Fiction: (MxM) A year to remember... - Page 4

Saphir · 09-16-2011, 02:36 PM

Nice ending!

I agree with Carl about description of feelings and how they touch and all that romantic stuff... could've been longer :P

It's very nice tho!

Love

alex987 · 09-18-2011, 02:08 PM

This is going somewhere very nice...

Only criticism (as you asked for some) would be to be sure to keep filling us in on the emotional side of things. Just a minor criticism though.
Otherwise, keep it up!! ;D

Dylan xX · 09-18-2011, 07:06 PM

Niiiiiiceeeee!

Honestly I thought in that last chap, the worst part would be the transitions, but you pulled it off quite nicely. I would say not quite enough detail, but still enough that I thoroughly enjoyed it. Great job Koty, great job

-Dylsterr, a proud consultant :3

Koty920 · 09-18-2011, 07:14 PM

Thank you SOOOO much to everyone that commented on my story, Especially you, Dylan (Sorry, everyone else, he's #1 to me). I really appreciate the criticism. Thank you for helping me help you help me all. (Props to the first person who can figure out where that quote comes from (hint: I changed a word or 2 to prevent you from just googling it)).

Anyways, I don't know when exactly, I'll have the next chapter up. Hopefully by the weekend. Marching band is taking all my time.

Thanks for reading my story so far. Ya'll come back, now.

AMGWallHax · 09-18-2011, 07:27 PM

Love this story, thank Dylan for indirectly directing me towards reading this. Love it so far!

Koty920 · 09-23-2011, 12:56 PM

Hey guys. Sorry about the delays. Just a quick update: I'm gonna be pretty busy this weekend. I'll try to have the next chapter up by Sunday, but I can't guarantee anything. At the very latest, the next chapter should be up by about Wednesday. I promise I'll do my best to get it up soon. Have I lied to you? (pause)...I mean, in this room?

Anyone know where that quote's from?

Kewai · 09-23-2011, 09:22 PM

No Idea where the quote is for but I am waiting eagerly for your next update

daremaster 1 · 09-24-2011, 08:51 AM

Update it! It is just so good.

kinky · 09-29-2011, 01:17 AM

Good so far, keep up the good work.

Koty920 · 10-10-2011, 06:41 PM

Hey guys, I'm sorry it's been almost 2 weeks, but I literally have 2 days a week free that I don't have marching band practice or competitions. I've definitely not given up on this story, I just need a little time. Sorry!!!!

Kewai · 10-10-2011, 06:49 PM

I can't wait, Take your time and dont feel rushed. This story is great

and246 · 10-10-2011, 10:04 PM

Thanks for sharing, enjoyed reading this

Jason242 · 10-20-2011, 09:46 AM

Good story. Please keep it up

Jason

Koty920 · 10-20-2011, 02:37 PM

hey, I'm SO SO SO sorry that i haven't posted. Drumline is KILLING ME (but on the bright side, we did win 2nd place in music and 1st place drumline at our competition

). Anyways, I'm not sure that I'll be able to update until band season is over in a couple of weeks. I'll do what I can, but I'm stuck between a rock and a hard on (wait did I get that phrase right? oh well...). Thanks so much for your patience.

Much love,
Koty

Kewai · 10-20-2011, 02:44 PM

Cant wait to see an update...hope everything is going fine :3

Love
Kewai <3

09-18-2011, 02:08 PM	#47
alex987 Member Join Date: Apr 2011 Location: not in North America ;P Posts: 93	This is going somewhere very nice... Only criticism (as you asked for some) would be to be sure to keep filling us in on the emotional side of things. Just a minor criticism though. Otherwise, keep it up!! ;D __________________ 14/Male/American/German ^^ <3

09-18-2011, 07:06 PM	#48
Dylan xX Distinguished Member Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: U.S.A Posts: 934 Blog Entries: 7	Niiiiiiceeeee! Honestly I thought in that last chap, the worst part would be the transitions, but you pulled it off quite nicely. I would say not quite enough detail, but still enough that I thoroughly enjoyed it. Great job Koty, great job -Dylsterr, a proud consultant :3 __________________ Gone

09-18-2011, 07:14 PM	#49
Koty920 Member Join Date: Jan 2011 Location: A room with white padded walls Posts: 67	Thank you SOOOO much to everyone that commented on my story, Especially you, Dylan (Sorry, everyone else, he's #1 to me). I really appreciate the criticism. Thank you for helping me help you help me all. (Props to the first person who can figure out where that quote comes from (hint: I changed a word or 2 to prevent you from just googling it)). Anyways, I don't know when exactly, I'll have the next chapter up. Hopefully by the weekend. Marching band is taking all my time. Thanks for reading my story so far. Ya'll come back, now. __________________ Koty-14-M-USA I officially LOVE you, Dylan! This webpage is printed on 100% recycled electrons.

09-18-2011, 07:27 PM	#50
AMGWallHax Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2010 Location: In your mind. Stealing your thoughts. Posts: 156	Love this story, thank Dylan for indirectly directing me towards reading this. Love it so far! __________________ Long since inactive but I still hop on for memories. PM me if you want to get back in contact People I (used to) skype with: Dylan xX, seanpuppy, Wowwie, Kewai, Saphir, LilAngel. Thanks for the memories. <-- Ditto's cute aint it?

09-23-2011, 12:56 PM	#51
Koty920 Member Join Date: Jan 2011 Location: A room with white padded walls Posts: 67	Hey guys. Sorry about the delays. Just a quick update: I'm gonna be pretty busy this weekend. I'll try to have the next chapter up by Sunday, but I can't guarantee anything. At the very latest, the next chapter should be up by about Wednesday. I promise I'll do my best to get it up soon. Have I lied to you? (pause)...I mean, in this room? Anyone know where that quote's from? __________________ Koty-14-M-USA I officially LOVE you, Dylan! This webpage is printed on 100% recycled electrons.

09-16-2011, 02:36 PM	#46
Saphir getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Dec 2010 Posts: 425	Nice ending! I agree with Carl about description of feelings and how they touch and all that romantic stuff... could've been longer :P It's very nice tho! Love

09-23-2011, 09:22 PM	#52
Kewai getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Oct 2010 Posts: 372 Blog Entries: 8	No Idea where the quote is for but I am waiting eagerly for your next update __________________ 18/M/Bi/New Zealand

09-24-2011, 08:51 AM	#53
daremaster 1 getDare God Join Date: Apr 2011 Location: <3 Posts: 3,032	Update it! It is just so good.

09-29-2011, 01:17 AM	#54
kinky getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: England! Posts: 300	Good so far, keep up the good work. __________________ 16 / Male / UK PM me as many truths as you like, I'll answer them no matter what Edit: (22/05/2016) - Last activity was in 2013. I've grown up now :O Edit edit: 23/01/2018 - Wow, happy to see the forum still alive. Amazing nostalgia and how young I was.

10-10-2011, 06:41 PM	#55
Koty920 Member Join Date: Jan 2011 Location: A room with white padded walls Posts: 67	Hey guys, I'm sorry it's been almost 2 weeks, but I literally have 2 days a week free that I don't have marching band practice or competitions. I've definitely not given up on this story, I just need a little time. Sorry!!!! __________________ Koty-14-M-USA I officially LOVE you, Dylan! This webpage is printed on 100% recycled electrons.

10-10-2011, 06:49 PM	#56
Kewai getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Oct 2010 Posts: 372 Blog Entries: 8	I can't wait, Take your time and dont feel rushed. This story is great __________________ 18/M/Bi/New Zealand

10-10-2011, 10:04 PM	#57
and246 Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2011 Location: Best coast Posts: 134	Thanks for sharing, enjoyed reading this __________________ Sub guy into humiliation, B.B., cbt, more. Kik sparkyboy236

10-20-2011, 09:46 AM	#58
Jason242 Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Ireland Posts: 137	Good story. Please keep it up Jason __________________ 18/m/Eire Check out my story! An Amazing Weekend For 4 Boys -------------------------------------------------------- Likes: Online TorD, Roleplay, Underwear play, Exposure, Masturbate Maybe:Mild pain, Anal play Dislike: Scat, pee, Loud, Messy, Out of room/Public, Showing face Spoiler: I'll play TorD online with most people(Skype ONLY, and with webcam!). PM me your ASL and Skype name. :D

10-20-2011, 02:37 PM	#59
Koty920 Member Join Date: Jan 2011 Location: A room with white padded walls Posts: 67	hey, I'm SO SO SO sorry that i haven't posted. Drumline is KILLING ME (but on the bright side, we did win 2nd place in music and 1st place drumline at our competition ). Anyways, I'm not sure that I'll be able to update until band season is over in a couple of weeks. I'll do what I can, but I'm stuck between a rock and a hard on (wait did I get that phrase right? oh well...). Thanks so much for your patience. Much love, Koty __________________ Koty-14-M-USA I officially LOVE you, Dylan! This webpage is printed on 100% recycled electrons.

10-20-2011, 02:44 PM	#60
Kewai getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Oct 2010 Posts: 372 Blog Entries: 8	Cant wait to see an update...hope everything is going fine :3 Love Kewai <3 __________________ 18/M/Bi/New Zealand