location: england Posts: 73	Her ticket through college.. Hey Everybody This is my first ever story on here, so feedback would be much appreciated Also some suggestions to what you would like to hear in the story would be great -------------------------------------------------------------------------- Her name was Elizibeth Watkins, the girl that had remained innocent the whole way through her life, and at the age of 18 had done no more that make out with a boy. And here she was, standing in a bar of a hotel waiting to meet two random men, who she had probably never even met before, and she was about to have sex with both of them. When her and her boyfriend had first came up with the idea to put an ad in the back of a newspaper for men to order her for sex, it was only going to be temporary, after all, she only needed enough money to pay her way through college, but after tonight she was going to realise that it would last alot longer.. She sat at the edge of the empty bar awaiting the arrival of the two men that she was so nervous about meeting. She'd been waiting for ten minutes now, and was wondering whether it would be a better idea to just leave, but just as she stood up to head back to the lobby, she heard the footsteps behind her, and then felt the hand on her backside. "Ahh hello Elizibeth, so nice to see you" said one voice. "I think tonight might just be the best night of our lives, dont you?" Said the second voice as he slowly ran his hand up the side of her thigh. She turned around to see the faces of her two clients, and her jaw literally dropped when she noticed that one was her old History teacher from her secondry school, and the other being her old Geography teacher from her secondry school. Both of whom shed crushed on her whole way through secondry school. This night was about to get very interesting....

11-04-2010, 12:39 PM	#3
WedgieDareGirl Member Join Date: Aug 2010 Location: england Posts: 73	Help? Hey Does any one have any ideas of what everyone would like in Chapter 2? __________________ Hey 14/F/UK Likes: Wedgies, Ice, Anal Dislikes: Messy, Public Limits: Poo, Pee, Family. I dont have msn ect.. so dont ask I dont give pics or videos so dont waste your time asking me.

11-09-2010, 01:55 PM	#5
WedgieDareGirl Member Join Date: Aug 2010 Location: england Posts: 73	Well the basic plot is that she hasnt started college yet :l I really dont know where to go with this now. __________________ Hey 14/F/UK Likes: Wedgies, Ice, Anal Dislikes: Messy, Public Limits: Poo, Pee, Family. I dont have msn ect.. so dont ask I dont give pics or videos so dont waste your time asking me.

11-09-2010, 03:14 PM	#6
adam1963p Member Join Date: Sep 2010 Location: Scotland UK Posts: 37	Hi, its a nice start, Just go with the flow. The next chapter should just follow on naturally. So describe what happens with her two former teachers __________________ Love being dominated by woman,but would accept a Master. Foot and body worship.Nudity,public if possible Limits Nothing illegal. piercing, tattoo, hair removal or extreme pain

11-13-2010, 01:35 PM	#8
WedgieDareGirl Member Join Date: Aug 2010 Location: england Posts: 73	Chapter 2.. Thanks everyone for the feedback! If you read this and would like anything inparticular putting into the story then just leave a comment telling me what it is and I will try my best to fit it in Anyway heres chapter 2... -------------------------------------------------------------------------- "Elizibeth, this has been a moment both me and Andrew here have been waiting for from the moment we layed eyes on you.." Said her Former History teacher, Michael, as they slowly walked up the staires to the hotel room. "Really?" Was Elizibeths reply. "Oh, Indeed.."Smirked Andrew "When we where flicking through the newspaper in the staff room, and seen your name for a Sex advert, we just couldn't resist, you see, this isn't our usual thing. But we used to notice the way you looked at us, Elizibeth, we know how you felt, we felt the same.." That was one thing that Elizibeth was not expecting to hear.. Opening the door to the hotel room, Elizibeth was shocked when she felt Michael put his arm around her from behind and start unbuttoning her blouse, "This really is going to be an amazing night" She thought to herself. "Shall we go through the rules of tonight, Elizibeth?" Andrew said, pulling her down to sit on his lap. "Sure.." Came Elizibeths reply. "Well seeing as we have you untill nine tomorrow morning, we aren't going to be sleeping, and we'll also be cutting it up into sections, and it will be especially exiting as you have no limits.." Smirked Andrew as he began to pull a peice of paper out of his pocket, She could feel him becoming hard as it started to poke into her backside.. "This is our list of what will be going on through out the duration of your stay" Said Andrew waving the paper in the air "And for the first two hours your going to be blindfolded, gagged, and tied with your hands and feet tied above you to this bar" he motioned towards a bar sticking out from the wall, it wasnt too high so she wouldn't be completely suspended in the air, but it was probably going to be uncompfortable to say the least. "And in that time we can do what ever we want" Said Andrew as he started to grow even harder, Elizibeth thought he might want her to slip of his lap now but as she tried he pulled her back, took her skirt and thong of and positioned her so his member was sliding up her cheeks and begining to poke at her anal hole through his trousers. "Comfortable?" He said with a smirk. "Michael, lets show Elizibeth what we brought with us, Shall we?" "I thought you were never going to ask" Replied Michael as he pulled a small-ish bag out of his own bag, and emptied the contents on to the floor. "Elixibeth scanned over the objects and seen, a large vibrator, a dildo, a thong with two dildos attatched for both holes, a blind fold a ball gag, and three large rolls of duct tape, the other things Elizibeth couldn't recodnise. A Grin appeared on Michaels face as he watced her scan over the items, he picked up the rolls of duct tape, "lets get started then" -------------------------------------------------------------------------- sorry about the poor quality of contents and spelling errors, but I didnt know what was going to be written, and I didnt want to abandon the story so I sat down and wrote from the top of my head, I hope you like it! Remember to leave a comment with what you think and what you want to happen next time! __________________ Hey 14/F/UK Likes: Wedgies, Ice, Anal Dislikes: Messy, Public Limits: Poo, Pee, Family. I dont have msn ect.. so dont ask I dont give pics or videos so dont waste your time asking me.

11-03-2010, 04:17 PM	#2
firenight getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: mi Posts: 370	go on its a good start

11-04-2010, 02:17 PM	#4
firenight getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: mi Posts: 370	explain how she started her way to collage

11-14-2010, 04:53 AM	#9
WedgieDareGirl Member Join Date: Aug 2010 Location: england Posts: 73	So? What do you guys think of the update? __________________ Hey 14/F/UK Likes: Wedgies, Ice, Anal Dislikes: Messy, Public Limits: Poo, Pee, Family. I dont have msn ect.. so dont ask I dont give pics or videos so dont waste your time asking me.

11-14-2010, 06:30 AM	#10
zabuza getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Mar 2010 Location: why do u want to know Posts: 300	i like it cant wait for the next enstallment __________________ likes:x dressing,minor anal,bdsm,slight pain, minor public limits: major public,major pain,pictures, videos,my diabetes pm me if you want dares or pm me dares if you want

11-14-2010, 06:49 AM	#11
WedgieDareGirl Member Join Date: Aug 2010 Location: england Posts: 73	Thankyou Shouldnt be too long untill the next one Is there anything you would like to see in the story? __________________ Hey 14/F/UK Likes: Wedgies, Ice, Anal Dislikes: Messy, Public Limits: Poo, Pee, Family. I dont have msn ect.. so dont ask I dont give pics or videos so dont waste your time asking me.

11-14-2010, 07:00 AM	#12
zabuza getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Mar 2010 Location: why do u want to know Posts: 300	i dont care if you put this in or not but i think it would be funny and make for a good story if they forgot to lock the door and somone walked in one them __________________ likes:x dressing,minor anal,bdsm,slight pain, minor public limits: major public,major pain,pictures, videos,my diabetes pm me if you want dares or pm me dares if you want

11-14-2010, 07:24 AM	#13
WedgieDareGirl Member Join Date: Aug 2010 Location: england Posts: 73	I was actually thinking of including something similar __________________ Hey 14/F/UK Likes: Wedgies, Ice, Anal Dislikes: Messy, Public Limits: Poo, Pee, Family. I dont have msn ect.. so dont ask I dont give pics or videos so dont waste your time asking me.

11-14-2010, 08:31 AM	#14
Cookie Dough Junior Member Join Date: Nov 2010 Posts: 24	This is great! Please continue.

11-14-2010, 10:14 AM	#15
firenight getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: mi Posts: 370	go on please i can't wait to see whats next