Fiction: Chris and Alex, the path to friendship. MxM [Fiction]. - Page 5

Kewai · 10-10-2011, 12:57 AM

Okay....that was an amazing chapter but I am going to be a bit critical of it because...I feel like it. I thought it brushed past some stuff ALOT like the feelings that have been building up, the setting at home, the sister and dinner and a few other factors. I will tell you more on MSN. It was still a great update though. Second complaint, why the f$#k did you not tell me this was uploaded....I love your story and cant belive that I didnt read it the second you posted it.

Finally, The chapter was a bit long.....but every so often a long chapter is really nice

Great work dude (talk in MSN)

Saphir · 10-10-2011, 04:27 AM

maaaan I just want them to be happy, kissing on their little clearing!

Well, it's what life is like tho, I don't want things to be always good... in stories at least.

Alex reaction (about what he heard before falling asleep) is a bit confusing tho...

Love

10-10-2011, 12:57 AM	#61
Kewai getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Oct 2010 Posts: 372 Blog Entries: 8	Okay....that was an amazing chapter but I am going to be a bit critical of it because...I feel like it. I thought it brushed past some stuff ALOT like the feelings that have been building up, the setting at home, the sister and dinner and a few other factors. I will tell you more on MSN. It was still a great update though. Second complaint, why the f$#k did you not tell me this was uploaded....I love your story and cant belive that I didnt read it the second you posted it. Finally, The chapter was a bit long.....but every so often a long chapter is really nice Great work dude (talk in MSN) __________________ 18/M/Bi/New Zealand

10-10-2011, 04:27 AM	#62
Saphir getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Dec 2010 Posts: 425	maaaan I just want them to be happy, kissing on their little clearing! Well, it's what life is like tho, I don't want things to be always good... in stories at least. Alex reaction (about what he heard before falling asleep) is a bit confusing tho... Love