Fiction: Camp Lizard Lake!

daremaster 1 · 06-05-2011, 05:50 AM

Well this is my first story so any helpful tips will be well appreciated!

John: Blonde hair, blue eyes. 6.3, and skinny
Luke:Brown hair, hazel eyes, 6.1, and skinny
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"Wake up John, you don't want to be late do you" is what I heard as I slowly opened my eyes.

"Hey mom" I said

"Hi honey ,get dressed and come down stairs for breakfast, OK " My mom exclaimed

Half asleep I muttered "ok"

So I slowly got out of bed and put on a pair of jeans and my favorite t-shirt and went downstairs. When I came down stairs I found my mom was making eggs and bacon.

I asked"Why did you make my favorite breakfast?"

She said " Since you are going to camp for 3 weeks I thought I should make your favorite breakfast"

My mom gave me my plate and I ate it all and my mom suggested 2nd but I said no thank you. I waited for my mom to eat so I went out back to play some basketball. A few minutes pasted and My mom came out and said

"It's time to go"

" Let me get my bag and I will be right down" I explained

So I ran upstairs and grabbed my bag and ran to my moms car. Eventually I get to camp Lizard Lake and got my bag out of the trunk and walked to the gate.....
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Sorry if it is kinda slow but it will be getting faster!

daremaster 1 · 06-05-2011, 06:41 AM

and signed in. They told me to go to the cafeteria to find out what room I was in. So I told my mom goodbye and hugged her and headed off inside. I started looking for the cafeteria and could not find it so I just asked a camp counselor and I asked

" May you happen to know where the cafeteria is?"

She said " I sure do, you go straight down this road turn left the turn to your first right.

"Thank you so much" I said and headed down the road. I don't know anybody here but there are over 500 kids here so hopefully I meet some people to hang with. So I got to the cafeteria where it is really crowded and they where calling names and where they are staying. It was about thirty minutes until they said John Hargies you are in dorm B and in room 104. So I headed down where everyone else was and found that I was already next to dorm A and I can see dorm B so I walk to down and went inside. I am on the 3rd floor so I pressed the elevator button and walked in. It started going up and stopped so I got out and started walking down the hall and saw 100,101,102,103, and finally 104. So I opened the door with the card that the person at the gate gave me and went inside. When I walked in there was a person standing at one of they night stands and unpacking his cloths. He turned around and said

"Hi I'm Luke"

"I am John"

It is 5:00 know and me and Luke are done unpacking and have already ate.

"I am so bored do you got any video games with you?" Luke asked.

"No" John muttered.

"What do you want to do" Luke asked

I thought for a little while and said " I am not sure if you are up for it butt we could play truth or dare"

"I am up for it" Luke said happily

"Ok lets get started truth or dare?" I asked

"I will start off with a truth" He explained

" What is the most sexual thing you have done?" I said

"I once laid in bed naked with my girlfriend" He said quietly

"Truth or dare" he said

" I'm not going to be scared like you, I choose dare" I said proudly

"Ok wise guy, you must run to the end of the hall and back in just your underwear" He said with an evil voice.

I said " Piece of cake" and striped to my underwear and started running I got to the end of the hall and turned around to find three boys staring at him. He passed them and ran into the room.

"Done" I yelled

"Truth or dare" I asked

"Dare this time" He said

"I thought for a while and said you must strip dance right in front of me" I said

He stared at me......

Tylerr · 07-01-2011, 04:33 PM

Hopefully this story isnt dead because I see a lot of potential. But if you decide to (make the oh-so-wise choice to) continue the story, hopefully you wont go with the typical quick-in-bed routine but I'm looking forward to more (please) [:

xXx
Tyler

blahblah9 · 09-22-2011, 12:24 PM

plz keep posting this has allot of potential

Aliciai<3u · 03-11-2012, 03:59 PM

Badly found it after a month of looking I found a story by you thought you might be good a writing and I was right please continue

daremaster 1 · 03-11-2012, 04:24 PM

Should I really keep wrighting this? I did this forever ago and it really isnt all that good. If I was to add to this I may just start all over agian on a new thread so I could improve my grammer, change some small details, e.t.c. Im just not good at wrighting. :[

Aliciai<3u · 03-12-2012, 02:51 PM

I think it's good and should be continued please continue thanks

Alicia

(last post by Sean)

Luke.m · 03-12-2012, 04:26 PM

Please.continue its really goos

daremaster 1 · 03-12-2012, 07:46 PM

Ok, I might restart this. It may be a while though.

Im going to try!

06-05-2011, 05:50 AM	#1
daremaster 1 getDare God Join Date: Apr 2011 Location: <3 Posts: 3,032	Camp Lizard Lake! Well this is my first story so any helpful tips will be well appreciated! John: Blonde hair, blue eyes. 6.3, and skinny Luke:Brown hair, hazel eyes, 6.1, and skinny _____________________________________________ "Wake up John, you don't want to be late do you" is what I heard as I slowly opened my eyes. "Hey mom" I said "Hi honey ,get dressed and come down stairs for breakfast, OK " My mom exclaimed Half asleep I muttered "ok" So I slowly got out of bed and put on a pair of jeans and my favorite t-shirt and went downstairs. When I came down stairs I found my mom was making eggs and bacon. I asked"Why did you make my favorite breakfast?" She said " Since you are going to camp for 3 weeks I thought I should make your favorite breakfast" My mom gave me my plate and I ate it all and my mom suggested 2nd but I said no thank you. I waited for my mom to eat so I went out back to play some basketball. A few minutes pasted and My mom came out and said "It's time to go" " Let me get my bag and I will be right down" I explained So I ran upstairs and grabbed my bag and ran to my moms car. Eventually I get to camp Lizard Lake and got my bag out of the trunk and walked to the gate..... .................................................. .................... Sorry if it is kinda slow but it will be getting faster!

06-05-2011, 06:41 AM	#2
daremaster 1 getDare God Join Date: Apr 2011 Location: <3 Posts: 3,032	and signed in. They told me to go to the cafeteria to find out what room I was in. So I told my mom goodbye and hugged her and headed off inside. I started looking for the cafeteria and could not find it so I just asked a camp counselor and I asked " May you happen to know where the cafeteria is?" She said " I sure do, you go straight down this road turn left the turn to your first right. "Thank you so much" I said and headed down the road. I don't know anybody here but there are over 500 kids here so hopefully I meet some people to hang with. So I got to the cafeteria where it is really crowded and they where calling names and where they are staying. It was about thirty minutes until they said John Hargies you are in dorm B and in room 104. So I headed down where everyone else was and found that I was already next to dorm A and I can see dorm B so I walk to down and went inside. I am on the 3rd floor so I pressed the elevator button and walked in. It started going up and stopped so I got out and started walking down the hall and saw 100,101,102,103, and finally 104. So I opened the door with the card that the person at the gate gave me and went inside. When I walked in there was a person standing at one of they night stands and unpacking his cloths. He turned around and said "Hi I'm Luke" "I am John" It is 5:00 know and me and Luke are done unpacking and have already ate. "I am so bored do you got any video games with you?" Luke asked. "No" John muttered. "What do you want to do" Luke asked I thought for a little while and said " I am not sure if you are up for it butt we could play truth or dare" "I am up for it" Luke said happily "Ok lets get started truth or dare?" I asked "I will start off with a truth" He explained " What is the most sexual thing you have done?" I said "I once laid in bed naked with my girlfriend" He said quietly "Truth or dare" he said " I'm not going to be scared like you, I choose dare" I said proudly "Ok wise guy, you must run to the end of the hall and back in just your underwear" He said with an evil voice. I said " Piece of cake" and striped to my underwear and started running I got to the end of the hall and turned around to find three boys staring at him. He passed them and ran into the room. "Done" I yelled "Truth or dare" I asked "Dare this time" He said "I thought for a while and said you must strip dance right in front of me" I said He stared at me...... Last edited by daremaster 1; 06-05-2011 at 06:43 AM.

07-01-2011, 04:33 PM	#3
Tylerr Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2011 Location: Narnia Posts: 108	Hopefully this story isnt dead because I see a lot of potential. But if you decide to (make the oh-so-wise choice to) continue the story, hopefully you wont go with the typical quick-in-bed routine but I'm looking forward to more (please) [: xXx Tyler __________________ All have been alive, but only few have lived Tyler [: Lets play Truth or Dare! PM me or Email me! Email me @ [email protected]

03-11-2012, 03:59 PM	#5
Aliciai<3u Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2011 Location: England(you know the place where out football sucks) Posts: 113	Badly found it after a month of looking I found a story by you thought you might be good a writing and I was right please continue __________________ Sex: male country: England innocence: none sexuality: bi I am not currently looking for a master or a slave I am epic fail Please say yes to grammer Thank you Sean Viking- DEATH OR GLORY Me/you- death please mister

03-12-2012, 02:51 PM	#7
Aliciai<3u Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2011 Location: England(you know the place where out football sucks) Posts: 113	I think it's good and should be continued please continue thanks Alicia (last post by Sean) __________________ Sex: male country: England innocence: none sexuality: bi I am not currently looking for a master or a slave I am epic fail Please say yes to grammer Thank you Sean Viking- DEATH OR GLORY Me/you- death please mister

09-22-2011, 12:24 PM	#4
blahblah9 Member Join Date: Sep 2010 Location: uk Posts: 46	plz keep posting this has allot of potential

03-11-2012, 04:24 PM	#6
daremaster 1 getDare God Join Date: Apr 2011 Location: <3 Posts: 3,032	Should I really keep wrighting this? I did this forever ago and it really isnt all that good. If I was to add to this I may just start all over agian on a new thread so I could improve my grammer, change some small details, e.t.c. Im just not good at wrighting. :[

03-12-2012, 04:26 PM	#8
Luke.m Member Join Date: Jan 2012 Posts: 34	Please.continue its really goos __________________ *I WAS BORN THIS WAY*

03-12-2012, 07:46 PM	#9
daremaster 1 getDare God Join Date: Apr 2011 Location: <3 Posts: 3,032	Ok, I might restart this. It may be a while though. Im going to try!